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machievelli

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Posted in: excerpt from Faerie IV
  machievelli
12-30-2008, 12:15 PM
#1
A little backstory: Rob and Midori, a contact team meeting the Faerie are redirected because half a dozen faerie were trapped aboard a space shuttle heading into orbit. The crew of the station discovered them, and instead of reporting them, joined th...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-30-2008, 11:22 PM
#149
*Breaks into wild applause* mach, if this doesn't get picked for the 2008 Readers' Choice Awards, I'll eat my hat. I think that final chapter was the best one yet, the most intense in terms of psychological impact. My jaw hit the floor when I realize...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-30-2008, 12:35 PM
#147
I'm a lurker? Okay, so be it....:D If you were a lurker, the vote would have counted. You've read and commented on every section so far....  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-30-2008, 11:01 AM
#145
Aw well...what can I be then? The other newspaper critic?:D Well, I'll read anyways:D Sorry, Commander. I said five new. The one vote I did count only commented once. I'm trying to get the lurkers off the fence this once...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-30-2008, 1:02 AM
#143
Excellent next chapter, Mach!! You have shaped the characters and plot so much so that I can draw similarities to other historical events and how they repeat in Human nature. Excellent work, Mach! I look forward to more! Now, for my fanlike threats....  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-29-2008, 10:16 PM
#140
Interesting turn of events. You really portrayed Revan's personality well in this chapter. You showed her as someone that is confident, knowledgable, and a great leader. Looking forward to the next installment!The Senatorial comment hearkened back to...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-29-2008, 6:14 PM
#139
*Ahem* <fan!> LOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT!!!!!!!! I want MOAR! Rawr! ;) </fan!> EXCELLENT set of chapters, Mach. The battles were very vivid, the emotions and confusion of that kind of a skirmish well protrayed, even the characters we hated we...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-28-2008, 11:55 PM
#136
Why 5 people? last was four....  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-28-2008, 8:19 PM
#134
This isn't a complaint; I think you've wrapped up this story pretty well as it is. If it were your intent to finish the story where it stands... then that is exactly what you should do. The more story you add, the more it detracts from the quality un...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-28-2008, 7:50 PM
#132
No, that's not fair! [/fan] to Quote David Bowie from Labyrinth, I'd like to know what yu're using for a basis for comparison....  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-28-2008, 5:54 PM
#130
All right, if threats are possible I will agree if five new people complain...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-28-2008, 5:19 PM
#128
Interesting turn of events. You really portrayed Revan's personality well in this chapter. You showed her as someone that is confident, knowledgable, and a great leader. Looking forward to the next installment!I had actually thought of ending this he...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-27-2008, 2:20 AM
#127
A nice chapter, Mach, however, as I read, I discovered a discrepancy in the Point of View (moving from third person to first person): at first, when Revan's tale is being told, it is in third person, however, several sections (the following, specific...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-27-2008, 12:23 AM
#124
Danika sighed, and Merisa looked at her. “It seems perhaps you have a story as well, Mand’alor.” The younger woman poured a cup of her own full of tihaar. “I will tell of betrayal revealed, and the aftermath. Everyone wonders...  [Read More]
Posted in: Martial arts: Or; Fighting without weapons
  machievelli
12-28-2008, 11:46 AM
#3
Oh crap. At this stage it's starting to look like I'm running around second guessing all your threads, possibly confusing them, which is not at all what I want to do. From early teens to my late twenties I was a tremendous enthusiast. I studied to a...  [Read More]
Posted in: How to understand the Mandalorians:
  machievelli
12-28-2008, 1:04 AM
#22
I apolegise, I didn't mean to detract any of your excellent and highly informative threads Machievelli, only simply to participate in any possible expansion upon the useful writers' foundations you've set. The information you gave was cogent and info...  [Read More]
Posted in: How to understand the Mandalorians:
  machievelli
12-27-2008, 10:32 PM
#20
Wait, Tora Tora Tora wasn't propaganda. It was told from both the Japanese and American views, it wasn't really biased either. It was simply the telling of a certain battle during WW2, oh, that and Pearl Harbor wasn't the best movie I've seen, probab...  [Read More]
Posted in: How to understand the Mandalorians:
  machievelli
12-27-2008, 10:26 PM
#18
yes. The training by the US was fictionalized true....  [Read More]
Posted in: How to understand the Mandalorians:
  machievelli
12-27-2008, 10:03 PM
#16
Well I'd offer one correction in the Samurai description in terms of referencing international US Hollywood propaganda such as The Last Samurai. The United States had nothing to do with Meiji's restructuring of the military, the army was modelled aft...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
  machievelli
12-27-2008, 10:19 PM
#151
Hm, I'm a little confused by your wording. I meant that there is no 'destroyer, support type' (With the exception of the destroyer escort class) because you sent what you had. The Destroyer escort was developed during WWII because it took only 3/4s a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
  machievelli
12-27-2008, 7:37 PM
#149
I hope you won't take offense machievelli, I'd like to offer a mere handful of technical corrections. To avoid a wall of words post, I'll place a "to be continued" here. Why should I be upset? The descriptions I used for unit size was base...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic]An Inverse of Stars: Part Three
  machievelli
01-01-2009, 12:37 PM
#6
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Posted in: [FIC] Star Wars: KOTOR - Rebirth
  machievelli
01-01-2009, 12:36 PM
#7
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Posted in: KOTOR III: The Wrath of War
  machievelli
01-01-2009, 12:35 PM
#16
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Posted in: [FIC] Star Wars Outer Rim War : Sith Frontline
  machievelli
01-01-2009, 12:34 PM
#5
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