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Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 8:06 AM
#42
oh yeh and you have to put THE END at THE END of the thread. Well that's THE END of this thread. EDIT I've changed my mind the name of the sequel will be called Kin's Demise...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 7:55 AM
#39
ok thanks, I just put the whole thing in one thread and put [FIN] right?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 7:45 AM
#37
Thank you BFA. I guess it was rushed at the end and i won't bother trying to put it in the Archives ai it's not good enough. However the sequel will be good start to finish. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 7:34 AM
#35
There will be two sequels to the book coming maybe after i've sent a few other shortie fics but here it is!!!!! Chapter 7 The final showdown “Clones go join Jedi Roy and tell him we have to do something!” “Yes Jedi Corakin.” “With two...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 6:51 AM
#33
From the first post what you wrote and up through to the one now, its been an incredible improvement. My piece of advice, is to really listen as to what these people are saying. They know what they are talking about :D Would be better if you have a '...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 5:37 AM
#31
ok sorry then. It's just it's going on about books which i have looked at and considered buying but i just want to see what they actually think of the book that's all. Chapter 6 Kids in war “Happy Birthday Corakin!” everyone called when he ste...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 5:17 PM
#28
here some more less action packed but has a suprise unless you've figured it out. Chapter 5 The deadly secret “Twelve minutes and twenty second that’s the quickest out of the lot” said Master Elena quite happy. “But it’s not the qui...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 4:46 PM
#27
aha ok well i do have an new shortie fic in the works which will be a lot better and hey i've done pretty good for a begginer. I'm glad you like it and i WILL work on it. :) Thanks Fuu....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 2:03 PM
#25
here sorry for double posting but part 5 :) Chapter 4 Jedi Course After explaining the long, long story they were all transported to Mos Eisly including Kin. They had to go in pairs as Master Elena said something about a course they had to ta...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 1:30 PM
#24
ok i'll slow it down a bit the next chapter is not action packed but will have a bit of tension....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 12:35 PM
#22
Also, try putting it throug MS Word. It will pick up most mistakes :) Well i don't know what it is and plus i don't have it but anyway heres part 4 hope this is better. :) Chapter 3 Roy in Trouble. They had been following their senses for ten...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 11:27 AM
#20
It could use a lot more work. Also, it's very hard to judge from such a small snippet. Be careful not to repeat words (look at the use of then). Also, use more comma's! Rate: 2 Ok i see the problem there..... i'll use more comma's but part 4 is wh...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] My star wars book.
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 4:11 AM
#18
I found that reading other fics helps me to get inspired. It reminds me that writing isn’t just about good plotlines, it’s also about how you lead your reader through the story. How you draw people into your characters, and make them think about...  [Read More]
Posted in: The One Year Thread 2007: XWA's Celibatic Boogaloo
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 7:00 AM
#115
IMplayed ROTS game today on PS2 boy i havn't played that in a while but it's a good game. My sis is coming over and should be good. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Battlefront III - Supah Thread! [Retired]
  Daft Adidas
01-15-2007, 12:31 PM
#630
yeh, is that an Ion Cannon you got there in your sig?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Battlefront III - Supah Thread! [Retired]
  Daft Adidas
01-15-2007, 3:20 AM
#628
I still think the commando thing would work, but anyway how about if there were space to ground maybe there could be anti aircraft guns on land that can reach space. :vsd: Yes, yes, yes! Thar would b fun and you can shoot at cruisers aswell!!!!!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Battlefront III - Supah Thread! [Retired]
  Daft Adidas
01-14-2007, 4:28 PM
#624
That's a stupid place to start. Start on the gameplay and everything else, then graphics. I'm just saying get better graphics that's all no need to get wound up....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Battlefront III - Supah Thread! [Retired]
  Daft Adidas
01-14-2007, 4:04 PM
#622
hmm it not batllefrontish and we want it to stay as the game not over expand. The graphics could be a bit better for a start!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Battlefront III - Supah Thread! [Retired]
  Daft Adidas
01-14-2007, 4:13 AM
#620
MAybe you could have the commando thing where you are leading a group of commandos on mission mode. so you are the only four so you have to be able to fight like an entier army. :twogun: :blast5: :vsd: Or just have the commando free noobs on levels t...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Battlefront III - Supah Thread! [Retired]
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 4:23 AM
#615
if its too much for one commando to carry one could have the mines dets ant rocket launcher, another maybe has fussion cutter health ammo blaster pistol and so on but it would be cool if they had a deployable e-web ooo or 3 recon droids. or a time bo...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Battlefront III - Supah Thread! [Retired]
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 5:00 PM
#610
bassically they have everything! Woohoo! Yeh being an officer would be cool ordering your mates around i mean you can kind off but not really properly. :blaze6: :tank1: :fire11:...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Battlefront III - Supah Thread! [Retired]
  Daft Adidas
01-12-2007, 4:27 PM
#608
yes, yes, yes!! Oh ere's another thing kind of already mentioned. You are an oridianry soldier. Uh oh! Darth Vader! Kill him. You can shoot him alone or you can (new feature for BF3) gather up your squad and call open fire on Darth Vader while you...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Entertainment Centre Awards 2006!
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 4:27 PM
#115
ok sorry there. Fanifcs :) I've read little parts of his books and there brilliant! Connor wins all awwards. HALE CONNOR! :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Entertainment Centre Awards 2006!
  Daft Adidas
01-13-2007, 1:22 PM
#112
hey can someone tell me who Connor is i'd like to read his/ her/ iits books....  [Read More]
Posted in: Custom Lightsabers!
  Daft Adidas
01-15-2007, 11:21 AM
#24
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3162/obiwangivememysabermf8.jpg Here hope this works, nifty little sabers. Very detailed. :D Some more..... Not so good picture for this one. Infact pretty crap. http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/1382/letsn...  [Read More]
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