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I'm sorry, I don't quite understand you of "What song by The Who would you play at the openning?" You know, the band, The Who (They play on all CSI)? My second favourite band after The Beatles. Going On-Topic, spelling error: Na Shadda -... [Read More]
The story is interesting, but I'm not very thrilled by a Trandoshan called Trando Shan. Ah, at least his name has a certain comedy about it. Looking back, I have to agree. Trando Shan was a Character I quickly made for the Mercenary Crew RP and I co... [Read More]
Sorry for another short Chapter, but I plan to get to the good parts as soon as possible. This Chapter also stars a cameo from one of my Fics. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ch... [Read More]
Well, yeah, seemed really good, and i like the new style! I'm guessing as well that Jan won't obey him, but, who knows? Yeah who knows. Thanks for the comments Jason and yeah I like the new style too.... [Read More]
Hey...Nice prologue, keep up! Still looking forward to see what next! Thanks john_ctg and thanks for the other comments you've said in my other Fics too. The Prologues and Epilogues will be short most of the time, but the Chapters will be longer. Th... [Read More]
mach, no need to review this. Thanks. This is a new Fic set after Jedi Outcast and set before Jedi Academy (My other Fic, The Adventures of Jaden Lennon is being cancelled, until further notice). It stars Kyle Katarn and has cameos from Jan Ors, Luk... [Read More]
Good Chapter igyman. I'm looking foward to more. I have a question. PS. If I do another Jedi Knight Fic, could I use the Quote thing at the beginning? (With credit to you of course).... [Read More]
Woops, sorry about the delay! Good chapters, i just wonder what Amber wants of Utiinil and Baklos...Nonetheless, i think the First Mate was Amber and Ewan the Captain. You're right. I'll change that. I might be doing another Fic soon, making an endi... [Read More]
Nice fiction, but isn't it KOTOR IV already? It wasn't meant to be KOTOR IV. It was just an EU Fic on the Exile's life. Besides, this isn't my best Fic I've done. I have better Fics in my Sig, excluding Lone Free Mercenary, since I ended that too ea... [Read More]
What happened to people replying? Anyway here's the next Chapter. I might be rushing these, so please say if I am. Also, I'd like to thank Jason Skywalker for letting me use Ewan Kenobi, Amber Skye and their ship, the Sky Eagle. If there is anything... [Read More]
The next Chapter is out. Oh this is for Jason. As I said in my previous Post, I plan to use your Characters, Ewan and Amber in the Chapter, after this one. Could I also use their ship? I was thinking that Jaden would stay with them for a while. Pleas... [Read More]
Good fic, but it isn't Exile? You used Revan instead? Interesting. This is AU (Alternate Universe), anything could happen. Good Chapter and I'm looking foward to more.... [Read More]
Another tip from me: 4. Give your Characters personality: This includes Characters from the Star Wars universe or Created Characters. Characters with no personality make them bland and boring. Characters with personality make the reader interested a... [Read More]
Things have slowed down around here. I've decided to add a new catergory. Best Created Character(s). Also when this is over early January, the final winners (The top three, maybe four) will be listed in the catergory.... [Read More]
@ john_ctg: Thanks and I hope you have a great time on the Forums. To be honest, I think that this has been Revanscool's best Fic so far. I rate: 1. KOTOR III: The Second Sith War 2. The Beginning of the Galactic Empire 3. The Threads of an Old O... [Read More]
Welcome to the Forums, john_ctg. Feel free to read Revanscool's other Fic, The Beginning of the Galactic Empire or feel free to read anyone elses. Mine for example. Anyway I agree with you. I doubt that KOTOR III would be called The Second Sith War.... [Read More]
You have a nice story going. A word on italics--it's used to indicate something a character is thinking, not what the character is saying. For dialogue, just use normal text with quote marks. Double check your grammar. Some of the sentences get a l... [Read More]
Ebon Hawk's cargo bay filled with something useful. In 'KotoR I' the cargo bay had canisters. In 'KotOR II' there was nothing in the cargo bay. Well the Handmaiden did need some room to practice her fighting skills. Anyway, I have my suggestions, so... [Read More]