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Diego Varen

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Posted in: KOTOR 2.5: The Direnic War
  Diego Varen
11-22-2006, 1:01 PM
#8
Changed it. So any suggestions. It just doesn't feel right that nobody has disargeed with it yet. I can't be that good of a writer. Change the text colour to white. The only time I feel a different colour is okay is in the Chapter title and the Prol...  [Read More]
Posted in: KOTOR 2.5: The Direnic War
  Diego Varen
11-22-2006, 12:51 PM
#6
Good Chapter, but I was just wondering why you made the text colour different in the Prologue and the first Chapter. Also where it says Coruscant and Jedi Temple, keep them both to the left, since it looks a bit stupid having Coruscant on the left an...  [Read More]
Posted in: KOTOR 2.5: The Direnic War
  Diego Varen
11-22-2006, 12:16 PM
#2
Welcome to the Forums Kas'!m and I never imagined Grivis becoming an editor. I'm looking foward to more. Keep it up....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars A Dark Hope
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 2:54 PM
#7
Good Chapter, overall better than the Prologue. I'm surprised that I'm the only member to reply to this Fic....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode
  Diego Varen
11-21-2006, 1:37 AM
#31
Sorry Jae and thanks for forgiving us. Good Chapter as always CSI....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 2:06 AM
#25
overall you have gotten better at writing in English. You've come a long way from the other one that I have read. I do agree with that JM12. I've noticed it too....  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-22-2006, 10:48 AM
#93
Thank you all for the support and Vaklu shall return. In due time. CSI = I don't mind being called Potts, but I prefer Pottsie. Quanon = That must be the worse spelling of my username I've seen, since I've joined here....  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-21-2006, 4:22 PM
#88
Thanks Grivis. People seem to spell my name wrong, nowadays. I've seen: Pottise - Previous Post Posstie - Revenge of the Sith RPG Thread I've just noticed it. Anyway, I hope that the future Chapters are longer now....  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-21-2006, 3:07 PM
#86
Another short Chapter, I'm sorry, but it will lead to the main plot on Onderon. Also, two characters from TSL will return. ---------------------------------------- PART III Onderon ---------------------------------------- Chapter IX - A General’s...  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-21-2006, 2:03 PM
#85
Thanks for the praise and comments igy. Glad to see that college is working out for you. I hope that if you ever get out of college (Since I hardly see you online nowadays), I hope you can write about those ideas. Remaining on-topic, I shall hopefull...  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-21-2006, 10:51 AM
#81
Good chapter, Both'haniwo is just as Atton. :xp: Well, Both'haniwo's character is different to Atton and also Carth (Since they are similar). The only similar things are: Both'haniwo-Atton: Same attitude and a bad past. Both'haniwo-Carth: Dedicated...  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-21-2006, 2:51 AM
#78
Sorry for another short Chapter and I'm afraid it is the last Chapter on Coruscant. Hopefully Onderon will be longer with (Try not to read the Spoiler, since it wrecks all of the Onderon part): The return to the more peaceful Onderon | Vaklu's escap...  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 3:14 PM
#77
Not really, but, it seems more of a pastoral world, nothing special, which makes it excellent. :P Thanks Jason. Well since Coruscant will be finished soon and hopefully the longest planned Part, Onderon, I have a lot of things planned for the Part...  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 3:01 PM
#75
Update, the Sojourn will be replaced by the unknown Alderaan. I'm interested in the planet and since our only glimpse of the planet was in ROTS, I've decided to put it in my Fic. Hope nobody minds....  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 11:32 AM
#72
Nice chapter, although, there are some missing words that make the chapter most understandable in some parts. What words are missing, just so I know? Anyway, hopefully that should be the last rushed Chapter. Thanks for the comments, Jason....  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 2:40 AM
#70
Chapter VII - The Undercity "Coruscant… the entire planet is one big city." - Ric Oliй Courscant. The last time Sera had been here was when the Jedi Masters exiled her, for joining Revan and Malak, during the Mandalorian Wars. Compared...  [Read More]
Posted in: Echoes of Darkness
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 1:35 AM
#69
Oh, right, I almost forgot - I didn't see that banner I made for the fic anywhere here, what's up with that? Thanks for the comments all, especially igyman (I hope college is going okay for you) and to answer your question, I forgot. I've inserting...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Illustrated Fic]Passion of the Sith
  Diego Varen
11-22-2006, 12:18 PM
#40
Impressive as always. Keep up Quanon. Agreed. Minor correction in your previous post CSI. Looking foward to more as always....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Illustrated Fic]Passion of the Sith
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 2:56 PM
#37
Good Part as always Quanon. And the previous pictures are great, as always. I'm looking foward to more....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Darth Yoda 2:The Dark Civil War
  Diego Varen
11-22-2006, 1:36 AM
#21
Very very long Chapter, but it is a reasonable length (I copied and pasted it to Word and it was seven pages long). Well done Grivis, but as CSI says, split the dialogue out to make the older readers able to read it easier. Looking foward to more as...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  Diego Varen
11-22-2006, 1:43 AM
#101
Yes I don't like Cena. Good Chapter as always and I'm looking foward to more. I'm glad the manuscript is failing now....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  Diego Varen
11-21-2006, 1:19 PM
#97
Another good Chapter as always and I'm looking foward to more. Oh I also didn't mention this, but nice new Avatar and Sig. The John Cena (Don't like him that much) Avatar was getting on my nerves....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 3:48 PM
#95
Another good Chapter as always, JM12. I'm looking foward to more....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Other]StarWars: Diddies
  Diego Varen
11-20-2006, 2:33 PM
#85
Another good diddy JM12. Looking foward to seeing more and I should plan my Christmas diddies....  [Read More]
Posted in: Handheld KotOR 3, Bad idea or a good one
  Diego Varen
11-19-2006, 4:34 PM
#43
and personally I prefer the PSP to the DS. Agreed....  [Read More]
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