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Actually I think the Elf is not suicidal but one who believes in justice. After all justice is blind so maybe... Anyway Tsy good intro though I am wondering why an elf would be blue. When I read the description it reminded me of a demon I saw that w... [Read More]
"Raagh you still do not understand. He will not let you reign. You are a product of what has existed for thousands of years," Tyrannus saw how stupid humans of the Core Worlds were. They could not understand simply because they refused to.... [Read More]
((Not likely unless he used some hallucinagenic. Andros Starlighter is 80+ years old, if my math is correct and not above anticipating moves. If it was a drug sprayed at him more likely yes.)) ((Since I am behind I'll just pick up)) Tyrannus growled... [Read More]
((Been a bit behind since I couldn't find a free wifii in Denver :P Anyway, Cyborg, Andorra's adopted mother is not the Governor of Aztlan. She is the Lady Governor of Avalon. While she rules Avalon she also rules the system. Unite them in just cause... [Read More]
((Actually Tsy only Andros Starlighter is on the transport with her. The others are meeting them)) "To destroy from within you must kill the heart and she is not the heart," Tyrannus replied. "She wouldn't let your pathetic being in.&... [Read More]
"You are a fool to think that you would oppose the true master of darkness," Tyrannus replied, "He made you as he did me and he does not share power." Tyrannus had a growl to his voice. The years had not been kind to it but that w... [Read More]
"We did arrive if only to scold you on your training with your father Kalla," Jun-la teased. "I am detecting forces moving towards Mando'a but they are not enough to breach defenses. Father and Tiye worked something out." She look... [Read More]
((I should note that traditionally Avalonians don't use blasters. They will if necessary. Only exception is Amshrey due to their unique make up)) Tiye Ordo looked up at the sky. It was a red sun rising, meaning that blood would be spilt soon. She fe... [Read More]
Amshrey, the forest world and the Mandalorian world as well. It had been some time but Andros would have a chance to return. Right now he was escorting his cousin, the Lady Governor of the system Avalon and her adopted daughter to the planet. The oth... [Read More]
((Ok I am just coming in here and not sure how I would fit in so I am going to wing it until I find my feet)) Lite bustled along the corridor intent on getting to the office. She was just outside the door when the intercomm sounded that students wer... [Read More]
Well you could do a 'colorful metaphor' as Spock would say but try one that we know in our modern culture like Far out or something. It would sound funny when your character tries to imitate the expression.... [Read More]
Yeah those are common expressions but why not make some up on your own? Personally I think half the fun is creating your own words to reflect a language you want to show off. Handy if you created an entire set of people if you ask me. But if you wan... [Read More]
steven: Amshrey is the six planet in the Avalonian system. It is a unique planet in that they are the descendants of the Mandalorian clans and Avalonian colonists. They settled there after the previous war between the Rashikians and Avalonians roughl... [Read More]
Alkonium: Maybe there is someone else you know of that could play a female part? I don't know that many people and I'm a mod but for CEC :xp: The Blood King is introduced late in the game so it will give a chance, if any who are interested, people t... [Read More]
That would be cool. Amshrey is considered the more safer but it doesn't mean completely. Blackmail would add to the drama and maybe a special "guest appearance" will happen.... [Read More]
Alkonium: Reyvan is Alkéa's husband right? Been awhile. Ok. I have taken on up to six characters as needed and will continue to do so only I will end up with a short memory span before I graduate in 2011. ;) I will list the main characters firs... [Read More]
Well, Doc approached me and I accepted the character that Tys started. I'm just going to make a few changes but for the most part she is the same. Name: Lezhite "Lite" Somnoi (pronounced lay-ZHEE-tyeh so-MNOY,) nickname "Lite" as... [Read More]
OK this was better. There is a minor thing. It is break not brake, unless he was driving a speeder ;) Your description is getting better and I see you describing quite a bit more. You are taking the time to show us what the character is going through... [Read More]
A beta reader is the same thing as a proofreader. They check your work for clarity, spelling, grammar, things you may have missed on your last look through. There is a beta reader thread in the Resource Center.... [Read More]
Pretty much what the others have said regarding spelling and grammar. Employing the beta is good being that it gives a fresh perspective. Also I mentioned in another fic of yours that you embellish a little more, especially since you are writing in... [Read More]
Underestandably the one who wrote the blog may be a nut however givene what we have seen in history and the current criticisms and name bashing, wouldn't he be right in that 'white privilege' has an advantage?... [Read More]
You're off to a nice start Bee. Glad you took up the reins of authordom ;) I really don't need to say anything much since everyone else addressed and you have good description of the characters and situation. It is an interesting situation since I h... [Read More]
You know I have to agree with Bee on the fraternization and Thia's reaction. Since the Admiral's touch was unwanted but he did it, it would really tense up the situation if you had her give a tolerated smile but when his back was turned she would giv... [Read More]