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JediMaster12

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Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 12:08 PM
#4
Sounds good so far. I would suggest spacing between quotes and paragraphs. This was a tip given to me and I edited my posts in my story. It's easier on the eyes since these posts don't come in 1.5 or double spacing:)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]The Mysterious Killer
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 1:36 PM
#3
You are off to a good start. I use the same first person tense in my fanfic Heart of the Guardian. Just as a tip, try to describe people and places. Just having dialogue going back and forth makes it sound like a movie script. It's up to you however...  [Read More]
Posted in: My KOTOR3 storyline
  JediMaster12
02-16-2006, 8:42 PM
#13
I think it is clear. That is why some have suggested that clues or stories be told about them being spotted and what they did and they give clues to the whol True Sith thingy....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 8:06 PM
#24
I meant swoop bike style. In the process of the last chapter. Will post as soon as I can....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 4:06 PM
#22
Chapter 7: Love and War After the closing of the night school, things began to get worse for those around me because of me. Yet for some reason, the People were willing to side with me for to them, I was the one who could speak the languages of the t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Resurrection
  JediMaster12
02-20-2006, 3:12 AM
#86
Tyrannus spoke darkly, "Join us? No, young Komad, I will break you to serve us. When you turn to the dark side, it will be willingly. Become one of us and the ultimate power of the Force can be yours." With an evil cackle, he sent a blast o...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Resurrection
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 10:58 PM
#75
Alkea did a jump twist and landed behind Peelal to give a strike with her silver blade. She felt the Force flow with her as she connected with her brother and father. She produced a short lightsaber and called through the Force to toss it to her fath...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Resurrection
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 7:26 PM
#71
"The Sith lord is getting to his feet," Alkea motioned and she pulled out her lightsaber. Igniting it she drew on the Force and dropped into a position ready to strike....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Resurrection
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 3:27 PM
#67
((Sorry for the confusion. When it involves battle or military, I tend to use last names. I'm just lazy because I could remember how to spell Kaltas)) Alkea took the controls of the ship and engaged in defensive manuevers. Her brother taught her wel...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Resurrection
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 7:30 PM
#60
Peelal. Finish the job with Kaltas but the children must be brought alive "Father's alive Komad. How did he survive the sarlacc pit?" Alkea asked her brother....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Resurrection
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 11:42 AM
#55
True but it is forseen that the children will die, though not by a weapon....  [Read More]
Posted in: Knights of the Really Old Republic (KOTROR)
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 11:40 AM
#11
"This is Rogue One copy that. Search and rescue is on its way. The squads are keeping the enemy at bay. We can give at most thirty minutes. Send what you can to the escape pods. Over and out," came the reply....  [Read More]
Posted in: [fic] Legacy of Vengeance Chapter I: Test of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 4:10 PM
#15
Don't tell me he's going to the darkside! This is full of plots, twists and turns. Can't wait to see more....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars AOJS: Philosophy of The Force
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 12:10 PM
#10
Yep looks good. Looking forward to seeing more....  [Read More]
Posted in: Ways of the Grey Jedi
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 3:34 PM
#42
How are all the students? I have received no word. Is all well in the jungles of Onderon?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Vengence of the Republic
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 3:15 PM
#84
It seemed as if Chakotay were waiting for her to continue. Kaedra continued to indulge and she remembered that he liked to be well informed, "My tribe believes that to survive one must be steady like the river. The river isn't steady for it keep...  [Read More]
Posted in: Romance Options for Kotor 3
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 3:37 PM
#42
I catch it and see your point. Romance should not be mushy but add a bit of flavor because it was a part of the original films. A completed storyline takes the shotgun seat though....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: A Broken Galaxy
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 7:39 PM
#56
Argus paced a bit in the council chambers to think about his choices. The council chambers was quiet as if straining to hear what he had to say. He had always been good at fixing things and other things. He paused before saying, "Alright."...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: A Broken Galaxy
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 11:56 AM
#54
"Me a Jedi. No way." Argus replied. "Have you ever wondered why you seem to see things before they happen," Master Volkare asked. "I've always had quick reflexes." "The Force is strong within you. Understand there i...  [Read More]
Posted in: Kotor 3
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 10:54 PM
#107
Zoe had felt Argus' voice and saw her father's emotionless state. She began to cry, "Why do have to be such a damn Jedi?!" She fell on her knees and cried into her arms, her long braid falling to the right of her head....  [Read More]
Posted in: Kotor 3
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 7:38 PM
#105
"I'll survive. I've lasted this long without your help and I'm not going to the darkside," Zoe was near tears but kept her face, "Just leave me alone!" and stormed to her bike. Argus lifted his head as he was walking along the st...  [Read More]
Posted in: Kotor 3
  JediMaster12
02-18-2006, 3:19 PM
#103
"Of course. Bob2 will go with you. He has an extra bottle for you just try not to get into trouble," and Argus went to search for Merios. "I'd rather be my own person away from you Father," Zoe spat back, "at least I can be...  [Read More]
Posted in: Kotor 3
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 7:34 PM
#100
"You don't tell me what to do Father," Zoe was getting angry, "you never were around long enough to know what had happened. You weren't there when Mother died." She turned her back and walked towards her bike. She turned around an...  [Read More]
Posted in: Kotor 3
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 11:52 AM
#98
((I was trying to clarify Argus to CountVerlucuss)) "Simple old friend," Argus said, "it will be one of ours. A modest form of aid from my people in the Avalonian system. We cannot leave yet but we can leave the boy in the cargo hold....  [Read More]
Posted in: Ebon Hawk versus Another Ship
  JediMaster12
02-17-2006, 11:14 AM
#136
Yes we have because Kreia gives us an earful on the Trayus Academy, at least to those that have played the game....  [Read More]
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