machievelli

I have noticed that about 60 of you have read this (assuming the same people retuning as I posted my next section). For lurkers, I give greetimgs; I hope you enjoyed it. For members, I am appalled that you have not commented. So here's a chance to ha... [Read More]

Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...

machievelli

05-01-2012, 11:15 AM
#15

Hell With a Tour Guide Part I Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here They sat at the same table they had vacated earlier, and service, like always, was instantaneous. This time Dawn merely looked at the girl coldly. “No special crap today. Devil's... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-24-2012, 8:49 PM
#13

Heaven with a tour guide Rhee wanted to scream as the car shot toward heaven like a rocket. She felt the car push her upward, and if anything it was accelerating! Dawn grinned at her. “You ain't seen nothing yet!” She felt a second of f... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-13-2012, 2:26 AM
#12

Her First Day For those interested, I saw Percy Jackson: The Lightning Thief for the very first time as I wrote this part. Anything that clicks with that is partially linked to that can be blamed on it. The rest is mine... Rhee found herself awake... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-10-2012, 1:13 PM
#11

Dinner and Dad The fourteenth floor was broken into eight apartments, though calling something the size of a one bedroom single story 1000 square foot house an apartment was a misnomer. Rhee stepped off the elevator, looking at the key to 1402. She... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-09-2012, 8:34 PM
#9

This is REALLY good. It's interesting to see everything from Lucifer's perspective. Wait til you meet 'Dad", and hear his story of woe.... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-09-2012, 2:09 AM
#7

Back in the Office: Discussion of How man came to be “As for the velociraptor, that would have been you if Dad had gotten off his keester a few million years earlier.” “What?” “Highly intelligent, small, family and pa... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-04-2012, 6:29 PM
#6

Okay, machievelli, you win for now and eternity because you've got me HOOK, LINE AND SINKER!!! :) I'm begging for more, because I can't wait to see what happens... From someone with your talent, that is fulsome praise. What I do when I write is get... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-04-2012, 10:38 AM
#4

For Morningstar it was a time of patting the girl on the back as she rambled on in shock. “I can't be the Devil's daughter! Dad's a Presbyterian minister!” “That is your adoptive father, dear.” “I know that!” Rhe... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-03-2012, 9:38 PM
#3

Three out of six because all of the names of the board members are names given to the devil; so half a whatever for you.... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-03-2012, 1:58 PM
#1

As I said over at SWK, I had a story about the devil and her daughter, and it has been pressing me to write it. This is just the first portion. Tell me what you think. The Devil is in the Details Henrietta Lightson stepped from the subway car, twis... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-05-2012, 12:03 AM
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machievelli

03-29-2012, 9:18 AM
#2

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Posted in: SW: TOR: Reckoning of a Lost Soul: Unconquerable

machievelli

03-22-2012, 9:31 AM
#4

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