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machievelli

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Posted in: Going to write my first fan fiction.
  machievelli
08-02-2012, 9:47 PM
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Tips as the person who will be reviewing it; make it thought provoking and exciting. Take criticism well and strive to do better. As a character in an Elizabeth Moon said to a new cook, 'You don't get good by studying how others make bread. You get g...  [Read More]
Posted in: Clan Terakian: A StarWars/Heavy Metal (Taarna) crossover
  machievelli
07-10-2012, 10:41 AM
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As mentioned above, I rewrote the las section because it shouldn't take them two days to prep for this mission. So now we continue... Terakian Compound: Concordia “Your quarters are down here, Prince.” Taarna motioned. She still carried...  [Read More]
Posted in: Clan Terakian: A StarWars/Heavy Metal (Taarna) crossover
  machievelli
07-10-2012, 9:22 AM
#5
For those who have read (Yet not commented, I altered the last posted portion because I reconsidered. With all of them already there to work, there was no reason it would take two days to prepare. So we have a clock running down to less than twelve h...  [Read More]
Posted in: Clan Terakian: A StarWars/Heavy Metal (Taarna) crossover
  machievelli
07-08-2012, 10:11 AM
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Any comments?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Clan Terakian: A StarWars/Heavy Metal (Taarna) crossover
  machievelli
07-08-2012, 10:10 AM
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Terakian Compound: Concordia Riyal had to admit the Druhund kit was cute, except for those needle claws. The ramp dropped before the bag was half empty, and she still sucked greedily. Taarna took her bag, linking it to a clip on her vest. She unbuck...  [Read More]
Posted in: Clan Terakian: A StarWars/Heavy Metal (Taarna) crossover
  machievelli
07-07-2012, 10:46 AM
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Concordia Slipstream came out of hyperspace with a burst of Chernekov radiation. Riyal shut down the hyperdrive motivator, looking at the planet and the huge moon before him. Manda'lor and Concordia, sometimes called the Concord Moon. He didn't know...  [Read More]
Posted in: Clan Terakian: A StarWars/Heavy Metal (Taarna) crossover
  machievelli
07-05-2012, 12:26 AM
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As the title implies, I have had this story (Originally a fantasy world where the last survivors of a clan by that name marches primarily to end their long servitude) kicking around in my head for longer than most of you have been alive. You have st...  [Read More]
Posted in: Someone interested in a futuristic apocalyptic story?
  machievelli
06-27-2012, 2:10 PM
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And with that, I don't mean fallout or something like that. I have some ideas brewing inside my head, and I have one about a religious extremist that stages a third world war to cover his plans, which is gathering followers to his cause and house the...  [Read More]
Posted in: With Hitler dead...
  machievelli
07-01-2012, 8:19 PM
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I forgot to mention; Clemenceau could have been completed by the Germans well before the end of the GNBNA scenario mentioned. Having another fast battleship with 15" guns on the German side; especially after I had decimated the British threat, w...  [Read More]
Posted in: With Hitler dead...
  machievelli
06-27-2012, 1:18 PM
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Very interesting indeed. But I have a question: With Hitler dead, wouldn't Gцring or Himmler be named as his successor? And wouldn't that be more detrimental to the war effort because Gцring, and especially Himmler, didn't have much experience when...  [Read More]
Posted in: With Hitler dead...
  machievelli
06-26-2012, 11:13 AM
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All right, here goes. Note that all of the operations and decisions mentioned happened when I specified, and could have been altered by a different man being in charge in Berlin: The North African campaign, like a lot of the secondary operations the...  [Read More]
Posted in: With Hitler dead...
  machievelli
06-24-2012, 11:08 PM
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As I told Christos; history could have taken a dramatic turn if Hitler had died in April of 1941. The Russian campaign would have been delayed, with the troops that would have been commited Rommel could have beaten the British in North Africa, severi...  [Read More]
Posted in: Mass Effect - Origins of the Reapers
  machievelli
06-21-2012, 1:23 AM
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Posted in: Untitled Original Scifi story
  machievelli
06-02-2012, 7:50 PM
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Whatcha think? Posted today in my column. Your main character spent most of the time being carried about, but that's no biggie. No major screwups, and I'd like to see more....  [Read More]
Posted in: Untitled Original Scifi story
  machievelli
06-01-2012, 10:15 PM
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Posted in: Jedi Hunter (Chapter 1)
  machievelli
05-18-2012, 10:43 AM
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Posted in: SW: TOR: Reckoning of a Lost Soul: A Prime Candidate
  machievelli
05-11-2012, 10:12 AM
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Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...
  machievelli
08-15-2012, 11:41 PM
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Oh boy, this made me laugh so hard due to the sheer realism of it. Once again, brilliant chapter. Thanks for the unintended humor as well. :lol: What was unintended? The only case that tickled me more was when California passed the 'three strikes'...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...
  machievelli
08-15-2012, 6:17 PM
#25
Tour of Hell IV: Gluttony, or you are what you eat in more ways than one... The elevator was a nice sane place as it closed. Rhee shook her head, her own view of hell transformed by what she had seen. ”Are the other levels changed as drastical...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...
  machievelli
08-08-2012, 3:56 PM
#24
Absolutely brilliant, and thank you for mentioning Uma Umna again! :) I felt we needed more on the woman anyway. I just picutred some proud aristocrat like the ones who fled the Comminists in the second decade of the last century, being too proud fo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...
  machievelli
08-07-2012, 10:32 PM
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A/N For those who didn't understand the reference when Dawn called Rhee 'Goblin King', in Labrynth, the goblin king asks the girl how it is so far, and she boasts that it isn't that hard. At which point the king promlptly removes half of her remainin...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...
  machievelli
05-22-2012, 9:16 PM
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For those wondering about Rhee's question about Elvis... In Good Omens, a book written by Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett, the four horsemen (With pestilence replaced by Pollution) meet in a small diner. One member of the four is already there, play...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...
  machievelli
05-18-2012, 8:53 PM
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^^^^ EPIC WIN, you get 10 of 10, Which does not happen so often. I ask: What is your religion, Which is good enough for you? :) I'm a Pagan. I worship Loki,Thor (Loki sort of chose me, go figure...) Hecate, Ishtar and Coyote. So I have two trickste...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...
  machievelli
05-16-2012, 4:53 PM
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Hell II Give me that Old Time religion! The room the entered was coal black. Rhee started to comment, when Dawn's voice cut through the chilling silence. “This is what the Christians who enter Limbo see, because it is what they anticipate. Tho...  [Read More]
Posted in: irreverent thoughts
  machievelli
08-08-2012, 1:26 AM
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I am what they call a Vietnam Era Vet, which means I served during that war, but not in the Nam. So follow me here... I was waiting for a bus when I saw a cargo truck marked Vietnam Veteran Relief... Free Pick Up. So suddenly, I pictured a man a bi...  [Read More]
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