machievelli

Merisa and Zakal paced through the crowd. The Corellians were rather blasé about having Mandalorians on their planet. Of course, they would have had to conquer Coruscant before attacking the race of gamblers, so that was not surprising. She paus... [Read More]

Posted in: Dances with Fear

machievelli

04-16-2009, 2:12 PM
#16

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Posted in: Star Wars - Knights of the Old Republic III - Threat from the unknown.

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04-30-2009, 8:22 PM
#11

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Posted in: A Dark Path

machievelli

04-16-2009, 2:07 PM
#81

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Posted in: The False Peace

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04-16-2009, 3:59 PM
#141

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Posted in: Star Wars: Defiance

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04-16-2009, 2:13 PM
#34

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Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

05-15-2009, 8:12 PM
#999

Well, it's actually not an 'undetermined time after ROTS'. It just wasn't stated right at the beginning. Somewhere in the middle, Idrin Karras was thinking about 'four years earlier' just before the rise of the Empire when "a hooded and cloaked... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

05-15-2009, 6:44 AM
#997

Coruscant Entertainment Center The Onderonian Onslaught (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=197682 ) Nick Vader Before the Mandalorian Wars: The first steps in the war The piece is really too short to judge, except for the fact that askin... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

05-08-2009, 5:22 AM
#996

Coruscant Entertainment Center Trizhdiy ("Thrice/Three Times") (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=197511) Tysyacha The piece is pretty dark, Tys. The only problem I had was the too swift transition from Kreia to Atris with no e... [Read More]

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machievelli

05-02-2009, 2:39 PM
#995

I am honored that you found "Dvazhdiy" chilling. Even not knowing all the historical facts that you did before I wrote this, I suspected that some countries did use such tactics, but not us. I was thinking Nazi Germany might have done it, o... [Read More]

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machievelli

05-01-2009, 11:50 PM
#993

Great, I look forward to hearing from you. In Regards to the excepted sex of the Revan, It's a bit of a sore spot over at the forums. I would prefer to think that Revan was female, but that's because of how I played KotOR. I truly hope that you envoy... [Read More]

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machievelli

05-01-2009, 8:31 PM
#991

I appreciate the recognition. If you would like to read the rest of what I have so far, I have it posted on the SW:TOR site http://www.swtor.com/community/showthread.php?t=24378 Please keep in mind that it is a work in progress and I would appreciat... [Read More]

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machievelli

05-01-2009, 1:19 AM
#989

I hadn't bothered to mention it here, so if you have been reading the SWK column, you would have known I was facing a layoff. I missed it by the skin of my teeth, so I'll stop worrying. But I promised to do these articles, so I now give you... Corus... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

04-24-2009, 3:24 AM
#988

Coruscant Entertainment Center Blood Assassin (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=197162) Rtas Vadum NonSW Fiction: A young vampire rebels Some misspelling, planing instead of planning, some problems with flow but nothing major. My big... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-17-2009, 4:39 PM
#987

I've read through this particular story from start to finish on Fanfiction.net and I would say that the author had written this at a professional level. I seriously could see his content in a novel. I would seriously recommend this to anyone who is l... [Read More]

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machievelli

04-17-2009, 3:54 AM
#985

Coruscant Entertainment Center Lilith: Vampire Hunter (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=196334) Rtas Vadum NonSW Fiction: A Vampire hunts those she considers wrong. You used the possessive incorrectly, human’s instead of humans.... [Read More]

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