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machievelli

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Posted in: [Shortie] - The Brush and Palette For Words That Are Gone Unsaid
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09-28-2009, 11:39 AM
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Posted in: T'katlu
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09-28-2009, 12:41 PM
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Posted in: Music of the Force
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09-28-2009, 12:40 PM
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Posted in: Heart of Stone
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09-12-2009, 10:24 PM
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Heart of stone Tinker set down her tools. It was hot on the plains of Jakara, and she sipped from her canteen. Thanks to the little impeller that spun as she moved it was deliciously cold. Her name wasn't Tinker, it was really Karai, But it had be...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Rise of Darth Scorcher
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09-15-2009, 10:48 AM
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Posted in: Conspiracy
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09-15-2009, 11:35 AM
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Posted in: Reality Show 2012: Skeletons in my Closet
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09-07-2009, 12:39 PM
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Posted in: Ship nomenclature, or; It's not a door, it's a hatch blast it!
  machievelli
09-08-2009, 1:39 AM
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I hope I've been getting my terms right in my current story... Aren't fore and aft the same as bow and stern? Fore means forward on the ship, aft means toward the stern. It's actually simple once you guys get into it. If you're not sure, just ask....  [Read More]
Posted in: Ship nomenclature, or; It's not a door, it's a hatch blast it!
  machievelli
09-07-2009, 7:50 PM
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Is that a partial release of information pertaining to your previous poll? :xp: There are no freebies in that regard, Lit. I just think if you're going to create a scene, whether it is a fleet action, fighter combat, ground action or boarding, I wou...  [Read More]
Posted in: Ship nomenclature, or; It's not a door, it's a hatch blast it!
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09-07-2009, 7:45 PM
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[/saved] Thanks for the info, Mach. I'll be sure to refer back to it in future scribblings. :p That's why I post them, Lit...  [Read More]
Posted in: Ship nomenclature, or; It's not a door, it's a hatch blast it!
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09-07-2009, 6:51 PM
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If you must ask ( :p ), the word "door" is repeated, it doesn't read particularly pleasantly and it's devoid of spark. I blame this post entirely on you, mach, and on you alone. :p Oh, the passage also has two consecutive entrances both co...  [Read More]
Posted in: Ship nomenclature, or; It's not a door, it's a hatch blast it!
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09-07-2009, 6:40 PM
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The primary design consideration in placing a secondary bridge is seperation; you don't want a hit that will smash the bridge destroying the secondary as well. This would include every ship from Heavy cruiser in ocean warfare up to battle ship. Consi...  [Read More]
Posted in: Ship nomenclature, or; It's not a door, it's a hatch blast it!
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09-06-2009, 3:37 PM
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Shipboard definition The team entered through the door into the cargo bay, running to the door into the ship. They split, one heading left, another right in the hallway... What is wrong with that paragraph? If you change the word ship to skyscraper...  [Read More]
Posted in: The New Sith Empire
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09-01-2009, 11:55 AM
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Posted in: Why does Machievelli do it?
  machievelli
10-01-2009, 8:56 PM
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Thanks AC. You've raised the ratio of votes to .45 percent. The deadline for you guys is october 23, the day I started back in 2005. the poll now stands at .38%. If you want the truth as to why, I suggest you get it to 50%...  [Read More]
Posted in: Fire Against Fire
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09-07-2009, 12:14 PM
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Reviewed 3 Oct 2008...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
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10-02-2009, 11:56 AM
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Coruscant Entertainment Center Music of the Force (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=200661) Writer Submission to the Getting the Crystals contest. During AOTC: A young Jedi goes in search of her own crystal, and faces her dark self. I...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-25-2009, 8:45 PM
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Heh, thanks. I didn't expect to have a review with praise or anything, but still, what you pointed out is good to help me write a better story :). This just means I'll have to do my research more carefully ;). The thing to remember about alternate h...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-25-2009, 12:00 PM
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kotorfanmedia Light Side Female Exile They Break in the Head (http://hawk.kotorfanmedia.com/node/9127) Inuki TSL Aboard the Ebon Hawk: Atton explains where one of his injuries came from An interesting blending of Star Wars and Asimov’s Thre...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-18-2009, 9:01 PM
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Thanks for the review, although honestly I'm not tempted to continue the series since I haven't had much feedback other than yours, but still, thanks. if you look at my more recent stuff you will see few comments. It's like pulling teeth sometimes....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-18-2009, 11:58 AM
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Coruscant Entertainment Center Astor Kaine (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=200399) Conspiracy Coruscant after the formation of the new Republic: A police officer is caught up in a web of intrigue. The basic story is pretty good, AK,...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
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09-13-2009, 1:38 AM
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My fic isn't over yet. I'm going to do the professional story too. Thanks for the review. :D As I would expect and anticipate....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-11-2009, 11:55 AM
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Coruscant Entertainment Center Storytelling (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=200285) Darth Betrayal No era given: The children of the Wookiee listen to stories. The setting is interesting, but I for one would have wished to hear the pr...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
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09-07-2009, 4:01 AM
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Thanks for the review! I meant for Jolee to come across as teasing Mission by intentionally 'acting his age' (older person frustrates younger person trying to teach him/her something), but obviously it wasn't clear. On Star Trek the Next Generation...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-04-2009, 11:49 AM
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Coruscant Entertainment Center Whole lotta loss (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=199477) Vanir No specific era given: A rescue mission encounters horror It’s console (Panel) not consol (Give comfort). The basics were good, the a...  [Read More]
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