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machievelli

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Posted in: Heart of the Universe
  machievelli
04-16-2009, 2:43 AM
#3
III Cole stormed from the operating room, ripping off her gloves. The man who had threatened her stood watching her with a slightly amused expression. “Who the hell do you think you are?” She shouted. “Threatening my team with de...  [Read More]
Posted in: Heart of the Universe
  machievelli
04-09-2009, 7:23 PM
#2
May 16 2160: Miami General Terri Cole snapped awake as Tom touched her arm. “We have an emergency op coming in.” “Right.” She sighed, rubbing the bridge of her nose. Even after 4 years as trauma surgeon, she still had proble...  [Read More]
Posted in: Heart of the Universe
  machievelli
04-09-2009, 3:13 AM
#1
Something that I've started. Won't post much of this because I'm hoping to sell it. May 16 2160: Geosynchronous orbit above the United States of North America The ship plunged toward Earth, fire lancing from the wounds in it’s sides. Circling...  [Read More]
Posted in: Revan's Revelation
  machievelli
04-02-2009, 8:53 PM
#4
Did I ever complain? Considering how many reviews you do, I wouldn't be surprised you wouldn't want to make lengthy comments. I actually should have stated that I released this before it was ready because of the "reven vs." conundrum thing...  [Read More]
Posted in: Revan's Revelation
  machievelli
04-02-2009, 7:14 PM
#2
Yes I did read it. Is this better DY?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Sublustrum
  machievelli
04-02-2009, 6:42 PM
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Posted in: Star Wars: Falling Into Darkness
  machievelli
04-02-2009, 6:28 PM
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Posted in: The One in Many
  machievelli
03-26-2009, 7:23 PM
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Posted in: Brothers-in-Arms #1: The Beginning of the End
  machievelli
03-19-2009, 4:34 PM
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Posted in: Eternity
  machievelli
03-26-2009, 6:58 PM
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Posted in: There is no death; there is the Force.
  machievelli
03-26-2009, 6:38 PM
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Posted in: Letting Go
  machievelli
03-26-2009, 5:24 PM
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Posted in: The Squad
  machievelli
04-02-2009, 3:20 AM
#23
Asher I watched the sun go down, shaking my head at the rules. Over 10,000 years since we first began, and we still pandered to their beliefs. It is mankind’s deepest darkest secret. As much as we wished to blame the Angels and Demons for all...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Squad
  machievelli
03-19-2009, 8:22 PM
#22
for those who were confused or upset by the original of this last section, all I can say is it was drunk and I was dark out....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Squad
  machievelli
03-19-2009, 2:14 AM
#21
Andiel The world is such a funny place. When I stepped into Heaven for the first time, saw, the world they live in, I felt both a stranger and at home. Humans know what heaven is supposed to be like, and they are both right and wrong. In the years...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Squad
  machievelli
03-16-2009, 8:39 PM
#20
I don't know who put in that last vote, but I want to kiss you!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of choice 2: Gathering the clans
  machievelli
04-02-2009, 12:58 AM
#17
Read a comment on how I've been marking the threads I review?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of choice 2: Gathering the clans
  machievelli
03-27-2009, 6:02 PM
#14
They had wanted to get another ship, and thanks to the sudden demise of Garba, there were six sitting at the field temporarily ownerless. So they ‘procured’ some of them. After all is it theft if the owner is dead? He couldn’t cal...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of choice 2: Gathering the clans
  machievelli
03-16-2009, 8:37 PM
#12
Outside, Zakal could now see the entire garage now. The inner walls were half a meter thick stone slabs. She grinned tonguing her com unit. “Now’s a good time, Ba’buir.” On top of the hover lifter Merisa lifted her arm, a bla...  [Read More]
Posted in: Reader's Choice 2008 Contest Nominations
  machievelli
04-05-2009, 5:47 PM
#17
Come on people! Vote! Even if I lose out, I want some one to vote...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-10-2009, 1:55 AM
#984
Coruscant Entertainment Center Renewal (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=196859) Kado Sunrider Set during LOTF: The war is over, but now comes the real work. Only two things to comment on editing; one homonyms (too instead of to) and fo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-03-2009, 2:15 AM
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Coruscant Entertainment Center Star Wars: Falling Into Darkness (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=196708) Rtas Vadum PreKOTOR: A young Jedi learns more than the Jedi would suggest A few minor word usage problems. As a primary example be...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-27-2009, 6:35 PM
#982
Thanks, Mach. Even I don't really know if a poem is good or bad. I just write them and hope for the best :xp: I'm not up with the technical side of things. If I think it fits, I write it. If it doesn't seem to fit, I leave it. Pretty unorthodox for a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-27-2009, 3:21 AM
#980
Coruscant Entertainment Center The War of the New Age (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=196579) Darth Betrayal 10,000 years before KOTOR, 14,000 before ANH: All is not what it seems. The basics are good but too quickly done. Remember th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-20-2009, 3:16 AM
#979
Coruscant Entertainment Center Soul Behind The The Armour (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=196362) Knight12167 KOTOR on Tatooine: A look into Darth Bandon’s soul. The piece started out well, but became disjointed. Having just pos...  [Read More]
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