CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 11:10 AM
#5

Fritz looked through his binoculars again at the Rekonstrukteur's headquarters. "Heh heh, dummkopf..." Fritz said. He had noticed a large screen through a window. He now a small grasp of what these men were up to. "This is dirty play... [Read More]

Posted in: WWII:The Sabotage

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 11:36 AM
#2

December 29, 1945 Safe House 1 Berlin, Germany Former-Sturmbannfuhrer Fritz Heckermann looked through his binoculars from a tall building. "So, is that them?" said a former German Paratrooper named Hans Unterjetz. Fritz nodded, "J... [Read More]

Posted in: Rebellion

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 1:25 PM
#31

Excellent next chapter, Kado! You have definately discovered the sacred art of dialogue now! Once again, though, proofread, I've spotted several miss-spellings here and there. Take a look and proofread and correct. I'll probably post more on this a b... [Read More]

Posted in: Rebellion

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 11:23 AM
#25

Wow! Excellent next chapter, Kado! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat with the ending! Excellent job! Also, the way you spaced out the dialogue, exactly the way I was talking about, excellent work! Now, for the critique:D Well, there were a couple g... [Read More]

Posted in: Zombies Walk!

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 6:24 PM
#15

The horde of zombies crumbled down in the mass of green gas. The rest fled, at least so it seemed from Vladimir's point-of-view. He saw the American soldier cheering as the zombies ran, but then they remembered who fired the gas grenade. An American... [Read More]

Posted in: Zombies Walk!

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 5:33 PM
#11

Vladimir confidently opened the door of his cell and walked down the hall. He could hear gunfire and screams of the undead outside. He knew that there were no gaurds for him, every soldier was needed to fight off the infected. Vlad knew exactly what... [Read More]

Posted in: Zombies Walk!

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 12:23 AM
#7

"Major Rosokosovski, what were your reasons for being here?" Vladimir Rosokosovski sat in a dark room lit by only on lamp. There was a U.S. soldier questioning him, and the soldier was being rather blunt, asking the same question over and... [Read More]

Posted in: Luke Skywalker: Computer Problem

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 1:39 PM
#43

Boba Fett laughed and cocked the weapon. "Guess what, Solo, I got this one off Gbay!!! AH HA AHAHA!" Han didn't see that very funny, though. "Well, Fett, I could've bought it cheaper on Bob's list!!" This caught Fett off guard... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part V: The Threefold War

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 10:48 AM
#254

Durrel coughed and adjusted his position around the sword in his side. "You've...," he coughed again, "...been found the more honorable victor. For that, this fight will be remembered, you are definately of the Mand'oa in my heart.&qu... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part V: The Threefold War

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 11:12 AM
#251

Durrel literally went over the Jedi as she tossed him over. Something that he could see as most-embarrasing, provided any of his fellow warriors were watching. Durrel's head made contact with a rock and it left a dent in his well-designed helmet. H... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 5:46 PM
#531

Granted, but by better, you mean "bitter," and the main character goes sour. I wish I had a bowl of cookiees.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 5:43 PM
#529

Granted, but you change it into your worst nightmare. I wish I had Indiana Jones' hat.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 3:31 PM
#523

Granted, but nobody knows the one way. I wish that I had a super-tank.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 2:41 PM
#521

Granted, but you find out that it will never happen. I wish I had an airplane.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 1:26 PM
#519

Granted, but now you have seven other subjects to complete. I wish Math was easier.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 12:37 PM
#517

Granted, but it's a bad one:D I wish that I had a billion dollars.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 10:55 AM
#515

Granted, but you catch on fire and you work at an oil derrick. I wish I had Super Powers.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 1:19 AM
#511

Granted, you have asked for nothing, so that is what you have, nothing. I wish I were from a land down under.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 10:01 PM
#506

Granted, but you get food-poisoning because there was a fly on it, and you die... I wish my food were warm.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 9:52 PM
#504

Granted, but it's illegal, and the Empire executes you on violation charges. I wish I had a Super-Star Destroyer.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 9:34 PM
#502

Granted, but you shoot yourself in the foot, and now your foot is a permanent resident of the floor. I wish I had an army of Clones.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 9:29 PM
#500

Granted, but it's so horrible that your ears blow out, and you can't hear it. I wish I had the Death Star.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 4:43 PM
#492

Granted, but your hands become so smart, they wonder why they have to take your orders and they rebel. I wish I could run super fast.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Ruin a Wish Foundation

CommanderQ

12-11-2008, 3:16 PM
#489

Granted, but your powers get out of control and you catch on fire. I wish my tea tasted better.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

CommanderQ

12-12-2008, 12:00 PM
#933

Have a good one, Mach! :D... [Read More]

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