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Burnseyy

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Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things
  Burnseyy
09-12-2008, 9:36 AM
#3
I liked the first one, dramatic as it was. ;) the second one was very cheery lol. I was thinking of doing something like this, but I reframed. :^:...  [Read More]
Posted in: A tough decision...
  Burnseyy
09-03-2008, 9:34 AM
#5
Hah, I might be going to college, but that doesn't mean I don't want to be distracted by KOTOR. :xp: It's the perfect opportunity to put off coursework... and then scramble to finish it on the last minute. Which I always somehow manage to do....  [Read More]
Posted in: Reasons why you play Kotor over and over again?
  Burnseyy
08-29-2008, 10:55 AM
#3
I actually don't know... I mean the games fun, but I must have played it at least 20 times through! Yeah, I'm addicted :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Death Incarnate
  Burnseyy
08-26-2008, 8:43 PM
#4
BFA never was the patient one :xp: Agreed, 100%. ;) As for the story, nice start here (yes the dreaded word "nice"). Though, you use a lot of 'simple sentences'... if you get me. There were no commas, really, and hardly and 'ands', if a...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bracelets and Prose
  Burnseyy
08-26-2008, 4:39 PM
#11
:xp: :xp: :xp: :xp: :xp: :xp: :xp: :xp: :xp: [*Insert evil laugh* mwahaha, my evil plan of world domination is in its first stages!] I re-he-he-HE-he-HE-heeeeallllly enjoyed this, Burnseyy! (See, just for future note: If I elongate words, its means...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bracelets and Prose
  Burnseyy
08-25-2008, 9:24 PM
#7
In my English class we had to read A LOT poetry. Them we had a quiz on about 70-80 poems and had to say the meter and rhyme scheme of all of them. :wornout: Now its just a habit. :) That subtle change makes this poem even better. Burnseyy is deep :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bracelets and Prose
  Burnseyy
08-25-2008, 8:17 PM
#4
Your poetry certainly is not embarrasing. :) I found it quite good. Now you have tempted me *runs to dig out old poetry* See what you started BFA? :xp: Interesting that the last stanza does not use the AABB rhyme scheme as the rest do. Why is that -...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bracelets and Prose
  Burnseyy
08-25-2008, 8:08 PM
#1
Damn you BFA - I've been tempted ever since I saw your poetry! So here's that 'proof' that my poetry is embarrassing ;) -- Bracelets and Prose Classic times were those, We spent, reciting prose With laughter and phrases; Rushing through lifeR...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bounty Hunting
  Burnseyy
08-27-2008, 10:13 AM
#10
Nice addition to the story, here, Bally! Though I agree with DY: it seemed a little too direct and too in favour of Luke, despite his lowering of credits. Bounty hunter's don't tend to... associate with other bounty hunters - or maybe you know that...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bounty Hunting
  Burnseyy
08-25-2008, 5:11 PM
#4
I would recommend sending this to someone who can go through and fix grammar for you. Ahem. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bounty Hunting
  Burnseyy
08-25-2008, 4:30 PM
#2
I like this. It's a nice start to a possibly great story. Just a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but everyone's heard that story. ;) Great work! Also, the first chapter went a bit quick... maybe if you put more description in, it'd be slower. But...  [Read More]
Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension
  Burnseyy
08-29-2008, 11:21 AM
#17
I thought it was quite clever how you told the last Jedi on the star forge, to go to the ship and that Revan "wasn't" going to kill him :xp: you've definitely pulled off an interesting and well rounded dark side character. And killing Mala...  [Read More]
Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension
  Burnseyy
08-25-2008, 7:05 PM
#11
My god... poor Mission - and I thought Juhani's situation seemed sick. >_>' Great story, perhaps a little chilling, but that's what the Dark side is, ey? I'm glad I read this now - and no, you are not a bad writer!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Topic: Origins
  Burnseyy
08-21-2008, 7:39 PM
#7
Great, Im currently writing an 'origin' story. lol Oh well, probably wouldnt have entered anyway......  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnsey's Art
  Burnseyy
09-07-2008, 4:33 PM
#51
I think I spent about 20-30 minutes drawing it, 10 minutes inking it and an hour colouring it in. Not too long, really. It was sort of rushed....  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnsey's Art
  Burnseyy
09-07-2008, 12:20 PM
#49
Thanks a bunch for the compliments, guys. :^: @HOP (if he reads this): Marit is well under way. :) PS. I used to watch cowboy bebop, before my mum said I was too young to watch it >_> and now I'm old enough... Toonami has vanished!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnsey's Art
  Burnseyy
09-06-2008, 5:46 PM
#46
http://i37.tinypic.com/xnzz42.jpg Atton ;) It doesn't look much like him, but it'll pass. It also looks like he's holding the lightsaber awkwardly and standing dead goofy - but that's just to make him look like he's moving in for an attack. Also,...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Burnseyy
08-30-2008, 3:35 PM
#39
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f73/Yasuzoma/Jacenzarek-coloured.jpg This is a picture I drew for HOPs story - as the picture says, it's Jacen Zarek, the main character of this story. ;) He asked me to post it here, so there you go - that's what...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Burnseyy
08-23-2008, 3:03 PM
#36
I know what you mean about favouritism... So I try to pull back on their apparent amazingness. Unfortunately, sometimes I've pulled back their abilities so much, that people have asked why I'm making my favourite character a complete tool who can't d...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Burnseyy
08-23-2008, 1:31 PM
#34
Yay it's finally up! I've been waiting for this for a while. :D I loved the emotion when Duran 'died'. The description in Virago's feelings was just wow. Yes, wow! I also loved the wayAuril was playing pazaak. :D It was great how you said she only...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Burnseyy
08-21-2008, 7:40 PM
#29
I thought you'd updated the story, then! I was like 'eee!' :¬: Why did god refuse to gift a good writer with fast typing? Only god does know....  [Read More]
Posted in: Which character would you train to be a Jedi?
  Burnseyy
09-01-2008, 11:18 AM
#56
Carth's son is a sith, so maybe he is as well. At least he would be the most likely of the four. Well, that would be the most logical one. But if they were all force sensitive, I think Mission would be best, since she's the youngest, and most loyal...  [Read More]
Posted in: Which character would you train to be a Jedi?
  Burnseyy
08-31-2008, 6:58 PM
#52
Mission, obviously! She's probably the most 'jedi' out of the whole of the K1 crew....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Burnseyy
08-22-2008, 8:26 AM
#870
What did you do, kid, swallow a dictionary? Maybe. >_> Thanks again for the critique. I'm working on the word issues as we speak, and hopefully my next chapter will be improved....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Burnseyy
08-15-2008, 11:42 PM
#867
Cheers for the critique, machievelli. :) I'll work on those word issues. I tend to think words should work a certain way, even if they don't lol. Again, thanks....  [Read More]
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