Darth_Yuthura

01-31-2009, 11:27 AM
#4

I don't want to sound arrogant or anything, but I see something like 'Shrouded in Darkness' rising to take its place. Ventress was a character that I found rather difficult to understand for her transition to the Lightside, so this would be a great o... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights of the Old republic: Jedi of Destiny

Darth_Yuthura

01-31-2009, 6:32 PM
#15

Don't know yet what to make of it. Original is difficult to start with because you need to get the reader's attention: the first few posts countered that to a degree, but I wasn't that interested based on the content alone. I didn't write it, but I w... [Read More]

Posted in: TSL Force Point limit?

Darth_Yuthura

01-24-2009, 12:18 AM
#2

100 is way below any limit I've seen. There is a problem with what you're doing, but it may be because you are setting the points instead of honestly earning them at level ups. I could be wrong though. You could try half the stats you've put in and s... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars - Rise Of Darkness

Darth_Yuthura

02-14-2009, 2:18 AM
#12

I really like how you compared evil and power to what they meant to individuals who wielded them. I like how this version of a dark jedi was not one of desire and anger, but rather that Renae just did what had to be done with little concern for what... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars - Rise Of Darkness

Darth_Yuthura

01-31-2009, 6:20 PM
#9

Impressive. I am not one for non-canon stories, but this one has my attention. Don't know enough to make a judgment, but learning more with each chapter. Looking forward to what is going on in that Darkside brain of yours.... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars - Rise Of Darkness

Darth_Yuthura

01-22-2009, 11:11 PM
#3

^^ Same words, but I noticed that you missed a possessive noun (this person's command). 'I' capitalized with 'I'll' in place of 'im'. Minor things, but it's decent.... [Read More]

Posted in: How to easily beat the Bull Rancor on the Wii

Darth_Yuthura

01-08-2009, 8:15 PM
#11

Well I think I'll be annoying and address the PS3 and Xbox360 version on this thread. This thing is just outrageously tough and delivers a huge blow if you are run over. In addition to that annoying Maris Brood, you are more likely to die from one m... [Read More]

Posted in: Kazden Paratus: Sith Master Difficulty

Darth_Yuthura

01-15-2009, 11:55 PM
#8

I still think Darth Sidious was the hardest opponent I've ever went up against. Maybe I can lend some advice for this one... saber block. Each time Sideous tries to blast you, block with the lightsaber and after you stopped the attack, press block a... [Read More]

Posted in: Kazden Paratus: Sith Master Difficulty

Darth_Yuthura

01-15-2009, 12:31 PM
#6

Well it's been some time, but I tried and naturally did VERY badly. Even when I inflate the stats, he simply doesn't abide by the rules. He always counters every other Force power, besides lightning. Any lightning combos are also countered or prevent... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

02-11-2009, 2:58 PM
#37

Yes, I needed two post for this. I write too much. ---------- When she and Genda gathered in the Ebon Hawk’s cargo hold with T3, Tashi agreed to let them have some privacy. “T3, please show the recording of my trial.” Genda looked to the hol... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

02-11-2009, 2:56 PM
#36

This doesn't progress the story significantly beyond the conversation between Mandalore, Alayna, and Visas. I agree that I haven't been progressing the story very quickly and will try to get more in with fewer words, but this is a conflict with Genda... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

02-10-2009, 10:01 PM
#35

This is not exactly going to be action-packed, but I will have some chapters that are for the sake of enriching the story. The next chapter will be a story progressor, but it will have another intense emotional scene and the one after that will have... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

02-10-2009, 12:53 PM
#33

Anyone have any comments on the HK-47 scene? I thought it was a great way to show just how much that droid hated his master and that he would do anything to not be under Alayna's control. I also have realized that I don't have Visas in much of the ne... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

02-09-2009, 11:55 PM
#31

----- The Ebon Hawk: a few hours later ----- Although Genda just wanted to be alone for a while, he ended up getting lost in the hospital, forcing Alayna to search for him. Visas retrieved Tashi and were all returning to the ship. Along their way,... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

01-29-2009, 4:30 PM
#28

Shortly upon his discharge from surgery, Genda was returned to his hospital room with an anxious Tashi awaiting him. Upon his arrival, they held onto each other with all their strength. They saw that there were a few hours before Alayna said they wer... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

01-22-2009, 4:30 PM
#26

Alayna had had intended to gather everyone to the center compartment of the Ebon Hawk after Genda woke up. He was offered a change of cloths, but he preferred to wear his Echani armour. Alayna wouldn’t have minded that the armour reeked from th... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

01-20-2009, 2:29 PM
#23

I just wanted to tell everyone how much I appreciate getting feedback and comments. I’m interested in making a good fiction, but getting compliments are just as great. I appreciate any comments that lead to improvement. Thanks to those who gave... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

01-14-2009, 9:29 PM
#20

As Genda took the lead with Tashi close behind, the two made their way through to the front of the palace. They encountered a patrol, but Genda used himself as bait to lure them around and Tashi reluctantly went ahead... fearing that the blaster shot... [Read More]

Posted in: Destined to Live

Darth_Yuthura

01-10-2009, 5:46 PM
#17

Maybe not my best action sequence, but I hope it suffices. The next chapter was originally part of this, but I think it made this a bit too long. I also wanted to leave off on a positive/unknown cliffhanger, but may have given it away. Anyway, this i... [Read More]

Posted in: What is Everyone's Favorite Force Combo, Force Power, and Lightsaber Crystal Color?

Darth_Yuthura

01-16-2009, 9:44 PM
#29

Xbox 360: Costume: Jedi Adventure Robe all the way Lightsaber: Green saber with Russan (Force-cost reduction) power crystal (only use the lightning-enhancement crystal against Vader and Kazden) Power: Repulse... although I use grip most Combo: Impa... [Read More]

Posted in: Stupid Star Destroyer (Mid-Late Game Spoilers)

Darth_Yuthura

01-12-2009, 6:58 PM
#32

Well that's what I tried to do, but most shots didn't go for the TIE's, or for that matter, straight. I tried many times to destroy them, but the debris didn't lock onto the TIE's. They often locked onto something else completely, even when I threw i... [Read More]

Posted in: Stupid Star Destroyer (Mid-Late Game Spoilers)

Darth_Yuthura

01-12-2009, 5:25 PM
#30

Anyone get bothered by a floating piece of junk that threw off the Force-lightning targeting? I always knock it down, but when the ties come by, another one appears when I had already dealt with it! I wanted to throw it at the ties, but the debris go... [Read More]

Posted in: Does anyone actually like the Star Forge Robes?

Darth_Yuthura

01-12-2009, 7:08 PM
#23

They're so hideous... yet so useful. I would always try and pause just between killing Malak and his death cutscene starting so I would be able to wear something nicer in the end sequence. I thought I was the only one to do that. I favor the envir... [Read More]

Posted in: The False Peace

Darth_Yuthura

01-31-2009, 6:13 PM
#128

Just got to this; saw all the feedback and missed the chapter that preceded them. I have to admit that is devious to show the very human/delicate nature of Gina in contrast to the cold/mechanical efficiency of the machine she was. I did not really c... [Read More]

Posted in: The False Peace

Darth_Yuthura

01-11-2009, 4:37 PM
#110

Read (Stops imitating machievelli) This is really an impressive original story now that I really step back and look at it all. You really only have one character that isn't yours and she only showed up this late in the story. You've got a nice plot... [Read More]

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