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Darth_Yuthura

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Posted in: Burnseyy's Poetry
  Darth_Yuthura
10-12-2008, 11:41 AM
#4
I've not been one for poetry, but your unorthodox (at least as far as I've seen) topic for the first one was... I can't explain what I thought. What possessed you to write about someone who froze to death? I can relate to what you had for the second...  [Read More]
Posted in: Prior to Exile
  Darth_Yuthura
10-14-2008, 10:15 PM
#14
Did anyone even notice Chapter 3 when it was up? I rushed this chapter as well and hope it didn't suffer, but if it had... ----- I had suddenly been hit by another chilling discovery: Master Kavar had already seen their battle plan and rejected it....  [Read More]
Posted in: Prior to Exile
  Darth_Yuthura
10-13-2008, 11:47 AM
#13
I was filled with discord and concerned that the war I have been dreading for years could erupt at any moment. Before I had addressed Alek, I was in a mindset that there were at least two or three months before the volcano finally exploded. After tha...  [Read More]
Posted in: Prior to Exile
  Darth_Yuthura
10-12-2008, 10:25 PM
#11
I like it! One problem, if my memory serves me correctly. I thought Yusanis fought in the Mandalorian wars. :confused: I was wondering if anyone would notice that little detail. I should have used another general's name for the second reference....  [Read More]
Posted in: Prior to Exile
  Darth_Yuthura
10-12-2008, 8:53 PM
#9
Being a Jedi knight was so much easier than a padawan. Had I been bound to Master Negato, he’d have taken the rep. for what I had done just then. Alek was respected among the order and I shoved his pride down his throat, but I knew he deserved it....  [Read More]
Posted in: Prior to Exile
  Darth_Yuthura
10-09-2008, 6:20 PM
#6
I found those two a little awkward, and I wonder why they seem to consciously adopt such body language. It detracts from how...sincere they are. An interesting viewpoint on the war, and I hope to see why Alexandra and Malak/Alek disliked each other...  [Read More]
Posted in: Prior to Exile
  Darth_Yuthura
10-06-2008, 10:44 PM
#3
Where was the question? All I can pretty much see really is just a statement. I may not be looking hard enough however .. I just woke up, haha. Time to go. I'll give it a more deeper read later on and I'll make sure I give it the full attention it d...  [Read More]
Posted in: Prior to Exile
  Darth_Yuthura
10-04-2008, 12:46 PM
#1
I didn’t know why I bothered to come to this presentation; I guess that it was just a chance to see a prestigious Jedi like Alec and hear what he had to say about recent events. Although the Council had already assured the Order that they aware...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Darth_Yuthura
10-13-2008, 12:49 AM
#21
Great! Another story about the Exile in the works, but an interesting one at that. Maybe I should aim for shorter chapters with more content open to the imagination. I hate cliffhangers because they always force the reader to come back! Well I'll b...  [Read More]
Posted in: What is Everyone's Favorite Force Combo, Force Power, and Lightsaber Crystal Color?
  Darth_Yuthura
10-11-2008, 8:45 PM
#15
Lightsaber color: Dark Green with the enhanced force throw crystal Costume: PS3 version of jedi ceremonial robe Force Power: Force Throw and repulse Combo: Arial assault (jump,repulse) and detonate (throw,lightning)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Reasons why you play Kotor over and over again?
  Darth_Yuthura
08-30-2008, 3:51 PM
#11
I like to go back and see what I missed the first time. Even after a dozen playthroughs, I still come across new content... or rather new to me....  [Read More]
Posted in: Bracelets and Prose
  Darth_Yuthura
08-25-2008, 9:18 PM
#6
How can you say this is not that great? I think you touched some serious issues in a few lines. I can understand the basis for this poem and hope you still don't consider it a waste of time....  [Read More]
Posted in: Bounty Hunting
  Darth_Yuthura
08-27-2008, 9:35 AM
#9
I think that the conversations were a bit too direct. Try to extend the dialog and brush the subject so you need to say more to communicate the idea... just my advice. The 5000 credits... it's a bit too unlike a mechanic to be that exact. I think yo...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bounty Hunting
  Darth_Yuthura
08-25-2008, 5:14 PM
#5
I won't say it has potential... that's what everyone says! It's a new approach and it is a more novel idea to have something original, but have ties to old characters. Like the idea and will keep reading. Same comments on grammar....  [Read More]
Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension
  Darth_Yuthura
08-26-2008, 10:33 PM
#14
Revan was so evil that I couldn't stop reading. I really only wish that you extending the Malak scene so that Revan could taunt him longer. Malak was just a fool and a traitor that deserved to be despised. I would advise you add some more anger and t...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Dark Path
  Darth_Yuthura
10-07-2008, 9:50 AM
#54
I never imagined Revan having an offspring, but you have come up with a very interesting relationship between the two of them. He clearly loves her, but that his perception of the galaxy through sith eyes makes him believe that he must be hard on her...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Huntress
  Darth_Yuthura
10-13-2008, 11:07 PM
#31
Here's one last request to see a great story at least not come to an indefinite close. It is rare for a really minor character to have a story of their own worth reading and receiving praise such as this. I am saddened to know it will not evolve to...  [Read More]
Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time
  Darth_Yuthura
09-30-2008, 4:37 PM
#25
I hate it when you use cliffhangers to end off your installments. That then leaves me unable to just be satisfied unless you finish it off with another chapter. Than after that chapter... Of course, I do the same thing, so I can't exactly complain n...  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnsey's Art
  Darth_Yuthura
09-07-2008, 4:20 PM
#50
That is a remarkable piece of work. How long did it take you to draw that? I especially liked the shadow effects. Those are hard to do....  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Darth_Yuthura
10-13-2008, 12:38 AM
#74
I'm not you, but I like shorter chapters. (from 15,000-25,000 characters) This is a clever way to get nearly twice as many responses for the same amount of effort. I like seeing certain stories updated, but each piece covers a lot of content that mak...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Darth_Yuthura
09-25-2008, 9:01 PM
#61
It has been a week since this story had been updated... I'm sorry it took so long for this feedback to reach it. This was a great addition to your tale and I would say that your writing shows noticeable improvements in segregating the pause for det...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Darth_Yuthura
08-30-2008, 4:11 PM
#41
Very nice artwork by Burnseyy. Now I feel that I can't afford NOT to do anymore artwork. She's doing numerous fictions on top of doing artwork for others! This is a great visualization of the character....  [Read More]
Posted in: Which character would you train to be a Jedi?
  Darth_Yuthura
08-31-2008, 7:41 PM
#53
Carth's son is a sith, so maybe he is as well. At least he would be the most likely of the four....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Darth_Yuthura
10-10-2008, 8:01 PM
#898
Coruscant Entertainment Center Prior to Exile (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=192726) Darth Yuthura Before the Mandalorian Wars: As Malak tries to gain recruits, he faces resistance from his fellow Jedi. Some cumbersome sentences, the...  [Read More]
Posted in: The most difficult puzzle
  Darth_Yuthura
09-01-2008, 7:51 AM
#11
I would have had the most difficulty with completing the Power generator puzzle. There was not an easy way to know where exactly the repair droid needed to be in order to pick up the lens. The actual function of picking up or releasing the object was...  [Read More]
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