Astor

Posted in: The Great Tribulation? Very Controversal and The Second Coming of Christ (merged)

Astor

07-25-2008, 5:54 PM
#5

I'm not a 'believer', so I can't really say whether the rapture is going to come or not, but I doubt it will. As for Senator Obama being the antichrist, I doubt that as well. I don't know about what church you go to, but could it possibly be a race... [Read More]

Posted in: The Huntress

Astor

07-24-2008, 6:28 PM
#10

I eagerly anticipate chapter 2. :) QFT. I really liked it, and I like your interpretation of Mira's background - it's believable, which is really important.... [Read More]

Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time

Astor

07-24-2008, 4:02 PM
#11

Good chapter though. The Imperials do know how to dress. :) I thought i'd include that little bit because I remember watching a DVD where Ian McDiarmid introduced the villains of Star Wars, with something along the lines of: "They have all the... [Read More]

Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time

Astor

07-24-2008, 2:37 PM
#9

Okay, so this chapter ended up being a lot longer than i'd planned. It was supposed to go straight to dinner with the Admiral, but I got a bit too carried away with things, so dinner with the Admiral is now going to be in chapter 7. As usual, enjoy.... [Read More]

Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time

Astor

07-22-2008, 7:48 AM
#8

Sorry that I haven't replied Astor No worries, mate. Just me being a whiny old fool again :). I really like it so far. I like all of your description. It just adds a lot to the story. This is the first time i've really made an effort to get 'into... [Read More]

Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time

Astor

07-21-2008, 4:06 PM
#5

Part 5 Captain Kevan Graff strode down the boarding ramp of his pristine shuttle, a perfect example of military precision, flanked by his personal guard of Stormtroopers, marching a few paces behind. Or at least that’s what it looked like to a... [Read More]

Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time

Astor

07-20-2008, 5:23 PM
#4

Has anybody been reading this? It's not that i'm complaining, or even annoyed, as i'd still keep posting, but it'd be nice to know if someone likes this stuff. Anyhoo, here's the fourth part. This is more of an attempt to get into the character's min... [Read More]

Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time

Astor

07-19-2008, 5:07 PM
#3

Part 3 The tapcaf wasn’t the most inviting establishment Vynn had set foot in, and it was all the more surprising because either side were open-fronted shops selling Alderaanian art and other intricate sundries. It was a narrow shop, no more t... [Read More]

Posted in: The Band Name Game

Astor

07-21-2008, 12:27 PM
#65

New Model Army... [Read More]

Posted in: The Band Name Game

Astor

07-20-2008, 4:17 PM
#51

Shangri-las... [Read More]

Posted in: The Band Name Game

Astor

07-20-2008, 11:32 AM
#46

(The) Highwaymen... [Read More]

Posted in: The Band Name Game

Astor

07-19-2008, 4:21 PM
#41

T'Pau... [Read More]

Posted in: Yuthura Ban Story

Astor

07-19-2008, 11:17 AM
#9

I think you're doing fairly well, but I think that you could have cleared up the first few paragraphs of part 4. For instance, where you have written: Coruscant, the political hub of the galaxy for millennia. It was generally agreed that Coruscant... [Read More]

Posted in: Burnsey's Art

Astor

07-22-2008, 5:41 PM
#27

and what do you mean how do I colour in? Like, what I use, or what technique? Well both really - do you do it by hand, or using a computer?... [Read More]

Posted in: Burnsey's Art

Astor

07-22-2008, 5:29 PM
#25

Very nice! I can't draw very well at all - so anybody who can gets my congratulations! Although, I am going to try and do some drawing - i've downloaded some tutorials on proportion, and may print some outlines out as a guide. Out of interest, how... [Read More]

Posted in: Add two words game

Astor

07-26-2008, 2:50 PM
#480

Buckle up, for Tomato Devil and his evil Mini-me promise to conquer the entire eastern African nation with giant spandex wearing barista giraffes. That's what happened when Hitler's Ghost arose from his deep grave and screamed, "Salt Jedi shall... [Read More]

Posted in: Add two words game

Astor

07-26-2008, 5:10 AM
#476

Buckle up, for Tomato Devil and his evil Mini-me promise to conquer the entire eastern African nation with giant spandex wearing barista giraffes. That's what happened when Hitler's Ghost arose from his deep grave and screamed, "Salt Jedi shall... [Read More]

Posted in: General Questions on Writing

Astor

07-20-2008, 2:48 PM
#35

You don't need to use that much technical jargon to write decent dog-fights. Read the X-wing series -- they're completely understandable to your average non-pilot. Agreed. I've only written one dogfight, and I didn't need a ton of technical terms.... [Read More]

Posted in: General Questions on Writing

Astor

07-19-2008, 6:39 PM
#22

punctuation and spelling and describing makes a good 'skeleton' of a story. but what i think is, despite the fact these are important, people get put off the 'plot' because of it. spelling etc. requires learning, but sometimes, really good, origina... [Read More]

Posted in: General Questions on Writing

Astor

07-19-2008, 6:27 PM
#20

I liek too sea gud punctuashun in a storie. Oh, and seplling too. ;)... [Read More]

Posted in: Ask A Stupid Question And Get A Stupid Answer

Astor

08-14-2008, 6:52 PM
#1543

Because you smell terrible, old man. Can I have a Wii now?... [Read More]

Posted in: Ask A Stupid Question And Get A Stupid Answer

Astor

08-14-2008, 6:43 PM
#1541

Because they do. Why do people get upset about threads being closed?... [Read More]