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Kado Sunrider

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Posted in:  Finality
  Kado Sunrider
12-26-2008, 7:13 PM
#3
thanks for the reply Rev. :) I said it was a shortie in the title. xD this was set basically as soon as Anakin died....  [Read More]
Posted in:  Finality
  Kado Sunrider
12-26-2008, 6:29 PM
#1
Finality No shadow followed the form of Anakin Skywalker as he walked down the hallway to the final chamber. Using the force to open the door, he slipped through into a massive circular chamber, sitting on the many benches were the Jedi Masters of...  [Read More]
Posted in: Exodus
  Kado Sunrider
12-09-2008, 10:33 AM
#7
Yep, changed the title :) It's an interesting beginning, and your descriptions of the battle are good (way better than my fight scenes :D )! I'm not sure about the allusion to a vortex (but it does get points for creativity!), and you used death twic...  [Read More]
Posted in: Exodus
  Kado Sunrider
12-08-2008, 9:14 PM
#5
"I'm out for a little while and everyone goes crazy." Han Solo, Return of the Jedi. Thanks for the replies guys. I always seem to have trouble with reusing words that I shouldn't. I promise I'll get better. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Exodus
  Kado Sunrider
12-07-2008, 6:45 PM
#1
Prologue Two Jedi stood on a metal bridge crossing a river of molten rock. Troops swarmed on the far side of the bridge, and advanced on the Jedi, leading the endless wave of troops were four Sith, each brandishing a red saber, stalking towards the...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-20-2008, 11:41 PM
#48
*reverie *man's *pursued *Teg's *to Just a quick run-through to point out that you shouldn't slack off the proofreading! :pDOH! How come whenever I don't put an apostrophe, I need one and whenever I put one I don't!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-18-2008, 11:33 PM
#46
Well, excellent next chapter, Kado! No corrections as of now!:D Well, I look forward to the next chapter:D!no corrections? well there's a first time for everything. New chapter will be out tomorrow or later tonight. Haven't decided if I'm going to w...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-18-2008, 10:01 PM
#44
Chapter 10 Cadran and Asha'ri emerged from the shady cantina half an hour later burdened with weaponry and datapads. They hailed a speeder and arrived back at the landing pad where the Telravin Star was waiting patiently. They carried their supplies...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-18-2008, 10:00 PM
#43
Excellent next chapter, Kado! Very good indeed! Well, once again not much for me to correct on but there are a few things. Check your grammar again, PROOFREAD. That is very important during the writing process. Besides that excellent work! I look fo...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-18-2008, 8:33 PM
#41
Chapter 9 The Telravin Star dropped out of hyperspace a few hundred kilometers from Imperial Center and slowly approached the planet. In the cockpit, Cadran, Teg and Asha'ri we're going over their plan. "Alright," Cadran began. "I'm...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-18-2008, 8:07 PM
#40
Another Excellent chapter! I wonder how they are going to join the rebellion...Oh you'll find out. xD...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-18-2008, 11:31 AM
#37
Chapter 8 Silence pervaded the scene as Cadran stood in disbelief. Pain washed over him like an icy wave, and he sank to his knees. "How -- how did he die?" he asked quietly. "Lets go inside, and you can hear the whole story."...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-17-2008, 8:06 PM
#36
He who? :xp: Man, you killed his brother?! What kind of a sadist are you!!!!!!!!! Wait a sec, I'm talking about this when I--uh, sorry 'bout that. ;)HA! Teg is the one speaking. I thought that was kind of obvious. xD...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-17-2008, 12:51 AM
#34
Chapter 7 The glittering armored hull of the Telravin Star shone in the midday sun as it set down near the home of Reshi and Nema Tavar. From the viewport, Cadran could see two figures approaching from the house. This is going to be interesting. he...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-17-2008, 12:33 AM
#32
Excellent next chapter, Kado! You have definately discovered the sacred art of dialogue now! Once again, though, proofread, I've spotted several miss-spellings here and there. Take a look and proofread and correct. I'll probably post more on this a b...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-12-2008, 12:28 AM
#29
Chapter 6 Dead silence pervaded the chamber at Kilans' tone. Cadran knew what was coming. He would not give up Asha'ri. Four guards we're stationed in the throne room at all times, however, the nearest barrack was much to close for comfort. In a fla...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-11-2008, 8:18 PM
#28
Oh, darn! Asha'ri just can't get a break, can she? :( Now to the inevitable critique. ;) It's 'aroused'. It should be, "I didn't see you standing there, Asha'ri." It should be, "That's quite a workout." It might sound...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-11-2008, 12:07 AM
#24
Chapter 5 Cadran woke up to the sound of R6 beeping at him from the doorway. The charismatic little droid had arroused him half an hour before they would be dropping out of hyperspace into the Rendak System. Sitting up and sliding out of bed, he sli...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-10-2008, 5:03 PM
#23
One spelling mistake. (Yea. I'm a nit-pick. ;)) It's spelled 'unraveled'. Other than that, very good! I look forward to more! :)ahh. fixed. :) Its amazing that safari's spell-check didn't pick that up....  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-10-2008, 1:18 AM
#21
That could work out quite well:D If you'd like, you could just PM it to me, and Voila! I'll get it done:DSounds like a deal. Next chapter will be coming you're way before I release it. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-10-2008, 1:11 AM
#19
Well, very excellent next chapter, Kado! I don't have much to correct on other than saying once again that you should probably space out the dialogue, not only will it make it clearer to read, but it can also create a mood from which the person is ta...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-09-2008, 12:44 AM
#17
Chapter 4 It was late at night, at least by Coruscant Standard Time, but in the never-ending well of Hyperspace, time held no meaning. Cadran was slouched back in his seat, staring at the starlines that whisked by in streaks of blue. Much earlier, C...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-04-2008, 1:09 AM
#15
Well, Kado, I'm sort've an artist, but I'd be doing your characters, people that you have imagined exactly in your mind, it's hard to do those. I really couldn't, everyone has a distinct vision of how the characters are in a book, so it'd be kind of...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Kado Sunrider
12-03-2008, 1:26 AM
#12
Excellent, Kado! I like how he got past all the questions. :lol: Reminds me of The Voyage Home. Y'know, when Mcoy's trying to get into the operating room with Chekov. I'll look the line up later. The grammar is greatly, greatly improved since the fi...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Soul Adrift
  Kado Sunrider
12-10-2008, 1:15 AM
#79
Thank you, M@rs! :xp: I like it when people enjoy my work!well Endo, This is by far my favorite fan-fic that I didn't write. (And thats not me being self-centered, I can just twist it whatever way I want, so its better than any other.) In fact, this...  [Read More]
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