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Great job. Your writing style is quite advanced. One question: is there someone named Storm in your squad? Storm had his DC-15S Blaster Pistol out and was firing rounds at the remaining two ackleys. Rockets were useless in close quarters.... [Read More]
On the second thought, I'll go with: Name: Optimos Prime Species: Human Eye Colour: Grey Hair Colour: Brown Favourite Weapon(s): Lightsaber, vibro blade, DC-17m/attachments Lightsaber Colour(s): Red Favourite Ship(s): Majestic Strike (Modified Arc-1... [Read More]
Alright, I'll work on the char sheet in a bit. He'll probably be Exodious Prime, even though he lived in KotOR times, lol. Oh well, he's just a character. I suppose I could his bother Auxidious, he'd probably be dead by now too. Or maybe Exodious' un... [Read More]
Nice fic. It does need some editing and it is kind of confusing. Think of it this way, you've got some room to improve. :D You'll get the hang of writing and your chapters will hopefully slow down and become easier to understand. If you've got some t... [Read More]
I had two chapter three's. bballforlife pointed it out to me. I fixed it. Thanks for the reply. I was planning on having some action in this chapter, but then I decided that they'd take out the turrets next chapter rather than have one really long ch... [Read More]
p.s. and even 1 spartan v.s. 200,000,000,000,000 commandos would still win (read pro log in the fall of reach, and the first strike) Sorry, bcw81, but commandos are way better than grunts. Yeah, I've read the prologue.... [Read More]
I totally agree with you, MachineCult. I also wish that the blaster attachment was more powerful. I guess weapons just aren't that great in the SW universe *BF* lol. Or maybe the enemies are just more powerful?... [Read More]