JediMaster12

Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode

11-20-2006, 2:04 AM
#24

Which makes me wonder if he really reads my fics :lol: Just kidding :xp: CSI: That was a good chapter. I found a slight difficulty and I think it was just tense issues but overall you have gotten better at writing in English. You've come a long way... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode

JediMaster12

11-17-2006, 1:09 PM
#21

I'm slowly killing him because lately I haven't posted a new chapter though I have three ready to go. The waving of the manuscript involves my current WIP because Pottsie begs for a new chapter or to know some spoilers. Like I will tell :xp: The Hot... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode

JediMaster12

11-16-2006, 2:30 PM
#18

Nice CSI. That was interesting making Revan be Horatio's character. The tough guy burt also caring. Out of curiosity, who is going to play the sister in law? You know Horatio's brother's wife? I have a strange thought in my head but... As to what Po... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode

JediMaster12

11-15-2006, 8:18 PM
#14

Shem is a member of LucasForums. He likes to post under the awesome images thread for KOTOR and TSL and he posts the birthday tributes to the voice actors in the Ahto forum. The newest one is to Ed Asner.... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode

JediMaster12

11-15-2006, 3:46 PM
#12

Bastila is very cultured but also a spoiled Jedi Princess (Canderous' words of course). She lectures much about the darkside. Her get moving line is "Then I suggest we move along." As to personalities, try the official kotor website with al... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode

JediMaster12

11-15-2006, 1:18 PM
#10

Good job CSI. I can see a lot more in terms or exchange and assessment of the situation. What I think would make it better is if you put a bit of the character's personalities from the game into your fic. I see you have Jolee Bindo as your chief coro... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI vs. CSI: Pilot Episode

JediMaster12

11-13-2006, 3:50 PM
#6

Very good CSI. The description is excellent. I see grammar and spelling are improved. As to that part about the kissing, that is fine. What you should censor are things of intimate nature. Often subtle hints imply what is going on and is better than... [Read More]

Posted in: Saddam Hussein

JediMaster12

11-13-2006, 11:28 PM
#63

Oh yeah. You pull crap in foreign countries, they'll bust you big time.... [Read More]

Posted in: Saddam Hussein

JediMaster12

11-13-2006, 10:09 PM
#61

Hey from what I hear, kids didn't get into much trouble back in the day when there was corporal punishment.... [Read More]

Posted in: Replies to stupid comments by poliricians worldwide...

JediMaster12

11-15-2006, 8:29 PM
#35

You got a point there. El Salvador went through a civil war with the whole liberation theology movement with Oscar Romero. The guy was originally a conservative but he became liberal after a member of the clergy was murdered for his beliefs. The Chur... [Read More]

Posted in: Replies to stupid comments by poliricians worldwide...

JediMaster12

11-15-2006, 3:40 PM
#33

So true mach. I know that the conservatives think the US as the devil's resting place. Just thinking about democracy in Iraq reminds me of other times the US has interferred in other world events. It seems to me that each country we touch spoils it.... [Read More]

Posted in: Replies to stupid comments by poliricians worldwide...

JediMaster12

11-15-2006, 1:26 PM
#31

True Jae but Saddaam's reach didn't go deep to where the nomads are. Even then, Islam plays a significant role in the Middle East. Plus we still have talk about Sunni Muslim insurgents and Shia counterattacks. Sounds like Islam still a major player.... [Read More]

Posted in: Replies to stupid comments by poliricians worldwide...

JediMaster12

11-14-2006, 6:00 PM
#28

Hitler's gain to power was brilliant in my opinion. Sure he was a madman but the strategies he used were...good. His book Mien Kampf outlines what he did. It was smart of him to latch onto a war hero like van Leudendorf (forgive spelling). I think... [Read More]

Posted in: Replies to stupid comments by poliricians worldwide...

JediMaster12

11-13-2006, 10:13 PM
#25

My second favorite is Averill Harriman as Ambassador to the United Nations in 1948, calling on the Jews and Arabs to stop fighting 'like Good Christians'. Eh? Now that is dumb. Why do people keep referring to Jews as if they are a separate race? They... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI: Coruscant Episode 1

JediMaster12

11-13-2006, 11:30 PM
#90

I'll read the rest of the Episode and make suggestions too. Always a pleasure to beta for you or anone who needs it.... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

11-15-2006, 1:12 PM
#93

Oh I like you Pottsie. I just enjoy dropping hints and watching you squirm egging to know more. You wish me to be insane? Well Directrice Jae saw to that. Now I am trapped within a little white room and banging my head on the wall. It's all in me hea... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

11-14-2006, 5:45 PM
#91

I know. HK's just misunderstood. Don't cry igyman. I was thinking of having him come save the day. Saving whom, I know but won't tell. I do this to kill Pottsie more. Hehehehe. *clears throat* Anyway I can say that it is not Revan he will be saving... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

11-13-2006, 7:37 PM
#89

Sheesh igyman. Picky picky over a stupid walking tin can! Yeah I know I love him too. That's why he's not on the scrap heap yet. See I kept up my promise and made him babysitter :xp:... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

11-13-2006, 3:58 PM
#86

Here is the next chapter. For some reason I think my creative genius is getting out of hand. Just to let you know, I will do a time leap in a later chapter. I haven't decided yet why but it has to do with eventual escapes and tensions and near war br... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

11-13-2006, 1:30 PM
#85

Thanks igyman. Pottsie, Kirabaros has only one sister: Revan. They aren't blood related but are bonded ie Force Bond.... [Read More]

Posted in: [Other]StarWars: Diddies

JediMaster12

11-20-2006, 1:10 PM
#84

Well. I wrote another diddy and this time it's to Rod Stewart's Faith of the Heart. For some reason the insane idea ran through my head that I should write something concerning the Exile and Atton. A little on the romantic side but given the circumst... [Read More]

Posted in: Planet Databank

JediMaster12

11-15-2006, 4:19 PM
#11

Avalon Location: the Unknown Regions Avalon is the central planet in the Avalonian system of five planets. The five planets are Andorra, Belos, Mikkado, Atzlan and the newest being Amshrey which is closest to the Forbidden Stars. Each of the planet... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

JediMaster12

11-20-2006, 3:10 AM
#482

Now you can see that chivalry isn't dead yet mach. Again good reviews. I have read a few that you have reviewed from KFM and I find them to be entertaining. I personally enjoy the attempts at brevity during the seriousness of TSL.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

JediMaster12

11-14-2006, 6:50 PM
#475

What are you trying to do Pottsie? Give the man a heart attack? Give the ole guy a break. What he churns out comes on his own time. :lol: Just for that I'll dangle my manuscript tantalizingly close to your reach. Then you will be even more tortured a... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

JediMaster12

11-14-2006, 12:32 AM
#472

Nothing wrong with that mach. That just means you know something that us young whippersnappers don't. That's why I value your opinion along with Jae's concerning my fic in terms of critique.... [Read More]

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