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Shuttle Atlantis

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Posted in: Shattered Destiny
  Shuttle Atlantis
10-12-2009, 5:26 PM
#5
Reaching the Jedi temple on Yavin IV was much easier than I thought. I was surprised that I could land my ship in the hanger without fighters being alerted to my presence. I suppose the Jedi believed no one would’ve been stupid enough to innitiate...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shattered Destiny
  Shuttle Atlantis
10-07-2009, 3:08 PM
#4
I think it's pretty cool to be able to see how many people look at my story and how many comment. Do more comments come when you know more people, or is my story in the wrong forum? I would really appreciate any comments people have to make. Even if...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shattered Destiny
  Shuttle Atlantis
10-05-2009, 1:12 PM
#2
Okay I got the title fixed and this is the second piece of the first chapter. It clearly won't follow canon, but I think this gives the story more depth than the original version. --------- I found my way to a pedestal where I could oversee whether...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shattered Destiny
  Shuttle Atlantis
10-02-2009, 2:34 PM
#1
I've been writing a fic about a very minor character from Jedi Academy and think I'm ready to start posting it online. Alora is the twi'lek apprentice who [i]doesn't[i/] get killed at the end of the game. I really liked her and thought she would be a...  [Read More]
Posted in: Conspiracy
  Shuttle Atlantis
09-16-2009, 2:31 PM
#4
Here are some corrections I've noticed. Try to use fewer words if you can and watch those commas. I'll get the rest later. Interesting work. ---- “This is your last warning! Drop your blaster and release the girl, or we’ll send in the T...  [Read More]
Posted in: The New Sith Empire
  Shuttle Atlantis
09-03-2009, 10:33 AM
#3
This story needs a bit of work from my perspective. You should try to keep individual scenes apart when it comes to paragraphs. Don't have Luke, for example, kill the emperor and be on the surface of Endor in the same paragraph. I would say this ha...  [Read More]
Posted in: Why does Machievelli do it?
  Shuttle Atlantis
10-02-2009, 2:16 PM
#42
Oh, BTW, 179 people have viewed this thread, yet less than 10% have voted. Am I that unappreciated? What? Do you believe that everyone who looks at this forum is a member? I've been reading content from this site for months and only recently decided...  [Read More]
Posted in: I, Avenian
  Shuttle Atlantis
09-14-2009, 6:00 PM
#32
Read....  [Read More]
Posted in: A Soul Adrift
  Shuttle Atlantis
10-14-2009, 4:04 PM
#137
I see I wasn't the only one writing a fic about a red twi'lek. I have to admit that I read this a few months ago, but I didn't really comment on it ever. I've not read your last three chapters, but I'll get around to it. This is a very interesting...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Shuttle Atlantis
10-12-2009, 6:20 PM
#1071
Alora's Salvation (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=200835) Shuttle Atlantis Set in Jedi Academy II: Having been defeated yet again, Alora contemplates changing her future Considering how most of the Dark, Jedi, Sith, Reborn whatever act...  [Read More]