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mshcherbatskaya

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Posted in: Intoxication
  mshcherbatskaya
12-25-2008, 6:09 AM
#1
This is the first half of the story, which got quite a bit longer than I intended, so I'm going to post it in halves to avoid the dreaded wall o' text. The story itself is fourth in a series I'm writing which was going to be three stories, stretched...  [Read More]
Posted in: December '08: The Secrets of the Holidays
  mshcherbatskaya
12-03-2008, 10:23 PM
#18
Ah, that's too bad - I had something about 2/3 done, but with the change it topic, I'll just have to trot it over to KFM instead....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Return Chapter 1
  mshcherbatskaya
11-28-2008, 5:36 PM
#4
You had some really nice imagery in there, I particularly like the idea of the Shadow being soft, and the comparison to the closet monster conveys the nature of his fear perfectly. However, you use passive voice a lot. "A shaky breath was drawn...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
12-08-2008, 3:23 PM
#33
My co-writer was just noting that I have a bit of a flare for freaky psychology. I don't know if it's a takes one to know one, but I'm glad it works, however it works. Thanks! The readership for something like this is pretty limited, I think, so it'...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
12-07-2008, 2:27 AM
#31
Nahila looked at the calendar. Almost a month now, and no surprise attacks, sabotage, or assassinations. Perhaps the Sith woman wasn't a threat. Or rather, Nahila reminded herself, perhaps the woman was not a Sith. Erzabet had warmed a little since t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
12-03-2008, 10:17 PM
#29
Nahila looked up at Ketan as he entered the room. "Ah, I was just about to send for you. So... how is our 'guest'? He had tried to rehearse this conversation somewhat, to prepare his points. "Very difficult. I could not get a word out of h...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
12-02-2008, 10:29 PM
#26
Cain was happy. This was not unheard of. It would be more accurate to say that Cain was quite content, but happy sufficed, and thus, Cain was happy. Cain was happy for a reason: he had received a note, a very, very impersonal note, informing him t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
12-01-2008, 2:39 PM
#23
Aaaaahhh, OK. Sorry. Think I'm defensive much when it comes to my editing? My excuse is that, at about 65,000 words now, editing is a bit brutal, and most chapters get a triple comb-through....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-30-2008, 10:51 PM
#21
"Sith Lies" :D Nice addition to the story--keep it up! I'm not sure if that is intended as a correction, but the sentence in the story is correct. "Sith lie" - "lie" is a verb, like "Horses run." I'm glad y...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-30-2008, 5:44 PM
#19
Nahila watched Cain storm out of the room. Oh, the pity! So misunderstood! So unappreciated! So enamoured with his own dramatic flair she wanted to pour a glass of water over his head. He was probably stomping back to his room and throwing himself do...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-28-2008, 11:19 PM
#14
Should I be posting the chapters in the thread or separately? Is there an established way to do this?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-28-2008, 7:59 PM
#12
THE OLD REPUBLIC: QUEEN OF HEARTS - Chapter 3 Once again, Cain was brooding at his desk. The Jedi were supposed to uphold justice and peace, yet there was none of either to be seen here. That woman, Sith or not, had sought sanctuary and instead, a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-27-2008, 12:04 AM
#8
OK, see this is what happens when you encourage me. I will be reading and giving feedback on the boards as well, like any good citizen of fandom. I'm just getting some stuff nailed down right now....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-26-2008, 11:54 PM
#7
An Introduction: Ythros... No last name... never a last name... or did he forget it? He can't remember. He is human, and from his features seems to be of one of the core worlds, except for the scars. The scars come from a lot of worlds. They tattoo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-26-2008, 10:21 PM
#6
Well to start with, it blew my mind. This is the best piece of fiction I've read in CEC for quite a while now, because it appears to be only one that is sincere. Grammar and pacing is excellent for the most part, characters are deep, dialogue reasona...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-25-2008, 8:09 PM
#2
I'd love any feedback on this. I'm relatively new to this fandom and would particularly like to know if I've screwed up the canon in any way. This is actually the first installment in a big project, and among other things, I'm wondering if I'm postin...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Old Republic: Queen of Hearts
  mshcherbatskaya
11-23-2008, 8:31 PM
#1
She could have been a Czerka regional manager with the way she was dressed, a stylish, black business suit with a long fitted jacket and knee-length skirt, and she wore it to good effect. It showed off her figure without being immodest, and with her...  [Read More]
Posted in: okay first fanfic
  mshcherbatskaya
11-28-2008, 6:17 PM
#4
The main thing that jumps out at me is that your punctuation really needs work, and you need to learn where to break your text into paragraphs. Get that nailed down and you will be off to a much better start....  [Read More]
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