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HIGH ON PIE 14

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Posted in: A Soul Adrift
 HIGH ON PIE 14
09-13-2008, 3:09 PM
#12
I like my Twi'leks! :D Its always good to see a new writer on the forums. I'm new to the CEC as well, so, I know your trouble with this. Don't worry about cranking out chapters too fast. We'll wait for you. ;) As Bee said, this is not "horrible&...  [Read More]
Posted in: Ace's High
 HIGH ON PIE 14
09-07-2008, 9:20 PM
#2
I like the idea for your fic. :) I love my Zabraks! The only problem with your fic is grammar. Normally I'm not the grammar police around here (as my own grammar is mediocre at best) but there are a few mistakes. For example: Officer Valkan can tak...  [Read More]
The game is fun. Duh! QFT. :^: ~HOP...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Willow Tree
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-30-2008, 4:00 PM
#2
Intersting start. The description of the willow tree and its effect on Katrina were very well written. I am intersted as to why she is where she is for holiday. I'll keep my eye on this... ~HOP...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Death Incarnate
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-26-2008, 8:38 PM
#3
BFA never was the patient one :xp: Very nice. I always enjoy mysterious prologues. God, you are just full of ideas, aren't you RakataDark? I have greatly enjoyed Urban Death, so I'm really looking forward to this one! ~HOP...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bracelets and Prose
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-25-2008, 9:04 PM
#5
Kinda...have not written in ages. In my English class we had to read A LOT poetry. Them we had a quiz on about 70-80 poems and had to say the meter and rhyme scheme of all of them. :wornout: Now its just a habit. :) That subtle change makes this poe...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bracelets and Prose
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-25-2008, 8:15 PM
#3
Your poetry certainly is not embarrasing. :) I found it quite good. Now you have tempted me *runs to dig out old poetry* See what you started BFA? :xp: Interesting that the last stanza does not use the AABB rhyme scheme as the rest do. Why is that -...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bounty Hunting
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-25-2008, 5:06 PM
#3
Same as Burnseyy. I think you have a good idea. There are a few grammar mistakes, such as using "two" instead of "to" or not using capitals in names or the begining of sentences. I am not the grammar police, in fact I am not even...  [Read More]
Posted in: Harry Potter vs. Lord of the Rings
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-25-2008, 7:35 PM
#23
Neither. Seen nor read either. :drop2: You are missing out Rev! At the very least, you should see the LOTR movies. You don't even have to read the books to understand them. ~HOP...  [Read More]
Posted in: Harry Potter vs. Lord of the Rings
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-25-2008, 5:34 PM
#16
Lord of the Rings has Gimli. He kicks the asses of ALL HP characters. As long as he does not have to jump over a chasm to get to them. :xp: Pigwidgeon could give him a run for his money though! ~HOP...  [Read More]
Posted in: Harry Potter vs. Lord of the Rings
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-25-2008, 3:41 PM
#14
I went with Harry Potter, but only because I’ve actually read all the Harry Potter books. I tried reading LOTR when I was younger, but it just could not hold my interest. Enjoyed the LOTR movies, but the movies did not inspire me to pick up the boo...  [Read More]
Posted in: Harry Potter vs. Lord of the Rings
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-25-2008, 12:29 AM
#4
harry potter has luna lovegood. case closed mother****er :carms: Damn right! And through her we have Nargles, Blibbering Humdingers, Gulping Pimplies, and the Umbungular Slashkilter, so Ha! :xp: Though I love both LOTR and HP. :) They are so differ...  [Read More]
HJIHJ OIN P[E 14 Urgh...put in too many I's yet when I needed one in "PIE" I hit a bracket. :xp: I bet the shift key is hard. Thankfully I'm in all caps so I didn't need it. Eh, I was close. :D @Ctrl Alt Del: pretty skinny I'm guessing...  [Read More]
Posted in: Dictionary game
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-25-2008, 1:27 AM
#2
Ummm...a bridge? I wonder how many people will cheat just look for the definition on dictionary.com? :xp: ~HOP...  [Read More]
Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension
 HIGH ON PIE 14
09-03-2008, 9:38 PM
#19
Revan's manipulations were very good. I enjoyed his DS character. As Burnseyy, said, this is a well rounded DS character. I hope to see your new fic...probably when I least expect it. :) P.S. Die, Malak, die! :xp: *cheers* ~HOP...  [Read More]
Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-22-2008, 11:27 PM
#9
Considering that you were following the game's DS ending, this is good. :) I too would have likewd Mission and Juhani to aid Revan. The evidence you just gave would be enough to suggest they could, realistically turn to aid Revan. And Zalbaar would f...  [Read More]
But, they are useful when your battling Malak, and fighting loads after loads of dark jedi. Because the dark jedi laugh themselves stupid, and can't even stand. :xp: ~HOP...  [Read More]
Malak wore a suit that was of the opposite intent. Neither could be taken seriously with that rubbish! Malak can't be taken seriously no matter what he wears. :xp: ~HOP...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Dark Path
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-24-2008, 6:27 PM
#28
Haha, I like that light note at the ending! Your fic has a very mysterious feel to it, that draws the reader in. Aleira is a curious girl, but I sense there is a l;ot she is holding back, like her little outburst at the end. So there is a possibilit...  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnsey's Art
 HIGH ON PIE 14
09-07-2008, 8:56 PM
#53
@HOP (if he reads this): Marit is well under way :) Yay! :D Nice Atton. To me it looks like he just landed from a jump or somthing. Sort of rushed? I like your art better than most of the stuff I'm studying in AP Art History. :)...and those guys to...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-30-2008, 3:44 PM
#40
Ah, and here is some of the artwork I've asked Burnseyy to do for me, as I mentioned earlier. I'm not quite the artist that she is, so I asked her to draw the characters for me. So thats Jacen for you. She is also drawing some of the other characters...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-23-2008, 9:32 PM
#37
Yeah, Aruil will be a bit more serious in the next chapter. I have not yet decided where to go with Jacen and Marit's "friendship" :) I used the water to counterbalance her lack of pazaak skills. Next chapter should be up soon, and will exp...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-23-2008, 2:47 PM
#35
Yeah, commas have never been my strong point, I'm one of those people who just sprinkles them around hoping they are right. :xp: Although I'm fairly sure that since bad and sinking describe the feeling, there should be commas there. Aruil is my favo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-22-2008, 11:37 PM
#33
Thanks DY! Well as we all know, the traitor plays a big part in this story, although we don't know who it is. I know I've asked this before, but as the next chapter is "Traitor Revealed" I would like to know where people stand on that now...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
 HIGH ON PIE 14
08-22-2008, 10:59 PM
#31
Chapter 3 contd: Jacen and Jorrin stepped out of the nondescript CCI speeder. Jacen inhaled a breath of Coruscant’s cool night air. He looked up at the towering, glittering edifice before him and read the sign over the door: “Omnicorp Galactical...  [Read More]
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