Rabish Bini

03-17-2009, 2:21 AM
#2

Interesting, when I saw the thread title I thought it was going to be on how to create a moving text crawl, but this is still useful nonetheless. Nice.... [Read More]

Posted in: A small poem for school magazine

Rabish Bini

02-25-2009, 2:42 AM
#6

Am I Already Dead? How sad am I to think I am dead? Why life is turning out to be a threat? Tears falling with nothing said, What about "where did my luck go in the end?" No care for the feelings of one such as mine, For the sake of pleas... [Read More]

Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things

Rabish Bini

03-30-2009, 2:10 AM
#104

To be honest, I didn't like this one either, the first two lines ruin the rest of the poem, it sounds lighthearted, and then all of a sudden it goes dark, best keep it in one mood. The lines were also screwed up, some too short, others too long. Did... [Read More]

Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things

Rabish Bini

03-27-2009, 1:25 AM
#102

That's probably a good idea :xp:... [Read More]

Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things

Rabish Bini

03-26-2009, 4:30 AM
#100

Geez, talk about dark :xp: But, to be honest, I didn't like it, the rhymes were a bit off, such as 'spit' and 'it', the choice of words was not to my liking, and it was a tad short. Just my 2 cents Hey, I can't like all of your poems :xp:... [Read More]

Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things

Rabish Bini

03-13-2009, 11:08 PM
#97

I refuse to believe you wrote a light-hearted piece :carms: Beautiful piece nonetheless, although I prefer your dark stuff ;)... [Read More]

Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things

Rabish Bini

03-02-2009, 2:22 AM
#95

Ah yes, it does fit. Very well done :thumbsup:... [Read More]

Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things

Rabish Bini

02-27-2009, 1:01 AM
#93

Wow... Words cannot describe that, so I won't bother. Although I would like to know what it's about, I didn't quite figure it out.... [Read More]

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