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JediAthos

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Posted in: How do you write your chapters?
 JediAthos
09-21-2006, 7:23 PM
#8
I'm kind of old fashioned in that I carry a couple of notebooks with me and do my writing on paper, and then transfer it to the computer using word....  [Read More]
Posted in: The hunt for the greys.
 JediAthos
09-15-2006, 7:44 PM
#3
I like the beginning so far. I noticed a couple minor spelling errors but that's about it. I look forward to reading more!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Fanfics
 JediAthos
08-29-2006, 1:32 AM
#8
Well, since I'm still working on posting my first fic, I haven't really examined the archives yet. I'm more interested in feedback on my writing at this point in the game anyway....  [Read More]
Posted in: Lone Free Mercenary
 JediAthos
08-19-2006, 8:36 PM
#10
The court system regrets to inform you that murder, for whatever reason, is still murder. :) That said I like it Pottsie. Interesting that you would pick a Transdoshan. Do you find it harder to write than say a human character?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Official Fanfiction Thread
 JediAthos
08-14-2006, 10:06 PM
#16
In the fic that I'm in the process of posting, I created a couple of new characters and they have interacted with characters from the movies and the video games. Also, in one that I just started I've created new characters whose story I'm telling amo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Official Fanfiction Thread
 JediAthos
08-14-2006, 5:42 AM
#2
Nice idea Pottsie. I've only got one fic up right now and you can find it in my sig. I am very much enjoying reading many of the others that are posted though I sometimes have trouble remembering which ones I've read and which ones I haven't!...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
 JediAthos
09-11-2006, 5:52 AM
#103
Very well written Tysy, it was kind of sad to see Tysy so utterly broken in the end, but then I guess they can't all have happy endings now can they?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
 JediAthos
09-04-2006, 4:43 AM
#95
Very nice Tysy, it's interesting to see the events of and following Anakin's turn from another point of view. Where will our heroine go now I wonder?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
 JediAthos
08-29-2006, 1:27 AM
#87
I agree with Jae, a very accurate portrayal of an intense moment. Well done Tysy...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
 JediAthos
08-25-2006, 3:11 AM
#82
I kinda like where you're headed now. I like the idea that there could have been someone that Anakin talked to besides Padme and Obi Wan...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
 JediAthos
08-19-2006, 7:21 PM
#76
Well, we know Anakin's fate, unless Tysy is planning on rewriting Star Wars history, but our heroine's is a bit more clouded. Perhaps once Anakin falls he'll turn Tysy...at any rate..I'm loving this story, keep it up!...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
 JediAthos
08-19-2006, 12:31 AM
#70
So...our heroine has fallen. Kind of reminds me of what Kreia said in KOTOR 2.."it is a quite thing to fall, but far more terrible to admit it."...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
 JediAthos
08-14-2006, 9:40 PM
#55
Wow...very intriguing...I love the cliffhanger and I can't wait to see what Tysy does with this....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
 JediAthos
08-13-2006, 11:47 PM
#51
Tysy, I would say that yes you've stayed pretty true to the characters that you've used from the Star Wars universe. Palpatine's speech was something that I would consider near perfect. I don't think that you character Tysy is at all too much of a...  [Read More]
Posted in: Tips to a Good Fanfic!
 JediAthos
08-14-2006, 9:32 PM
#32
Yaggles I think you can find the lightsaber forms on wookiepedia as well. Here's the url for that site http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page...  [Read More]
Posted in: Tips to a Good Fanfic!
 JediAthos
08-14-2006, 6:00 AM
#29
Someone may have mentioned this, but a little research never hurts. We have the experts thread but websites like the datbank on starwars.com and wookiepedia can be helpful if you need some help with timeline or specifics like ship capabilities and su...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] My first attempt (Be Gentle)
 JediAthos
09-22-2006, 1:11 AM
#41
The Annihilator and her support ships dropped out of hyperspace at the edge of the Telos system. “We’ve arrived in the Telos system Admiral,” Captain Veridan reported. “Very good Captain, we will do as Lord Malice has instructed. Set up the...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] My first attempt (Be Gentle)
 JediAthos
09-11-2006, 9:42 PM
#40
Ow!” Jade exclaimed for about the 30th time in the last hour. Assembling a lightsaber was not nearly as easy as Master Skywalker’s instructions had made it seem to be. She had gotten the majority of the components into the hilt, but the focusin...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] My first attempt (Be Gentle)
 JediAthos
08-25-2006, 4:53 AM
#39
Thank you for the input. What did you think of the trials sequence as a whole?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] My first attempt (Be Gentle)
 JediAthos
08-25-2006, 2:57 AM
#37
The voice had come from behind her, and it was a voice that Jade knew. She turned around and saw a form walking toward her. The apparition was bathed in a soft blue glow and Jade immediately recognized the man. “Father?” “Yes Jade, it’s me...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Dark Apprentice [Fan-Fiction]
 JediAthos
09-11-2006, 9:54 PM
#17
I agree with Pottsie. I'm very much looking forward to reading this as anyone who has played the mod has to be!...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
 JediAthos
09-27-2006, 3:29 AM
#116
hmm....well, I have written something into the fic that I'm currently posting here and I was looking for some way to explain it, hence the reason I asked the question. I kind of like the explanation you referenced RH...the only thing I would have to...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
 JediAthos
09-26-2006, 7:11 PM
#112
okay experts here's one for you....do you think that in the realm of science fiction that one could rationalize a ship and possibly even droids being perserved over several thousand years?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
 JediAthos
09-13-2006, 8:03 AM
#107
My little addition to this discussion is that the title Commodore is actually used in the US Navy for the commander of an Amphibious Squadron, or PHIBRON. The person's actual rank is Captain. For example, when I served on an amphibious assault ship f...  [Read More]
A very good read so far wild. I thoroughly enjoy the idea of a reincarnated Sith Lord, and the Sith Hunters are a really cool addition to the universe....  [Read More]
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