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igyman

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Posted in: [FIC]Clone Trooper Jedi
  igyman
07-14-2006, 1:09 PM
#11
Malurk seems more interesting than I first thought. Is there a background story for his methods of training?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Clone Trooper Jedi
  igyman
07-12-2006, 4:44 PM
#5
As the others said, nice writing skills, but you might want to work a little on your spelling, since I noticed quite a few spelling mistakes, grammar's fine though....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-15-2006, 1:16 PM
#32
You might be right about the fool part, but I've read that the Jedi of that time divided into those who thought that stopping the Vong is a Jedi's mandate and those who considered such agressive actions to be against Jedi principles. Sorna was one of...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-15-2006, 8:49 AM
#30
Chapter III Ralik arrived at the site with twelve of his best warriors. It was the former industrial quarter of Coruscant, now it has been turned into a network of biot production facilities managed by the Shaper caste. Ralik took his amphistaff and...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-14-2006, 1:03 PM
#28
I like the start. I can't speak to the accuracy of the Vong details because I haven't read the Vong books. I would add a little more scene description to add color so I can 'see' what's going on. When you can, let the characters talk to each other t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-14-2006, 3:48 AM
#23
Chapter II Xerx's office was filled with battle trophies, weapons and armor taken from dead enemies. Xerx liked to keep them there to serve as a reminder of the Yuuzhan Vong biot supremacy over the ''mechanical abominations''. Ralik arrived to find...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-13-2006, 1:08 PM
#21
I'm just glad that length is the only problem, 'cause that can be fixed pretty easily....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-13-2006, 9:14 AM
#17
There will be a kind of battle in the third chapter, after that there's one in the fifth and the sixth chapter, I won't go into details, because I don't want to spoil the story for you....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-13-2006, 8:50 AM
#15
Thanks for the suggestion. I've already managed to prolong some chapters, I'll see what I'm going to do with the rest....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-13-2006, 5:23 AM
#13
Yeah, I know, they seemed longer when I typed them in Word. The second chapter isn't longer than this one, but there are longer ones. Right now there are five more short chapters (of course, they aren't all in a row), but I'll try to make them longer...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-13-2006, 4:18 AM
#11
Chapter I An ancient chamber, a dark, hooded figure and the whispered words: ''Welcome to the fold.'' This dream has not woke Ralik up for the first time, infact he has been having the same dream for at least a month. Every night he sat on his bed a...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-12-2006, 5:08 PM
#10
Well, neither did I, but from what I've read about them (those two links from my first post), they definitely seem that way, at least when it comes to Jedi....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-12-2006, 4:51 PM
#8
Thanks for the feedback, Lord Konohomaru. I took a look at your ''Clone Trooper Jedi'', you can read my comment on it there. Anyway, tomorrow I'll post the first chapter, hope you guys read it and comment it. Be honest, but not brutal. :) It's my fi...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-12-2006, 1:05 PM
#6
Thanks for the initial comments people. I appretiate them. @RC: You'll know the answer to that in the first chapter. Just be patient. I'll post it soon enough, until then I don't want to spoil it. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-12-2006, 7:52 AM
#2
Heir of Darkness Prologue It is a time of great despair in the galaxy. The transformation of Coruscant into Yuuzhan'tar is long since finished, the surviving Jedi of Yuuzhan'tar are in hiding and are constantly being hunted by the relentless Yuuzha...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  igyman
07-12-2006, 7:50 AM
#1
Before we begin: Well, I've finished my first fanfic, so it's time to post it. As you will see it takes place during the Yuuzhan Vong occupation of Coruscant. Now, as some of you may know, I'm a guy who never read a Star Wars book in his life, so th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Redemption of Dustil Onasi
  igyman
07-12-2006, 8:35 AM
#23
This one seemes very interesting, but it has one fatal flaw - Malak destroyed the academy on Dantooine, so you might want to change the location to Coruscant. Looking forward to seeing more. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Galactic Conquest II: Rebel Rebound
  igyman
07-15-2006, 12:48 PM
#77
Another great one, RC. I tried my best, but I couldn't find anything I don't like in this one either. Keep it up....  [Read More]
Posted in: Galactic Conquest II: Rebel Rebound
  igyman
07-13-2006, 1:05 PM
#72
Great action packed chapter, RC. What? I bet you were expecting me to find something that's not quite there, well I'll have to disappoint you this time - this was one great chapter....  [Read More]
Posted in: Galactic Conquest II: Rebel Rebound
  igyman
07-11-2006, 2:47 PM
#62
Not yet, but who knows, if I can somehow put him to use in my story, I most certainly will....  [Read More]
Posted in: Galactic Conquest II: Rebel Rebound
  igyman
07-11-2006, 1:51 PM
#60
No problem, you'll have the chance to return the favour, since I've decided to try to write a fanfic of my own, I'm currently writing chapter five and in a day or two, I'll start posting....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Lord
  igyman
07-12-2006, 8:31 AM
#182
Wow. And i thought my chapters were long. It's interesting to see different endings to the story, but what I don't generally like is using the existing characters as the main characters of a story.This story had to be done in that way, that I underst...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Amongst the Ruins
  igyman
07-12-2006, 1:11 PM
#188
Wow, Niner this is good stuff. It has almost a movie-like feeling to it. Keep it up....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  igyman
07-12-2006, 3:45 PM
#149
I've got a little extra time on my hands, so I've decided to check out a few FanFics here and I've got to say this is very, VERY good. JM12, you might consider being a professional writer, if you aren't one already. P.S. (Yeah I'm kinda gathering re...  [Read More]
Posted in: Mace Windu: Jedi Master Reborn
  igyman
07-13-2006, 3:24 PM
#205
A tragic ending. Too bad both Mace and Tara are dead, I really liked them. Especially Mace....  [Read More]
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