JasraLantill

01-22-2006, 6:44 AM
#11

Long chapter? It didn't seem long with all the wonderful action scenes. Looking forward to the next chapter. (Hanging on the edge of my seat, in fact!) Well done!... [Read More]

Posted in: Dark Mirror

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 11:55 AM
#8

Oooh! Interesting to see Carth as a baddie! And so ruthless at that! Good work so far. Keep it up!... [Read More]

Posted in: Dark Mirror

JasraLantill

01-20-2006, 10:58 PM
#4

Very intriguing plot concept! And well written--already I feel sympathetic with Amol and Cullah and Denara. (Think she might give Bastila a run for her money.) I'm hooked! Keep up the good work!... [Read More]

Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.

JasraLantill

01-18-2006, 8:08 AM
#49

Whoa! Nice one! :clap2: Didn't even see that coming. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Love how you write the fight scenes, btw. Very easy to visualise the action. Keep up the good work!... [Read More]

Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.

JasraLantill

01-10-2006, 8:05 PM
#43

Wow! You really know how to work that suspense angle! Have me hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 5:13 PM
#36

Ithra followed Berland into the port dormitory. Once the door was closed, she shouted angrily, “Berland, you promised!” “No,” he said between clenched teeth. “I said I would try.” “Oooh!” she bellowed furiously. “I can’t believ... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey

JasraLantill

01-20-2006, 4:51 AM
#35

Thanks for the encouraging comments from you both! I've written the story in a synopsis form all the way through and I'm 'filling in' the chapters as I go. Every crew member has a part to play, so rest assured HK will have some blaster time in future... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey

JasraLantill

01-19-2006, 8:14 AM
#32

Bastila was alone in the cockpit, sitting in front of the navigation station double checking the Ebon Hawk’s progress to Jantessa, when she felt a pair of warm hands gently grip the back of her neck. “You’re tense,” Rade said as his hands b... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey

JasraLantill

01-15-2006, 6:47 PM
#30

Berland was working on his report for Prefect Keel when Ithra returned to the dormitory. From the corner of his eye he watched her sit down heavily on the edge of her bed and let out a sigh, though whether it was one of relief or exhaustion he couldn... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey

JasraLantill

01-09-2006, 8:04 PM
#28

Ithra had taken a wrong turn in the corridor when leaving the med bay and ended up in the maintenance bay, now doubling as the cargo bay since its conversion into a temporary dormitory. Mission, the Mandalorian, and Zalbaar were grouped around a larg... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey

JasraLantill

01-07-2006, 10:20 PM
#27

Jolee was kneeling in front of a storage cabinet in the med bay busy inventorying his supplies, when he heard someone behind him knock lightly on the hatch frame. His eyes rolled as he turned to confront the interloper. “Look, can’t you see I’... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey

JasraLantill

01-07-2006, 9:37 PM
#26

The door to the starboard dormitory was open when Berland approached it with Ithra in tow. Sitting in the middle of the floor, cross-legged and eyes closed, Juhani appeared to be meditating. Berland quietly cleared his throat. Juhani’s eyes slowl... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-22-2006, 10:49 AM
#627

As she heard Crystal’s voice in her head, Jasra held up her hand before anyone could respond to her queries. “Nevermind. You don’t have to answer that,” she said hurriedly to the Doctor, while she took a couple of cautious steps backward towa... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-22-2006, 10:13 AM
#625

Jasra hesitated in following Crystal, distracted and suddenly uncomfortable at the sudden arrival of two more beautiful women—one wearing a tight violet-red suit, and the other a uniformly purple short skirted one. The last time she’d seen ‘com... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 9:23 PM
#622

“A telepath?!” Jasra visibly blanched as her thoughts suddenly shifted from Atton to…. If Crystal’s been in my mind then…then she knows that I disobeyed Master Kelva. Knows I didn’t stay hidden like I was told to. Knows I distracted h... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 8:02 PM
#619

“Cute?” Jasra snorted. “I don’t recall you calling me ‘cute’. I believe you said I was….” She paused while Crystal cringed and spoke in a strange tongue. Her eyes flicked between Atton and Kira, and suddenly she was aware of the relat... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 7:35 PM
#616

Jasra cocked an eyebrow as she recognised Atton. “I know you,” she said slowly, looking him up and down. She snapped her fingers as she tried to remember where. “You’re….you’re the hundred credit guy. Three years ago. Sig’s place.” Sh... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 4:03 PM
#613

Jasra could feel eyes upon her. She turned her head slowly towards the garage bay where Karda stood in the doorway, staring at her with piercing eyes. Great, another Jedi, she thought. He looked vaguely familiar. Karda, most likely. She wondere... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 11:45 AM
#611

Jasra’s senses were on overload. Adrenaline coursed through her body—a delayed reaction from her narrow escape from her fiery ship and the disorienting journey in the Doctor’s blue box—making it difficult for her to control her fear while sti... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 12:04 AM
#607

Jasra cautiously stepped out of the TARDIS, but instead of her own ship, she found herself in the Ebon Hawk. She frowned, unsure of what had just taken place. She turned around to face the Doctor. “Who *are* you?” she asked him again. “And wha... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-20-2006, 11:42 PM
#605

Jasra slowly rubbed the spot on her forehead. Her eyes narrowed. “Who are you?” she said slowly. Suddenly, a nearby panel spluttered another shower of sparks, then exploded in a burst of flames. “Oh, who bloody cares!” she said, bolting out... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-20-2006, 11:32 PM
#603

Having had to shield her eyes from the exploding panel, Jasra struggled to focus on the strange man was peeking out from the box that had just appeared before her. Oxygen deprivation, she surmised. “I must have a hull breach somewhere,” she mut... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-20-2006, 10:43 PM
#601

While the tachyions streaming from the hyperdrive coils of the Ebon Hawk ‘fixed’ the Doctor’s problem, they had an unexpected side effect. The tracer that the Doctor had discovered earlier on Karda’s ship began to vibrate, then glow. *****... [Read More]

Posted in: Knights Of The Old Republic: Darkness Falls

JasraLantill

01-08-2006, 9:41 PM
#584

With her own course to Taris already laid in, Jasra transmitted the landing co-ordinates for the meeting place to the Ebon Hawk. Taris had been virtually destroyed by Malak’s fleet; but there had been some survivors, and the scraggly remnants of t... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] Path of Betrayal

JasraLantill

01-21-2006, 6:03 PM
#18

Sorry I haven't commented earlier. You've got a really good story going. (I love stories with intrigue and complicated plots!) And your story would be even better if you posted the next chapter... :naughty:... [Read More]

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