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Name: Joshua Age: Will be 23 in a month :( Location: Oregon, USA. Favorite music: Demon Hunter, Spoken, Switchfoot, Relient K, Disciple, Pillar and Kutless.... [Read More]
Very interesting. I like the whole beginning with a letter thing. I would like to see more of this Fic very soon. :) Also I have to say, this letter was very poetic and moving. I like how you put yourself in the Exile's shoes, and wrote the letter a... [Read More]
Fantastic job Jae! Superb storytelling mixed with some good descriptive action in this chapter. I can't say enough good things about your Fic. I really laughed out loud at the "Disarmed" comment by Jolee. :) Keep up the great work!... [Read More]
Bravo! Bravo! Great job Jae. You did an excellent job on this chapter and have done so on this whole story so far. I am surely going to be voting for your fic as one of the most original at the end of the year. :) Keep up the great work.... [Read More]
I really liked your last chapter Mach. There was a lot of Yoda-like dialogue, and of course he is my favorite SW character. Can't wait for your next update!... [Read More]
Great job Mach. I am really, really into this story. I can't wait to see how it all ends. I loved these lines by the way. :) “I don’t know. Maybe Hawk or falcon. Something fast! Or maybe Millennium since I‘m going to spend that long for you gu... [Read More]
So it has been over a month since your first chapter John. Where ya at man? This looks good so far, I just noticed it as well. I hope that you haven't forgotten about your story. :(... [Read More]
I think it would be cool if the game was set like 100 years after TSL. And Revan and the Exile would be the force ghost. Guiding you on where to go and what to do in order to defeat the new threat.... [Read More]
First off, great job RC. ;) I absolutely love the way you write your fighting scenes. Whether it be in space or on the ground with sabers, you capture them very well. As for the fighters boosting the cruiser thing. Well, don't the X-wings have the ca... [Read More]
Great chapter RC. You really describe each segment very well. I am really enjoying this story so far. The only complaint I have is that your chapters always seem so short, it leaves me wanting more. If I had to guess I would say that last chapter was... [Read More]
Her whole point was to not kill her. If she had killed her in her anger then she would have fallen to the dark side. She knew that she had only rendered her unconscious. Her wave of light was meant for just that. But thanks for the comment. :)... [Read More]
Chapter XIX “You fool! Nothing will stop me from killing Vandar and taking my rightful place as Lord of the Sith.” Jasra sneered. “I’ve heard enough.” Linduu said. “You have killed my Husband and my Father. The pain that is shooting th... [Read More]
Lol, I know, I know RC. I just thought that someone would comment on it, that's all. ;) Geez, your post sounds like the words I would hear if I were to climb that really high mountain and ask the Guru the meaning of life. ;)... [Read More]
You mean no one is going to comment on the cool move I made up? Where Linduu channeled the force through her saber, picking up the Sith like rag dolls, twirling them about in the air and then sending them smashing into the wall to meet their dooms? M... [Read More]
Chapter XVIII Flashes of pink and red collided in every direction imaginable as Linduu used her double bladed saber to defend herself with unmatched skill. Still, battling four Sith assassins at once was all she could handle and then some. She use... [Read More]
Working on my new chapter as I type this. I should have it up later this morning, or perhaps tomorrow morning. :) Thanks for your patience.... [Read More]
Wow Jasra! Great job. I like how Ithra has gone all innocent and nice now. For a moment I thought that she might have a crush on Rade. ;) Perhaps she does and you just haven't written it yet eh? Anyway, the way you described her and the way I picture... [Read More]
Wow! What in the heck is Ithra doing on the Ebon Hawk?? You freakin did it this time Jasra, you ended it on a flippin cliffhanger. Now I want the next chapter, and I want it now! Ok well I guess as soon as possible anyway. Great job, excellent chapte... [Read More]