machievelli

Posted in: The Farce is strong in this one.

07-03-2010, 3:01 AM
#1

The Farce is strong in this one. This last week I reviewed May The Farce Be With You. By Jiara. I thought I had read it before but I had not. Instead I had read what you might call it's sequel, May The Farce Be With You Too. Over in Tysyacha's Inq... [Read More]

Posted in: in the eyes of the hunter: tales of the bounty hunter lern Alviin

machievelli

06-30-2010, 2:05 AM
#2

read... [Read More]

Posted in: excerpt from Odyssey II

machievelli

06-25-2010, 5:01 PM
#1

For the defenders, think of humans and aliens not unlike Juhani in the Komets, for the enemy, think of the veliciraptors from Jurassic Park. Defense The final preparations were finished. 32 aircraft; 7 Harriers and 25 Komets took off from Challenge... [Read More]

Posted in: Ten Years of Redemption

machievelli

06-23-2010, 9:51 AM
#2

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Posted in: research, post as PM, because this thread doesn't need to be any longer

machievelli

06-13-2010, 11:06 PM
#1

All right, I have a space ship, with 200 count 'em, 200 humanoids based on cats; Jaguars, pumas, panthers. I need about 196 names. Send them to me. Whoever gives me the most gets a Whatever prize! As for what type of names, I don't care, but if you... [Read More]

Posted in: the lost lord

machievelli

06-08-2010, 10:28 AM
#9

Read; Tysyacha said it best, you’re confusing your readers. I’ll make a deal with you, kid. Send me the entire thing, and I will gladly flesh it out a bit.... [Read More]

Posted in: Changes to Javyars- PLEASE VOTE

machievelli

06-10-2010, 7:54 PM
#18

I see, I Guess I'll Attempt it when the Time comes. Ofcourse it wont be as Good as the Seasoned Competitors But i Will Have a Go Non the Less :D Kid, don't think of it that way. Every one of us started without knowing what to do, and just worked unt... [Read More]

Posted in: Changes to Javyars- PLEASE VOTE

machievelli

06-10-2010, 3:27 PM
#12

I was thinking that the first of the new competition would be a free for all. The only thing I would suggest is that it be Star Wars related or have some element to a LucasArt production. So even Hall could creat a troll that may have stumbled down t... [Read More]

Posted in: Changes to Javyars- PLEASE VOTE

machievelli

06-09-2010, 3:01 AM
#10

I love you too, mach. You're a sweet kid. I wish I had a daughter I could forbid to marry you. More upset that you didn't even write an actual story. You are why I suggested this below; Hey JM12, one suggestion, give the people who want to write a c... [Read More]

Posted in: Changes to Javyars- PLEASE VOTE

machievelli

06-08-2010, 8:24 PM
#8

Yea, this sounds like a good idea. Hardly. The subject can be very interesting, but without a related story idea...yea. I am not the only one who can make that complaint, considering Hallucination won a few months ago with something completely un... [Read More]

Posted in: Changes to Javyars- PLEASE VOTE

machievelli

06-05-2010, 2:51 AM
#3

What she didn't bother to say was that twice I was either the one or one of a pair that suggested subjects, and none of you thought the contest worthy of your attention. I agree with Writer. It's fun to twist your brain around something you might not... [Read More]

Posted in: Chronicles of James Vreson, hero of the colapsing republic

machievelli

06-08-2010, 10:00 AM
#2

read... [Read More]

Posted in: Speak English Or Get Out!

machievelli

06-28-2010, 10:57 PM
#50

Yep, I flat got that completely backward. I did not live up to the measure twice cut once philosophy. Of course in this case it was read twice. I apologize. No problem. COnsidering the people I argue with sometimes here, Doing what they then accuse... [Read More]

Posted in: Speak English Or Get Out!

machievelli

06-28-2010, 10:34 AM
#48

Nope, just look at the last time the U.S. went though this type of debate. In 1986 we had immigration reform, what we really had was amnesty for illegal immigrants. There is nothing new about this debate and it has been going on for way more than a d... [Read More]

Posted in: Speak English Or Get Out!

machievelli

06-28-2010, 2:05 AM
#45

Tim James who is running for Governor of Alabama has an interesting political advertisement. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B9ohsvJHkbY While I'm against illegal immigration, I find this ridiculous and bordering on racism since it not only punishe... [Read More]

Posted in: Israel resorts to emotional blackmail?

machievelli

06-03-2010, 2:49 PM
#59

Held all the cards? Your kidding right, remember that terrorist group that essentially waged guerilla warfare against Britian then declared Palestine to now be Israel? Remember the group Sharon was a part of? Anyone who has the backing of the U.S. an... [Read More]

Posted in: Israel resorts to emotional blackmail?

machievelli

06-02-2010, 2:27 PM
#57

My personal thought is that it would be great if wars were fought by the arses that started them. However that becomes difficult when you have a group that starts and perpetuates and they seem to have a supply of "some idiots with no future.&quo... [Read More]

Posted in: Israel resorts to emotional blackmail?

machievelli

06-02-2010, 12:34 AM
#53

I've never been a great supporter of Israel, but leaving the Israel/Palestine thing aside for a moment to focus on this 'Peace Flotilla', I find it hard to sympathise with the activists. I'm not saying that Israel was right in its response - I think... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-02-2010, 11:15 AM
#1137

in the eyes of the hunter: tales of the bounty hunter lern Alviin (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=204472) Exoduz During KOTOR on Nar Shaddaa: A bounty hunter takes a new mission The piece has a lot of the same problems you have display... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

06-25-2010, 3:03 PM
#1136

Ten Years of Redemption (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=204403) Lord Spitfire Pre KOTOR at the end of the Mandalorian Wars: The Exile seeks his future The piece is drab and dreary. The scene is like any bus station I have ever been in,... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

06-24-2010, 10:54 AM
#1135

machievelli, Hey! I am the original author of The Revan Show, which you posted on May 14th. I want to say I am honored and thrilled that my humble little piece received some recognition. It's funny, because I wrote that story YEARS ago, that I shoul... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

06-21-2010, 7:43 PM
#1133

Hi, Thank You machievelli for the kind words reviewing part 1 of my story. Been nearly five years since i wrote it and i have a bit of a guilty conscience for those who left positive comments :-). Maybe i'll play through the game once more, and if i... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

06-18-2010, 11:24 AM
#1131

Gagnerai et Perdrai (I'll Win, I'll Lose) (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=204260) Tysyacha NonSW Fiction: A retelling of an old fairy tale. The piece is spiced up by the author inserting herself into the story. Tysyacha liks to do this... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

06-11-2010, 11:30 AM
#1130

Chronicles of James Vreson, hero of the colapsing republic (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=204127) exoduz No specific era given: Just a day in the life of a street gang. Remember that proper names are always capitalized. Also remember... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

06-04-2010, 12:10 PM
#1129

Dragon Age: Bargaining with Sten! (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=204074) Tysyacha Set in Dragon Age: Doing laundry after the battle The piece is, as she said, short. The end was actually more fun then the rest, because the admonition... [Read More]

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