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Char Ell

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Posted in: Star wars encyclopedia
  Char Ell
04-19-2006, 10:50 AM
#4
Star Wars: The New Essential Chronology by Daniel Wallace is an encyclopedia of sorts. It's basically a summary outline of Star Wars universe characters and events in chronological order. Very informative. You can find it on amazon.com. I used the se...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rate this chapter
  Char Ell
04-13-2006, 12:02 AM
#2
2 out of 5 :) Your story is difficult to read because of the many grammar and punctuation errors. The story also needs fleshing out. Transitions from one idea to the other are too abrupt and left me feeling confused. I had to go back and re-read sev...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shadows and Twilight
  Char Ell
04-11-2006, 10:49 AM
#5
This story will be much darker than its predecessor. Other than that I don't want to give to much of it away. :DThis story will be much darker than Darth Sion: Legacy of Pain? Intriguing. Very good then, I look forward to seeing how your story progre...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Char Ell
04-19-2006, 10:00 AM
#111
What is Talin's problem, getting all snappish and stuff? Just because he wasn't the one who posed the question that got down to business he gets all huffy? If I was in Jae's shoes I would tell him, "Take a chill pill, hombre!"...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Char Ell
04-14-2006, 11:56 PM
#99
Jolee replied, “Love doesn’t condemn you, it saves you. Passion may lead to the dark side, but love doesn’t. They should be teaching Jedi how to control their passions while being in love, not shun it. We shouldn’t avoid the greatest things i...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Char Ell
04-10-2006, 9:34 AM
#85
Oh Jolee. Such a rebel, what with kidnapping his future wife and all. So caveman-ish, heh-heh-heh. :D I do hope how the holocron avoided the destruction of Ossus and came into the hands of the Force Scourged pilot will be revealed in future chapters...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Char Ell
04-10-2006, 1:13 AM
#82
Congrats to Jae Onasi on The Adventures of Jolee Bindo surpassing the 1,000 view milestone! Not too shabby... :thumbsup:...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Char Ell
04-19-2006, 10:26 AM
#111
The gun came up, and Breia’s hand moved. The knife she held was only 75 mm long. But she had forged the blade herself. It went through muscle, bone, and the grip without even slowing down. Corona stared at the hand as the blade came back, removing...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Char Ell
04-18-2006, 9:40 AM
#102
Humor mode way, way, way on: You have this thing for poop, apparently. :D Hey! This could become machievelli's trademark. Any story he writes would have at least one encounter with excrement, heh-heh-heh. ;) Wonderful detail with the weapon descript...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Char Ell
04-16-2006, 9:04 PM
#95
This story gets better and better. IMHO it has a real Star Wars feel to it, albeit an ancient Star Wars feel since its time is set so long before the movies. And a job well done by Sanji. His actions are as one who is a full fledged Jedi Monk and no...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Char Ell
04-14-2006, 10:05 PM
#88
Every family has that black sheep they don't like to talk about. Besides, there's almost 2,000 years between them. What were your ancestors like back around the time of Christ? Good point but I don't even know who my ancestors were 2,000 years ago le...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Char Ell
04-12-2006, 9:33 PM
#82
Those dirty rotten bastages! :forkyou: Oooo, but that's a cunning plan revealed in this chapter. :evil3: It looks bad for Breia and company. And I can't help but think that Daysah is a dead woman after Suli Corona Sunrider is through with her. He r...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Char Ell
04-12-2006, 9:48 AM
#79
A bold move on Tokara Company's part, trying to frame the Jedi as the ones using Echani weapons against the company's colonization efforts. Doesn't make much sense though when the Jedi monks are known for their specialization in melee combat so I can...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Char Ell
04-11-2006, 3:38 AM
#74
^^^ I think you're onto something there, Hallucination.Working on the next part.How about first contact with the Ithorians and a little fun with the Mandalore?Hmmm... another intriguing chapter that only reveals a little more info but still leaves mu...  [Read More]
Posted in: More KOTOR III Possibilty News! (KOTOR MMO Confirmed?)
  Char Ell
04-21-2006, 1:43 AM
#203
Hey, I just read this on SW Tactics, What do you think, is it authentic or what? I can't get any verification on it! It was only posted today. "As a leading representative of Bioware Corp. given the mamoth task... Here's the link http://www.sw...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-17-2006, 9:48 AM
#61
Interesting how you had Danika run around as a target for the Rakatan droids while Mission hacked the ancient computers. While I liked the way you handled not destroying the droid but still allowing the party to get the necessary data, why did you no...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-16-2006, 9:38 PM
#58
I verified in the KotOR game files that the name of the Jedi Master that Juhani struck down is Quatra, not Quarta. Thought you might like to know. :) A neat tweak to the story, having Mission hacking into Davik Kang's bank accounts and withdrawing a...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-14-2006, 10:53 PM
#56
You have expanded on the story from the game quite a bit in these two chapters, Sanderal and Grove. I'm trying to get a feel for how you portray Canderous. Canderous' complete destruction of fellow clan member Sherruk Zion's soochir showed his comple...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-14-2006, 10:49 AM
#51
you'll notice that Vandar doesn't 'yoda speak'.My bad. All the other fics I read depict characters from Yoda's race speaking like Yoda does. I forgot Vandar does not. Some of them spoke of both Ahlan Matale and Rurik Sanderal putting out the call for...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-12-2006, 10:23 PM
#47
I think Master Vandar fell out of his Yoda-speak in that chapter. ;) Great attention to detail in Tests. An interesting choice to have Danika choose the path of a Consular. And she constructs a single-bladed lightsaber instead of a double-bladed one...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-12-2006, 10:54 AM
#43
I started lifting small things, the same ball bearing, then a book, then a chair, finally as I floated with chairs rotating in a circle as I were the sun with it’s planets.I think this sentence needs to be reviewed for grammar. I like how you conti...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-10-2006, 11:45 PM
#38
As for the place you mentioned, congratulations! I didn't even notice that little error until you mentioned it. Have a Whatever prize. I have corrected it.Woo-hoo! :emodanc: That's twice now! Does this mean I can put another line in my sig? Two-time...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-09-2006, 1:05 PM
#33
RE: the interdictor stuff - I agree that an interdictor in the SW universe is a type of ship that carries gravity well generators it can employ to pull ships out of hyperspace. It's just when I see people capitalize the first i in interdictor then I...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-08-2006, 10:36 PM
#30
^^^ Hmmm, so the Interdictor ship class has been present in the SW timeline for 4,000+ years? Seems like quite a long time to have a class called by the same name... EDIT: I looked up the starwars.com databank entry for the Leviathan and it does sta...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Char Ell
04-08-2006, 2:21 PM
#28
^^^ Well, it took a while to read everything from the beginning again. :xp: Taris was a pearl, with layers of beauty, and inside the filth that began it all.An apt image to sum up the planet Taris. I really liked this sentence. The Sith merely drew...  [Read More]
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