Good chapter as always, Kas!'m.
Keep up good work, is all I can say.
Another good chapter, keep it up...
Visas's appearance is a good twist. I thought it was Lana, too.
And I want to thank you for your continuous hard-working. After Jesus? care to explain?
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Lucas Art didn't have an official releace but they didn't say it wouldn't come out so the ods are 50/50.
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Oh? More coming! Yes! Yes, nice, keep up good work, Kas!m!
ya wasnt bad had its flaws but none the less sure you spent lot of hard time and effort in it ...one flaw would have to say is that everyone is in love and married and hooked up with that person or... what happened to the jedi code there? another is everyone is related the jedi of your story are basicly just one big family
wow i just finished reading this and i am amazed theat no one has replied. I wonder where they went? Will you continue to right this story? I hope you do I have thouroghly enjoyed it although some parts i dont agree with, but thats what stories are all about, showing someone's perspective. In every story there will be a part you dont agree with because it isnt your story. Overall a great story.
I had the same problem with my original fic, no one was replying, so I just quit. But I'm not saying that you should, cos this is really wonderfully written, nice, long chapters, beautiful descriptive language, I really hope you continue this, cos I love it.
yeah, it kinda hard to write when it seems like people are ignoring you.
I know how you feel, but you just keep at, you have at least one reader in me ;)
that makes two readers :)