Interesting story Kas'!m, but again very predictable........
Well, Revan.... as usual is the stronger one.. so when it was Revan that said it, I wasn't suprised, part one of Predictability..... part two..... Bastila going to a Dark side cave??? That was totally screaming hello!! I'm gonna have to fight Sith Lords (or their ghosts!)
I think it's OK to point out the predictability issue. However, please keep critiques positive--'That was totally screaming hello!!' is sarcastic. I want to see positive and useful, educational critiques (which does include educating people on flaws), but I don't want to see negative criticism that is more harmful than helpful. --Jae
Sorry Jae, but he asked... I won't do that again.
“Wait,” Revan said. “Don’t you feel that, Aloisius?” That is what I was talking about.... but don't mind that part....
Eh, nice chapter, and it's interesting Mission lost so many lightsabers...
Another good chapter, Kas'!m. :Thumbup:
I sense Trelynn is going to fall to dark side. Darth Aloisius's action is more like Jedi.
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Eh, nice bio, and, eh, nice chapter, looking forward to see more as always.
Great fic so far, looking forward to the next chapter
I uh..... don't, but I know someone whom may....
Wait--is Shaden Lors lightsided Nihilus or simply resurrencted Darth Nihilus? If he's LS, then you stole my idea--If DS, then proceed.
Who me, RMOD? Well yes, I don't like Nihilus, but I don't mind him as much as I used to. Sorry I haven't been replying to this Fic for a while.
Yeah, he's LS.
You stole my idea... Just kidding. That's fine. Go ahead and I look forward to more.
Who me, RMOD? Well yes, I don't like Nihilus, but I don't mind him as much as I used to. Sorry I haven't been replying to this Fic for a while.
Umm..... no Pottsie, I wasn't talkin bout you.... I was talkin bout CSI.......
Hmmm.... LS Nihilus? I'm looking forward to it.
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Eh, don't...It's usual...I think a lot of people just read this but didn't leave a comment...Like Jae, she loves to edit others' post than post an actual comment. However nicely done and looking forward to more.
Another nice chapter, Kas'!m. Looking forward to more.
And it's nice to see redeemed Darth Nihilus [or should I call Shanden Lors?] into action defending Jedi Temple.
And I want to remind you to combine the double posts above. However looking forward to Chapter 8.
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@Pottsie Below:
I agree that author can double-post, but I think the post above can be combined...But if the author is writing a fic, I agree double-posting would be appropriate for splitting out chapters.
And I want to remind you to combine the double posts above. However looking forward to Chapter 8.
Actually, CSI, I believe that authors of their own Fic are allowed to double post.
Another great chapter, Kas'!m. Looking forward to a new chapter.
Another good chapter. Looking forward to more!
Another good chapter. Kas'!m, keep up. I'm still reading your fic...
Very Good... Kas'!m sorry I haven't been able to reply lately, I've just been very busy.... btw I've still been reading your fic... just haven't been able to comment on it....
Another nice chapter, Kas'!m. Ya, we both has work to do, my fic's attention is not that high...
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Nice chapters...Although it's good to see that Visas's eyes are trying to be healed...Frankly, I can't imagine what a Miraluka looks like with eyes...
However, off topic: Kas'im is a Twi'Lek Sith Blademaster (Equivalent to Jedi Battlemaster, who teaches initiates lightsaber techiniques), and Darth Bane's master. He taught Darth Bane all Lightsaber techinique, but at last, he was defeated by Darth Bane.
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