Hello everybody, I'm just starting to make a comicbook of a story from Niner_777, Amongst the Ruins. You can read it here:
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=164927)
I hope you like it. Here is the first page (it's almost done)
http://www.freewebs.com/theonethewayne/page%201%20forum.jpg)
A comic book. This is new. Good luck with it.
Here is a preview from page 2. Hunter looks outside his gunship and is prepairing for landing:
http://www.freewebs.com/theonethewayne/page%202%20prev%20forum.jpg)
OMFG.
We had art. We had stories. We had illustrated stories. AND NOW WE'RE ONTO COMIC BOOKS!!
And considering the quality of artwork here, I'm starting to think this is not real...
BIG THUMBS UP, Theone! Excellent idea, excellent work!
I'm jealous! :p
j/k
I can't wait to see your finished works, Theone. You'll put Dark Horse to shame, thats for sure :D
This is real awesome, no doubt! Maybe we can have a Theone VS Torthane here... :xp:
Glad you made a Thread about the Comic version of Amongst the Ruins. Hope Niner sees this.
Thanks everybody! I'm glad you like it! Btw this is my first comic.
In the Netherlands we don't got Darkhorse so there aren't much Star Wars comics to read :( Only the first four parts of clone wars and shadows of the empire.
I'm jealous! :p
j/k
I can't wait to see your finished works, Theone. You'll put Dark Horse to shame, thats for sure :D
Is Darkhorse that bad :P?
This is real awesome, no doubt! Maybe we can have a Theone VS Torthane here... :xp:
Who's Torthane? :rolleyes:
Who's Torthane? :rolleyes:
A member here at LucasForums.
Torthane is making the first-ever illustrated fic. He has made drawings of Malak torturing Bastila, Revan taking his mask off in the flashback, the Ebon Hawk and what seems to be a female Revan. Speaking of his fic, i need to read it.
Also, continue your work, i can't wait to see the first strips, and the Clone Trooper's expressions, they should be priceless! :D
Is Darkhorse that bad :P?
no, its actually that you're better :D
Sorry for being gone for so long. School, yuk! Plus, I've still got soccer.
Anyway, this looks great! Thanks also. It's good publicity for my fic, lol. :D
Keep it up, this is great!
Hehe, two underrated artists are here...Welcome!
Here is a preview from page 2. Hunter looks outside his gunship and is prepairing for landing:
http://www.freewebs.com/theonethewayne/page%202%20prev%20forum.jpg)
Here is the page 2 preview again only with colours. If the colours aren't correct I can change them. So tell me if you like it or not.
http://www.freewebs.com/theonethewayne/page%202%20prev%20forum.bmp)
Should I add some paint on the helmet like in Republic Commando?
Yup, but where is the republic commandos? Well, for my opinion: I think it's better to leave it W/B. I like it.
Nah, i think they should be like in Battlefront 2. If i remember correctly, Hunter is an Engineer, Storm a Shock Trooper (missile ones), Max a Commander (chaingun) and Flash i don't remember, maybe Sharpshooter. We should wait for Niner though.
I like what Theone has done. He deserves a pat on the back :)
he deserves a large chunk of gold you mean :p
keep it up, Theone! i love the colored helmet of the commando, the visor is excellently done!
Nah, i think they should be like in Battlefront 2. If i remember correctly, Hunter is an Engineer, Storm a Shock Trooper (missile ones), Max a Commander (chaingun) and Flash i don't remember, maybe Sharpshooter. We should wait for Niner though.
No they are all republic commandos:
DC-15 sidearm blaster, vibroblade beneath gauntlet > only commando's wear these weapons. ( see chapter 1)
I will use the helmet print of the 501st troopers
THANKS everybody for the compliments! But there is still much to do at these two pages...
Oh my god...
This is truly awesome!
The details on the helmet are unbelievable :D
[Edit: Holy crap..1000th post...custom title here I come!]
Ok this is the first finished page, I made it without color so I can make the comic faster. I hope you like it, page 2 is coming next week.
http://www.freewebs.com/atrcomic/AtR%2DP1Finished.JPG)
Nice. Also in your sig, you forgot to put a / in the beginning of the second [ /url] (Without the space of course). Looking foward to it in colour if possible.
Good pictures Niner's story has been reinstated
Sorry everyone but making this comic is long and hard work so it will take some time to finish a page. Page 2 is almost done I changed the drawing you've seen before.
Finally here it is page 2:
http://www.freewebs.com/atrcomic/AtR%2DP2Finished.JPG)
Looks good. Will there be some colour on them?
Looks good. Will there be some colour on them?
Here is a colour test,(not finished and bad quality) I think when I finished the first chapter I will make them all in colour. But since I don't like colouring very much and I haven't much time: do you know someone who can do it for me.
http://www.freewebs.com/atrcomic/P2colortest.JPG)
Looking forward to see more! It's like Republic Commando, which I love it!
These comics are neat looking, hope you continue them, and i'm looking forward for more.
These comics are neat looking, hope you continue them, and i'm looking forward for more.
Agreed.
WOW!!! These drawings are great! You are very talented.
I'm sorry that I haven't been around in a while (a rather long while, lol). Actaully, I didn't plan these clones to be commandos. I meant them to be between the grunts and the commandos. Kind of like marines I guess. I've got a drawing somewhere; maybe I'll post what I imagined them as.
They do have much of the same equipment as commandos, such as the vibro blade and nightvision. However, as you may have noticed, they had faulty nightvision devices. This implies that they weren't as vital as commandos. I had planned to elaborate on this idea later in the fic.
So, I'm still trying to find time to write this. At the moment, I only have one big research project going on. I finished one this week and two last week! :D
Great drawings!!! Keep it up!!! :)
Ok I thougt they where commando's :xp: I will make the previous drawing again only with thr right guy again (Galactic Marines):
http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/c/ce/Galactic_marine.jpg)
I can't start a poll here so please say what you like best:
Should I use clone commandos or galactic marines for the comic?
I didn't exactly mean them to be like that either. I'll try my best to post my drawing tomorrow. You can keep them like commandos though, as it's your interpetation of the story. :)
I didn't exactly mean them to be like that either. I'll try my best to post my drawing tomorrow. You can keep them like commandos though, as it's your interpetation of the story. :)
Ok thanks ;) I will draw the next pages with commando's.
Looks good Theone Thewayne.
Great job! I thought that I could draw commandos... I can't, lol. Yours rock!!! Keep it up!
awesomeness1111 i can't wait to see the finished book :D
Thanks everybody :D I'm working on my first illustrated fic now. I think I will post the first chapter on New Years Day. Or 25 december (then it's Christmas at my place) It's about after the battle 'Kamino uprising' in Battlefront 2.
Looking damn good ! Youre pretty good at those clones , mine always look like their helmets are melting :p .
Can't wait for your Fic to begin .
Hmm, well, seems alright, i'm guessing those are Iota Squad?
Jep it's Iota in the comic they are commando's.
Iota ? Is that cat's name ? I always thought where just like 10 different designs for clone armor ?
I just slipped by and took a peek into this thread. Well, nothing to say except: Keep up and looking forward to see your next chapter.
Very nice, man! You're a great artist!
Very nice, man! You're a great artist!
Thanx niner could you send those drawings