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MsFicwriter

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Posted in: Jedi Hunter (Chapter 1)
  MsFicwriter
05-18-2012, 8:49 PM
#3
I could definitely follow this story more closely than some of your others, but I do have a few questions and comments: --Star Wars monetary units are called "credits" or "credit chips", not "galactic cents". --Ghosts...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: TOR: Reckoning of a Lost Soul: A Prime Candidate
  MsFicwriter
05-10-2012, 8:51 PM
#1
SW: TOR: RECKONING OF A LOST SOUL: A PRIME CANDIDATEPart Five of an Old Republic Tale by MsFicwriter CORUSCANT, NEAR DENON YEPTI'S CAMPAIGN HQ, 1200 HOURS The Kaminoan-engineered "metamorphosis" of Qyzen Fess and me had taken just slightl...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
08-02-2012, 9:33 PM
#108
That was, without a doubt, the worst mission I've ever tried to undertake since... Per'dra Yllari's mind reeled with anger, disappointment and the agony of defeat. Not only were we attacked by an assassin that none of us could sense through the Force...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
06-06-2012, 2:15 PM
#104
The female Jedi Knight nodded. "My name is Per'dra Yllari," she said matter-of-factly, "and as for journeying into someone's mind, I've never done it. I've tried, but not succeeded." She remembered the attempt as clearly as if it...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
06-04-2012, 6:33 PM
#98
Per'dra saw the logic in the soldier's words; however, she did not stand down. She was not going to let Varik/Tulak Hord escape on her watch! "Very well," she said slowly. "Fire, and quickly, before he has a chance to use his powers ag...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
06-03-2012, 9:37 AM
#95
Or you could let me go, and I won't kill you all." "Let you go?" Per'dra was incredulous. "What makes you think I'll trust you? It's true that Sith lie, but they don't always lie. As for Varik..." She had to think carefully....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-31-2012, 11:14 AM
#93
"So, you're both a fool and a coward? Your technique is imperfect - I could see your shimmer, and I could hear the hum of your lightsaber.", he said, scolding her. Inwardly, Per'dra seethed. You have called me that once, and you shall NOT...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-29-2012, 6:35 PM
#86
In her own mind, the female Jedi Knight heard the message from her mysterious ally through the Force: If he survives this, we can hold him down with the Force. If we want to save Varik, one of us may have to journey into his mind. In the split secon...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-28-2012, 10:37 PM
#81
Per'dra heard the blaster shots and ducked. At the same time, she threw her lightsaber in a spinning arc toward Varik, now possessed by Tulak Hord. This was a technique that was not her finest--she was far better in the mechanics of close-combat duel...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-28-2012, 2:32 PM
#78
If there's one thing I learned back on Korriban during my trials, Per'dra Yllari thought, it's that I'd rather go down fighting than retreating! If Tulak Hord has taken possession of Varik, I wonder how complete the transformation is. If there's any...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-27-2012, 12:52 AM
#74
He looked up at Per'dra. "Something is wrong. The assassins are not the only threat here." He turned towards the building and tried to get to his feet. "There is a dark presence in there." Per'dra Yllari didn't need to be told th...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-20-2012, 10:42 AM
#64
"Remain still," she told Zarev quickly. "HUHH!" That unladylike exclamation was a grunt of effort as she lifted the wounded Jedi up onto her back through the Force. The question was: why did she leave her hands free? The answer wa...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-19-2012, 6:36 PM
#62
"This will only take about ten more seconds. Thanks for your help, Zarev..." Per'dra entered a very deep state of concentration, despite (or perhaps because of) her fear. She'd always heard from the other Jedi Masters that fear was a path...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-18-2012, 9:41 PM
#59
"We need to get rid of the ones firing at us from the building. And I might be wrong but we may have an ally in the building. There are a lot less blaster bolts being fired. I'd help...but one of my lungs is really hurting. Can you take care of...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-16-2012, 9:08 PM
#54
Per'dra noticed Zarev being levitated by one of their numerous attackers, who appeared to be female. She was crushing his ribcage through the Force, and it was fortunate that the Knight knew a Form IV, or Ataru, acrobatic technique. Within nanosecond...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-16-2012, 7:53 PM
#51
"Look out!" Per'dra roared, as she sent a wave of the Force crashing into the surrounding assailants. They staggered backward, and a few of them even fell flat on their rear ends. This time, the Knight ignited her saberstaff for real. In th...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-15-2012, 3:43 PM
#47
Aboard the Light Corvette "Satele" "I'll let your little comment slide this time, spacer," he said, pointing a finger at Corsail. "Next time, I'll kill you. You're nothing more than a liability." "Are you sure you...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-14-2012, 9:45 PM
#43
"It's nothing", he responded, throwing the datapad off to the side. "I just got a little visit from an old friend. Everything's fine." "What old friend?" asked Per'dra suspiciously, while trying to control her temper. &...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-14-2012, 7:44 PM
#41
"I will," replied Per'dra, "if whatever's in there doesn't let go of Varik." Without another word, she stormed into Varik's quarters, almost stumbling across the threshold. Righting herself, she lay eyes upon Varik himself, lookin...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-14-2012, 6:26 PM
#39
Aboard the Light Corvette "Satele" Per'dra activated her saberstaff with a surprisingly aggressive snap-hiss, her muscles tense. A guttural sound emerged from between her teeth, halfway between a hiss and a growl. Then, just as suddenly as...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-10-2012, 7:40 PM
#34
Aboard the Light Corvette "Satele" He tried to pull it towards him but the only thing he managed to accomplish was making it topple off the shelf. "Well, how about this?" Corsail whipped his blasters out and fire at the shelf bol...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-10-2012, 12:49 AM
#31
Aboard the Light Corvette "Satele" Per'dra lowered her voice so only Zarev would hear. "Honestly," she asked, "what did I do, besides being late, to get things off to such a bad start? I may be naive, but there's a reason I...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-08-2012, 3:29 PM
#24
"Very much so," Per'dra replied, "but I have no idea who could have assisted Voleran in his betrayal. Rest assured, it couldn't have been anyone with a lower rank than that of a Jedi Master. The information that he stole was highly cla...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Darkness Within
  MsFicwriter
05-07-2012, 8:31 PM
#22
((Does the ship have a name? For now, I'll just call it the Light Corvette.)) Aboard the Light Corvette, en route to Tatooine "How long did it take for the temple to be locked down?" Per'dra turned her head toward Zarev, gazing at him ci...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Is In The Details...
  MsFicwriter
05-18-2012, 8:40 PM
#19
^^^^ EPIC WIN, you get 10 of 10, Which does not happen so often. I ask: What is your religion, Which is good enough for you? :)...  [Read More]
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