LordRevan123

07-27-2006, 2:59 PM
#13

Lol! I just corrected that!... [Read More]

07-27-2006, 2:49 PM
#11

Chapter 3: A New Army, and a New Ebon Hawk After they left the office leading to the council chambers, Kai and Revan went to see their friends who were waiting patiently in the visitor’s area. As soon as the two stepped through the door, Revan was... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] War and Love

LordRevan123

07-24-2006, 10:56 AM
#10

Thanks!!!! New chappie out by next Tuesday!... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] War and Love

LordRevan123

07-24-2006, 9:28 AM
#8

I know Vrook and Vandar wouldn't be alive but I decided to put them in any way. Thanks for telling me how to delet my other post.... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] War and Love

LordRevan123

07-24-2006, 8:57 AM
#6

New Chappie! The third one will take a bit longer to come out since I only have one free day in my weekend! Enjoy! Chapter 2: Meetings Revan slowly took of his mask to reveal his still handsome face. Bastila couldn’t take the pressure of standing... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] War and Love

LordRevan123

07-24-2006, 7:15 AM
#5

:nut: Thanks for giving me tips! And I'm glad that you enjoyed it! But I'm not writing two fics at the same time. :eyepop You must have me confused with someone else. Edit: I'mmmmmm soooooooo sorrrrrrrrrrrry! My computer had a misfunction while I wa... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC] War and Love

LordRevan123

07-23-2006, 10:02 PM
#1

This is my first fic so please don't kill me! Please give me advice on how to improve my writing since I think that it is horrible! Chapter 1: The Return of Two Heros Revan was resting peacefully aboard the Ebon Hawk in the pilot seat while stari... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-27-2006, 3:03 PM
#88

Well, at least the ending will be better than The Sith Lords. I am so mad because KOTOR II will probably be on xbox 360! :(... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-27-2006, 1:54 PM
#83

Nice chapter! Are you going to kill Mira of?... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-27-2006, 10:59 AM
#76

I am so sad that it is almost done. :ball: :cry8:... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-27-2006, 9:26 AM
#74

I agree with JediMaster12. It got pretty exciting when Zor did his rebirth thing! I honestly was expecting him to blow up! lol!... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-26-2006, 1:29 PM
#64

Go Jason :king1: :clap2: :D :roll1: (Have no idea who that is.)... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-26-2006, 9:28 AM
#62

Thanks for answering my question. But I bet Mira could sill beat the beans out of him! Lol! Don't stop updating!... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-25-2006, 9:43 AM
#56

Nice chapter! But I have a question. How could Hanharr stand up to Mira and Jaden since they are both Jedis? Oh and Jaden can be bad, because girls like bad boys!!!!!! Lol! Jk!... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-24-2006, 7:18 AM
#50

Interesting point Posttsie. Didn't think about it that way.... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-23-2006, 9:07 PM
#47

For u, I will wait until I am 42! :Prplgh: (I'm serious.)... [Read More]

Posted in: Darkness Rising

LordRevan123

07-23-2006, 5:26 PM
#44

I just started a profile here! I read what chapters you have so far and it was great! Keep updating!... [Read More]