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I agree. You show slow down and give more detail. It doesn't hurt to describe feelings or what one character sees. I brings a more vivid picture into the mind. Writing is like trying to describe the scenery to a blind person, you have to include thin... [Read More]
Lila was suspicious and figured that something was afoot. TSD was familiar but it was blocked by a shadow in her memory. She instead followed Exerkis to where Morbo was. She despised the Hutt and tried to avoid as much contact as possible. On the way... [Read More]
Lila kept glancing around as if waiting for the hooded man to reappear. She sensed that there was something about that stranger that warranted investigation but would not move until she heard word from Exerkis.... [Read More]
Lila noticed that Exerkis was bothered by something. Even though she was was a distance away, the way he wanted, she could plainly see and sense something was not right. Doing her job, she got up and walked in an unassuming manner towards him. She wa... [Read More]
"I don't know HK. Maybe it will be like the last time, but the damage is not that bad. He remembered you." Bastilla gazed at the assassin droid thinking of what might this blood thirsty droid have in terms of experience.... [Read More]
Bastilla was a constant companion around the enclave. She was trying to encourage memories as subtly as she could. Using the Force with Revan's help, she guided him back to his memories.... [Read More]
Mira nodded. "You are indeed right," she conceded, turning to Bastila. "I'll send a message to my Padawan through the Force, and maybe we both can forgive each other. That, after all, is the way of the Jedi." She closed her eyes.... [Read More]
"Revan is correct. For an act of mercy can touch even the most hidden parts of a person," Bastilla tried to assuage Tysy. She had remembered what Revan did during their time together trying to stop Malak. Turning to Revan she said, "Th... [Read More]
I'm happy to follow through with what Kreia says about Bao-dur since she can't sense his thoughts anyway. I don't trust her completely because one thing I've learned is that somethings have double meanings. After all many of the truths we cling to, d... [Read More]
Miklos was waiting for a response from Reyshik and turned his head to the sky. His face very intent as if waiting for something to fall from the sky. He then muttered, "The winds speak of a great one. They speak of death and life, so full and ye... [Read More]
"I understand but you don't. I don't see things in absolutes. Maybe if you lived among the Bushida warriors like I did for those years I was gone you'd see it too. You haven't seen what I have in the Unknown Regions, what was done to me before t... [Read More]
"The ones I speak of I guess have that ability that I gave us cover with. My family said that they could only be seen if they wished. It's as if they live beyond the breath of the Force or something like that. Like I said, I thought they were ju... [Read More]
"I see," Lilah voiced. She was impressed by the control Annika exhibited over her abilities. She spoke, "My family spoke of our people able to do the same. I thought they were just stories but after what I found out, that's what made m... [Read More]
"Just don't wish for what is truly hounding me to happen. There are things far worse than the Sith," Lilah replied softly. She turned to Annika to listen to what she had to say.... [Read More]
Lilah gazed at Lionel, "Well, I don't know where I was born but ny parents talked about it a lot. I grew up on Alderaan. "My parents were always talking about this place that existed beyond known space and talked of the Sang or something li... [Read More]
That's good. You know I never noticed that because I was caught up with big bad Darth Vader. Another good chapter. It's nice that you show the human side of the Jedi, especially Obi-wan because in Ep. 3 it looked like he could barely hold himself tog... [Read More]
Obviously. Kenobi stealing a ship? Hmm so many questions and yet I like what I am reading. Keep up the good work. Just a suggestion however. I tend to get confused about who is speaking what and to whom. I suggest that you separate each piece spoken... [Read More]
((Actually the ship is in orbit above the planet. Alkonium, sorry about the mispelling.)) Alkea then motioned Komad to the cushions and she sat in a meditative position. She waited for Komad to follow suit. Tyrannus was growing pleased at the immuni... [Read More]
((Taking Greea would make it like three characters for this RP alone. If you want I will do it. Incidentaly, I created some concept drawings of Alkea. As soon as I can get them scanned and uploaded, I'll show you. They were based on what you thought... [Read More]
"Dad, stop being so stubborn!" Zoe exclaimed. She continued, "Besides didn't you notice those shadow warriors watching us when we came in? I've been watching their movements and they mean no harm. Some are instructing the young, others... [Read More]