OK, I found a way to fix the engine glow and a better way to animate the EH. Here is a link to the new file.
http://www.4shared.com/file/65302403/7730e716/Newtakeoff.html) it is the .bik file it can be viewed with bink and smacker.
Keep in mind this is not the final version as it needs some tweaking (hopefully I have found a way to add the steam) but I would like some opinions on this sequence.
Looks great except for the part at the end of the take-off - before the crossfade - where the Ebon Hawk slows down. Might I suggest speeding up the Hawk's escape velocity (rather than just maintaining the original speed before the slowdown).