Right, I've been listening to a bit of Days of the New (awesome sounding guitar, lemme tell you) and I liked one of their songs, Shelf in the Room. I decided to rewrite the lyrics a bit though:


You're so distant
I'm so far away
You're so sharp edged
I die everyday

So help me out
I just want to be your friend
So help me out
Let's try this again

You're so silent
Now you show me the door
You're so cold
I don't know you anymore

Kick me out
Let me go
Ask myself
I don't belong here anymore

Kick me out
Let me go
Let me go

No one to listen
No one to listen for
Is there any way - no
No, that's over, no more

So help me out
I just want to be your friend
So help me out
Let's try this again

Kick me out
Let me go
Ask myself
I don't belong here anymore

So help me out
I just want to be your friend
So help me out
Let's try this again

Let's try this again

What say you, insane people?

How can you write this when you die everyday? :xp:

How can you write this when you die everyday? :xp:IT'S A METAPHOR, YOU UNWASHED INGRATE!

Ehehe. Sorry. :D

Seriously though...if you don't think it's good I could change it. I thought that bit was a little clumsy myself.

IT'S A METAPHOR, YOU UNWASHED MASS OF-

Ehehe. Sorry. :D

Seriously though...if you don't think it's good I could change it.

No, No....it's fine. Better than what I can do. :D :xp: