"Is he dead?" a storm trooper asked
Jax shook his head
"right come with me to the detention area the other one i there now"
Jax nodded and followed the stormtrooper
They wound their way through the corridoors. Jax had the pilot over his shoulder.
They arrived at the detention area and jax threw him into a cell. the door closed and Jax looked around. On the side their was computers saying who was in what cell and what theywere in for..
there was one man in for treason
another for shooting a droid
one for crashing his Tie into the side of the hanger casuing massive damage
and at the end they had: Rebel
i looked around, The stormtrooper turned
"should'y you get back to the hanger?"
I raised my gun my side slowly
"yes i suppose i should"
he turned to the door i shot him in the head, he fell to the floor
i turned and shot the guard. He tried to stop me but before he could raise his gun he was dead.
I ran to Nekx room and pushed a button on the side
He door opened and Nekx was sitting there
"what do you want?"
I took my helmet off
"Jax! you came to rescue me!"
"yeah now be quiet! come on!"
He followed me to the main room, i shoved a stormtrooper suit in his direction
"put this on"
He did it quickly
"right now come with me"
we made our way quickly to the hanger
This was too easy it had to be a trap but i convinved myself to keep going
we passed a corridoor marked with naviagation. I turned around to Nekx.
"We have to steal something"
"like what?"
"i told you we need to get them to follow us"
"right"
they ran along the hall way. and into a small room full of conrols. On the side was a clipboard with the co-ordiantes of...
"the rebel base"" jax muttered
he grabed it. someone saw him
"oi what are you...?"
Jax shot him and they ran..they made it to the hanger..
jax jumped into his B wing fighter and Nekx jumped into the co-pilot seat. Jax had his B wing desighned to seat 2 even though he rarley needed it. they took off and got out of the hanger unharmed..
"theres something wrong" jax said at once
"what?" asked Nekx
"it was all too easy"
"true"
Jax scanned the ship....there was nothing un-friendly on board.
"hmmm something's up...they ket us steel that clipboard"
"i don't think so. why would they let us go?"
"I don't know..."
Behind them the lancer turned and followed them...jax's plan was workinh but Jax still felt un-easy, what was going on? why had it been so easy? and as Jax flew towards an area which he knew was an asteroid field he knew someting was wrong. He glanced behind him and saw a wave of ties coming...
"Nekx arm rear gun"
"ok jax"

Commander JM 221 listened as Intelligence patched him through to the Rebel pilot's little plan. Well, the reason being why we are letting you take those procedures, young Jax, is that all your Rebel friends are now dead, and the escort ships have been destroyed. We have no use for them coordinates, as we've already marked them down on our networks. But, there is more than what you see on that clipboard, young fool. Take a closer look at the schematics for the ultimate plan..., he thought.

"Commander, we've opened fire on the Rebel b-wing. Their guns don't seem to be functioning at this moment. It shouldn't be long now," said wing commander Yndesa.

"No, you are to only shock the Rebels while we access their com-links to order them back here. If they do not proceed back to my star destroyer, they should know that we will destroy them."

"Yes, sir."

JM 221 watched now as the Yndesa and his two TIE squadrons raced in after the Rebel b-wing. The b-wing wouldn't get far anyways, because if the pilot was planning to jump to lightspeed, he should think again.

"Jax we have a problem"
"what?"
"the guns aren't working!"
Jax charged up the ion cannons but nothing heppened
"damn it they must have knocked them out!"
Jax climsped over to the other star destroyers. A rebel cruiser exploded.
"damn! Don do you copy?"
"Jax? you're still alive?"
"no im speaking from the dead, of corse im still alive!" Jax snapped
"sorry Jax it's just...wow"
"i know...it was all too easy. anyway whats the situation?"
"well it's pretty bad, we've lost most of red group and gold group, Me, Dave, Carlson, Mira and Kenny still alive that i know of"
"ok meet me at these co-ordiantes im sending you now"
"copy that see you there....i hope"
Jax ran a scan through his computer and the guns were almost online
"Nekx ready the guns we are gunna have company"
"copy that cus"
Jax continued to the asteroid field. he hoped the lancer wouldnt realise what he was doing and even if they did they surly needed the co-ordinates for the rebel base...jax was sure they probably had a copy but the lancer was following him and that was something
"Gun's online Jax"
"good, i hope these imperials know who and what they are dealing with"
Jax put of a burst of speed and armed the torpedos
"Don where are you now?"
"i can see you jax"
"good"
Jax, Don, Dave and carlson re-grouped by the ateroid field and continued into it. kenny had jumed to lightspeed. Don had told him the co-ordinates of a group of reinforcements and they were on their way. Mira was no where to be found. Don said they had lost her and couldnt find a trace of her ship. They continued to dodge rocks and debrey.
Jax smiled
"come and get us"

(someone else post, come on guys i rekon we can finish this soon but me and seb really can't finish the story on our own so post!)

(OOC: I agree, Renegade Angel, I know you can post. I'm positive. Jax, send him a PM or email, though. We'll get him to post. Thanks, we're almost done. This has been well worth registering. We've even expanded from the original plot but still kept with it at the same time. Good work.)

(i messaged renegade angle 2 days ago still hasn't messaged me back. im gunna finish this off now, if you wanna reply anyone i can easily delet the post or edit it but no one seems to be posting except me a and seb and i would like to finsih my story)

Jax dived into the asteroid field hoping the lancer would follow
The Ties camn after them. A few ties were destroyed by the asteroids. Don circled round an asteroid and came out behind them and blasted three of them down. the remaining two crashed into each other as they apeared to be trying to escape
"thats the last one"
"copy that Don remain vigalent"
The lancer seemed to be going very slowly. It slipped past a few asteroids and blasted more of it's way.
"Ok guys what we have to do is get the lancer stuck in this asteroid field and in order to do that we have to take out it's guns"
"what!?"
"it's a lancer remember is isn't like a normal star destroyer so come one!"
Jax made his way towards the Lancer. it was fully in the asteroid field now. Jax launched a torpedo and it hitdirectly where he knew a gun was placed. the shield had given way and the gun wasn't taken out, jax knew this becuase it fired towards him. he ddoged it.
"this will never work!" Dave yelled
"no..." Jax muttered
"wait guys come on we're in a n asteroid field we're basically sitting ducks and our fighters are mutch smaller than that lancer"
"thats right....I got it! Arm cluster torpedos or anything you have!"
"ok..."
"fire towards the lancer....not directly at it...if we hit it ok but if we can hit the smaller asteroids around it they might crash into the lancer!"
"nice plan!"
They all fired towards the lancer the cluster bombs seperated and all hit different asterids. Only one peice of debrey hit however.
"damn...arm seismic charges"
"copy that"
Don, Carlson and Dave all fired seismic charges. Jax's ship was not equiped with them. The charges exploded. peices of the asteroids it has hit went flying. this time their plan was more succesful. The lancer was bombarded with bits of the asteroids. It apeared the engine had been damaged because the engine died out.
"Yes it's stuck Ok guys follow me!"
The squdron of Bwings made their way out of the asteroid field. The lnacer kept floating further into the field helplessly.
"Ok guys fire everything you have every single last torpedo!"
They all fired at the same time. over 100 missiles went sreaming towards the lancer. some didn't make it but some crashed spectacually into the bridge other hits asteroids around the lancer and casued even more damge to the Lancer. Finally Jax armed his most destructive weapon a cluster charge. this hand made torpedo was rare. It's purpose was to be guided vis remote control to it's destnation. unlike other torpedos it had a small shield which could be deactivated. when it got closer to it's destination it could destroy any star destroyer. But jax wasnt aiming for just the lancer..he was aiming for a few large aterida around it aswell.....he fired it....
Nekx guided it towardsa the lancer. when it got closer he deactivated the shield. it urtled towards the lancer it collided half with the lancer and half with an asteroid. The explosion was massive. it engulfed the whole asteroid field. The b wings were almost blown away. They could no longer see the lancer. if that meant it had been destroyed they did not know. tiny bits of rocks blocked their view. even if it wasnt destroyed it was stuck. They returned to the main fight. as they did rebel cruisers exited hyper space and opened fire on the damaged star destroyers. One exploded. The cruisers then released a wave of figters. another star destroyer exploded. another damaged mannaged to jump to hyper space.Exhausted jax docked with oneof the cruisers.
He was greeted by admiral Kerr
"Jax good to see you"
"yeah..."
Jax slumped against his B wing
"busy day?"
"you could say that, god i think i might retire...and im only 24"
"ha....you wish"
"well can you blame me?"
"well no....oh your wearing a tie pilot suit!"
"yeah well...a little exploring never hurt"
"i see"
"what happened to the other cruisers?"
"well it apears they were attacked by some sought of ship....a firespray"
"what!?" Jax said standing up
"yes aparently a bounty hunter wa brought on board and well he escaped on board one of Stu Zanders craft"
"what...so he's loose?"
"yes"
"and what about Stu?"
"we don't know where he is im afraid"
Jax looked out of the hanger. The bounty hunter was still out there. Jax vowed to catch him....again. Jax thought about stu. where was he? had the bounty hunter taken him when he had stolen Stu's ship? or was Stu on the cruiser when it blew up? The stars winked at him. and Jax knew his adventures with the rebels wern't quite over yet...

THE END

(Sorry to post again, but brilliant job Jedi, I believe you can be a great writer some day. I hope to see all four of us role play again here in a little while. Also, I have a question Jedi, are you going to make another topic that comes after this? I'm asking because of your last paragraph. Good job. :p )

cheers seb. I would like to make another topic depending on if rennegade angel and fisto-kitt start role playing again cus they have to be in the story really. I just have to say thanks guys. when i started the phantom i wasn't really sure where i would go with it but we really did well. oh and look out for a topic following the lines of "Phantom:The revenge" or something like that. cheers guys!

(Oh, one last thing. Jedi, if you want them two, you have to get them two. That means we have to do every possible thing to get them to post again. Emails, instant messengers, private messages, whatever type of contact we can do. That's all I'll say. Good luck, and set some rules and restrictions on the next thread, that way it will work out better.)

((By the way, a two-person conversation is best held by PMs. I don't mind this at all, but this kind of thing can get confusing for returning people trying to catch up... :)

And don't panic, school/college is starting about now and everyone's going to be swamped for a little bit ;)))

Sorry, Guys. I got busy over the summer.(And no, I dont mean... Well, you know.... BUSY....Like with me and my gi.... Nevermind) I just had so much to do... But Im back!

(Yeah.... Well, I'm very sorry RedWing. We'll await Nosturbo's returning post and then perhaps write a new thread. Until then, I suppose we shall engage in the private messaging cycle.)

hey guys ive started a new topic...

Phantom: The Revenge

join in! cheers