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Jaden Korr - Darth Qollous

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 Jaden Malip
01-01-2005, 1:05 AM
#101
Originally posted by Sabretooth
Relax. I'm planning another fanfic on Knights of the Old Republic, another "what if" fanfic. Sounds good:)
 DarthTDe
01-01-2005, 8:08 AM
#102
Continue Jaden Korr!You could make a series!
 KOTORManiac
01-03-2005, 6:34 AM
#103
Brilliant so far, one on KOTOR will own!:D
 LightNinja
01-05-2005, 11:34 AM
#104
wow man this stories were pretty good!! :eek:
 Sabretooth
01-29-2005, 12:25 AM
#105
And so ends the story. Thanks to everyone who commented on the fanfic. 'twas great writing all of this and reading the feedback.

And finally, thanks for reading.

*Star Wars credits theme*
 Jaden Malip
01-29-2005, 9:49 AM
#106
VERY good. :)
 Sabretooth
05-05-2005, 3:18 AM
#107
Wow! Long time no see. I have just posted to update you guys. I've been working on a Jaden Korr - Darth Qollous SE version, including several fixes, spelling & grammar fixed etc. It will also contain every single comment to date. Finally, it will contain a Prologue detailing the storyline of Jedi Knight: Jedi Academy and an Epilogue, which will answer the questions of what happened after the story. I've included a little surprise in there. ;)

The SE is fully formatted in Word and I hope to send it to several Fanfic databases across the web. (who knows? Maybe I can catch GL's attention ;) )
 Sabretooth
05-11-2005, 8:00 AM
#108
Stinger in flight:
http://img67.echo.cx/img67/2470/stingerflying3jc.jpg)

Stinger in manoeverability mode:
http://img67.echo.cx/img67/7066/stingermanoback6cs.jpg)

Looks rather cool if you ask me. I'm currently also working on a Stinger wallpaper and and planning the "New Stormtrooper" as a skin for Jedi Academy.
 Ziechel
05-15-2005, 8:01 PM
#109
cool. today i checked my mail addy and found out your still posting on this thread. had to read very long to get back to the story, but very great.
 Sabretooth
05-16-2005, 12:25 AM
#110
Originally posted by Ziechel
still posting

The story's over, friend. If you're interested, check out 'The Superlaser Conspiracy'.
 DarthTDe
08-09-2005, 6:03 PM
#111
Sabre,you are a fanfic GOD.
 Darth Hansen
09-03-2005, 10:23 PM
#112
BEAUTIFUL man PURE GENIUS SABRECLAW IS ALMOST EXACTLY LIKE ONE OF MY CHARACTER's I HAVE MADE PRETTY COOL HOPE TO SEE MORE OF THAT IN DA FUTURE THUMPS WAY UP!!!!!
 pokejedi123
09-08-2005, 1:41 AM
#113
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
why does it have to end like this jayden dead i love jayden but make a mod and maybe raven will make outta this a jk4
 Sabretooth
10-29-2005, 7:48 AM
#114
After much delay, the Second Edition of Jaden Korr - Darth Qollous is finally online, at Fanfiction.net. Here's the usual, convenient linky (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2638243/1/).

The SE contains many spelling fixes and changes in chapter names, but the content is completely unchanged. Of course, I have a special .doc version of the story, (with a Comments section and Changes section under construction). If anybody wants that, e-mail me!

The SE is still being updated at Fanfiction.net, so keep checking!
 Darth Smaug
12-18-2005, 7:13 AM
#115
And that's a good story i say!
 Sabretooth
01-19-2006, 4:48 AM
#116
Jaden Korr Darth Qollous SE is CANCELLED.

Yep, cancelled. For 3 reasons:

1. I could not find the time to update the fic.
2. The reviews there were not exactly favourable.
3. I don't see the point of it all.
 Shana
01-20-2006, 7:34 PM
#117
Hi Sabretooth...I have the .doc version of your story and it's really good....The fanfiction guys are @$$holes, most of them critisize your work and say it's garbage and then you read theirs and it's evem more crappy than what you wrote....don't let it get to you, the people out here loved your fic and I'm one of them...that is what counts...the people who love your writting are right here forget about those fanfiction scumbags they just hurt people because they want to....don't get discouraged :D ;)
 Sabretooth
01-22-2006, 2:33 AM
#118
That's ok, Lyla, but really I don't see the point of making a clone of this fanfic somewhere else. Besides, I don't really get much time and my slow internet often takes minutes to connect to fanfiction.net. So thanks for the support, but it is all in vain...

(Besides, now that I have reread the fic and gained more Star Wars lore, this fic does seem a bit stupid. :D ;) )
 Redwing
01-28-2006, 5:53 AM
#119
2. The reviews there were not exactly favourable.


That's why you rewrite. ;)

Books aren't written - they're rewritten. Including your own. It is one of the hardest things to accept, especially after the seventh rewrite hasn't quite done it.
- Michael Crichton


Looking at your fanfic, you do seem to be disappointing a couple rabid fans you've picked up somewhere along the Internet... :D
 Writer
01-30-2006, 1:24 PM
#120
Hmm... that's interesting... I've got a couple of fanfiction.net accounts and both of them seem to be doing alright... sorry your experience there wasn't that great, Sabertooth... but I agree with both Lyla and Redwing.

The story's pretty interesting, pretty good.

Never ever think you're done revising. I do a lot of fiction writing and even I'm never quite happy with what I've written. It can always use a little revision (that's probably why I don't have anything published... well, that and the fact I can't seem to finish something :D )
 Shana
01-30-2006, 6:42 PM
#121
Same here!
 darth mantis
07-09-2006, 11:31 AM
#122
hay i love the storys....found them on fanfiction.net and was looking for more episodes...however im not a member there and i dont do any reviews...(i hate rateing things...) so ya i love the storys but one thing...i cant really picture what your x saber looks like. if you could give me like a pic or something of what it looks like it would be nice
 Diego Varen
08-13-2006, 2:44 PM
#123
Wow, I thought this Thread was dying. Anyway I've always liked this Fic and it was one of the first I ever read and it gave me inspiration for my first good Fic (In my Sig). I can imagine what the X-Saber looks like. It is an X, with a blade coming out of each side.
 Sabretooth
08-15-2006, 12:04 AM
#124
If you go back a few pages, you'll find a 3D model of the X-Saber Jon Hill made. The image may not be online, I think. If you have the game Jedi Academy, you can download an X-Saber for yourself and play with it. It'll help you get an idea, since Jon Hill got the X-Saber just as I had pictures it.

Its basically a saberstaff, with Two blades on each side, in a V-Shape.
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