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Antitrust 2: The Return of NURV

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 Writer
03-07-2005, 9:17 PM
#151
"If you know a better writer, go ahead and stop me," Danni challenged as she waited for John to answer. "Besides, he's really not that bad once you get to know him."
 jokemaster
03-07-2005, 10:31 PM
#152
"That's the problem, I don't know him well enough to trust him!"
 Curt-Man
03-07-2005, 11:22 PM
#153
John's cell started ringing, he didn't recognize the number but picked up anyway.
"hello, John Karloye here."
 Writer
03-08-2005, 1:07 PM
#154
"Well I do know him," Danni retorted as she listened to the phone ring. Finally, he picked up.

"John?" Danni said. "It's Danni Richardson. I'm curious... how well have you kept up with your writing since we graduated high school?"
 Curt-Man
03-08-2005, 4:12 PM
#155
"well not as well as i'd like lately becuase of the sudden pressure at work lately but i'm still pretty good, why?" John said as he thought how wierd a question this was.
 Writer
03-09-2005, 11:40 AM
#156
"Well, my brother is trying to put on a play," Danni said, avoiding the truth. "He asked for my help in writing something, but I told him I'd talk to you. He has an idea that mocks Gary's Synapse days, but he wants somebody to write it for him. Would you be interested?"

((I edited this because Danni isn't entirely sure who's working for Gary at the moment. She'll be very careful until she's sure she can trust John.))
 Writer
03-14-2005, 12:48 PM
#157
((Bumping... Curt, waiting for your response... I edited my post, so be sure to read it first.))
 jokemaster
03-14-2005, 1:13 PM
#158
David leaned back watching her. Nodding as she lied, apparently, contrary to what she had said, she didn't fully trust this guy.
 Curt-Man
03-14-2005, 4:52 PM
#159
"oh alright, sounds cool, should we meet to talk more on what your brother wants in it?" John said getting more interested.
 Writer
03-14-2005, 8:37 PM
#160
"Yeah, that sounds good," Danni said, smiling as she spoke. Almost as quickly as the smile appeared, it was replaced with a frown. "One problem. He doesn't live anywhere near NURV and I'm closer to his house than the company..." she let her words trail off as she considered this...


((This might be the time to mention that, for some reason, you're in the same hotel as we are, Curt:) ))
 Curt-Man
03-14-2005, 10:13 PM
#161
"well actually i'm in the SeaBreeze hotel, i have a room here plus i saw you guys go in so i could just walk right over to you guys.....hmm that sounded really wierd" John said with a look of oddness on his face.
 Writer
03-14-2005, 10:34 PM
#162
"Uh," Danni faultered. "Well, why don't we meet somewhere else? There's a restaurant just down the street, if I remember right." She changed the subject quickly. "So what are you doing here?"
 Curt-Man
03-14-2005, 10:47 PM
#163
"yeah sure, um i have a house, but its far out of town so i usually just rent out hotel rooms, so when do we meet?"
 Writer
03-15-2005, 12:51 PM
#164
"You go now," Danni said. "We'll be there in a few minutes."

She hung up and called her brother. He agreed enthusiastically and said he'd wait for her call after they arranged to meet at the Grants house. Then, Milo called the Grants. Lizza answered.

"Hey Lizza," he said. "I'm on the run from NURV again and I've got a few others with me. Do you think we could hide out with you?"

"Mi casa es su casa," Lizza answered. "We'd love to have you here again."

"Thanks," Milo said. "We can make it there in a few hours, but we've got a meeting to attend first."

"Don't get yourselves killed," Lizza warned. Milo promised he wouldn't and Danni called her brother again.

"They'll welcome you in if you give them Milo's name," she said. "Mine will help the case too. Wait for us there. We're trying to get my writer friend with us too, so we'll be a few hours."

"I'll be waiting, Danni," Ryan said. "Don't get yourself killed."
 Curt-Man
03-15-2005, 5:02 PM
#165
John hung up and got on his jakcet and glasses, and then left for the restaurant. once outside he got into his car and drvoe to the Restaurant, he told the poeple there some more people would be coming soon, he got a table for four near the window.
 Writer
03-17-2005, 1:39 PM
#166
Danni and Milo prepared to go to the restaurant and Lisa stood slowly. Danni shook her head and motioned for Lisa to lay back down.

"You're still weak," she said. "You should get some rest."

"If everybody else is going, I'm not getting left behind," Lisa said stubbornly. Milo sighed.

"I'll stay with her," he said. "David, you go with Danni to meet John. Lisa and I will head straight to the Grants. Meet us there if you find that John's trustworthy."

Danni nodded.
 jokemaster
03-17-2005, 2:43 PM
#167
"All right, what if he isn't trustworthy?"
 Writer
03-17-2005, 3:05 PM
#168
"Run for your life," Milo said grimly.


((I'll be out of town until March 28... see you guys then.))
 Writer
03-29-2005, 11:52 PM
#169
((And bump...:D ))


Danielle entered the restaurant first, followed by David. Danni noticed John first and approached him with a smile on her face.

"It's good to see you again," she said, setting her crutches aside as she slid into the seat across from him.
 Curt-Man
03-30-2005, 5:55 PM
#170
"yes it is" John said as he stood up, being his nervous self, eh shook hands and sat back down switching his coat to the other side.
"so, what is the basic idea of the play?"
 jokemaster
03-30-2005, 11:03 PM
#171
"Subtle satire. More Shaun of the Dead than say, Airplane or Monty Python. Almost as if it were a serious play."
 Curt-Man
03-31-2005, 4:38 PM
#172
"challenging but fun to write, sure, i can do it, just give me what you want and in a couple of weeks at least i'll have something written, then you can just give me what you'd like to see and i can add in details."
 Writer
03-31-2005, 7:26 PM
#173
"Maybe try to work in something about stealing Gary's home computer," Danni suggested. She shrugged. "I know it didn't happen during the whole Synapse thing, but it's a play and doesn't have to be historically accurate, right?"

"Besides," she continued, a smile on her face, "most people don't even know what really happend, do they? They just know what the news showed... and it wasn't much."

Or I wouldn't have gone to work for Synapse, Danni added to herself.
 Curt-Man
04-01-2005, 5:26 PM
#174
"hah, y-yeah that t-true" he studdered as he made eye contact with her.
"alright, so should i expect more phone calls and meetings or do you just want me to write it all at once then give it to you and you can tell me what you'd like changed?"
 jokemaster
04-01-2005, 10:48 PM
#175
"We'll meet you and you can give us the whole thing." Said David before Dannielle could say anything.
 Curt-Man
04-02-2005, 10:41 AM
#176
"oh, okay, well then i'll be off, better get started on it."
John got up with his jacket in hand.
 Writer
04-03-2005, 11:03 PM
#177
"We'll call you in a couple of days," Danni promised John. Then, she got up and took up her crutches. "Looking forward to getting rid of these," she muttered, glaring at David for no reason.

Despite her broken leg, Danni insisted on driving, "because I know where the Grants live and you don't."

There was little to no conversation as they drove and, about an hour later, they turned into what seemed like a country road, but ended up being a driveway. At length, they came to a gate and Danni stopped the car.

"Play the game, say the name," a voice called out through a speaker embedded in the left gatepost. Danni shook her head and sighed.

"No game I play, no name I say," she answered.

"How on earth do you plan on getting in, then?" the voice called again. Danni laughed.

"I'll break your gate down if you don't let me in, Kelli!" she exclaimed. The girl now identified as Kelli laughed and the gate began to open.

"Welcome back, Danni," Kelli said before the gate was fully open. "The computer recognizes your voice. It's going crazy over your friend in the passenger seat, though."

"Tell it to buzz off," Danni retorted. Kelli laughed and the gate was opened entirely.

"It'll be good to see you again," Kelli said. Danni drove through the gate.

"Easy enough, right?" she said. "Just think of the nightmare it would be if a person tried to get in without being known!"

They were met at the door by Milo and Lisa. Milo hugged them both and Lisa seemed glad to see Danni. She leaned forward and whispered in Danni's ear.

"Are you sure this place is safe?" she asked. "The two girls who own this place seem slightly batty!"

"They're fine!" Danni said, laughing. "True, they may be a little odd, but they're better once you've known them a little while."

"David," Milo said. "I think it's time you met the newest members of our little group. They know everything that's been going on with NURV now."

Two young women descended a set of stairs nearby. The leading girl was clearly younger, being only about seventeen. The other was closer to twenty-one. Both had blonde hair and blue eyes.

"Hello, David," the first said. "I'm Kelli Grant."

"And I'm Elizabeth Grant," the second said. "But you'd best call me Lizza. It's odd enough to be remembered and not too hard to say."

"Welcome to our home," Kelli said.
 jokemaster
04-03-2005, 11:18 PM
#178
"Pleased to meet you both. "
 Writer
04-04-2005, 8:48 PM
#179
"Of course," Lizza said, turning away and seeming to loose interest in him as quickly as the interest had come. She walked into another room and her sister followed, motioning for the others to follow.

"You want to break into Gary's house and take his computer before he knows it's gone," Lizza said. A young man approached them and embraced Danni. Lizza continued as though nothing had happened. "And this is the man who will be going in."

Meanwhile, Danni and Ryan Richardson were having a little reunion, completely ignoring what was going on.

"Glad to see you got here safely," she told him. Ryan laughed quietly.

"You're the one who was in danger," he retorted. "I had it easy getting here, but the girls had fun with me before letting me in."

Danni's smile faded. "Fun?" Ryan hurried to reassure her that they had done him no harm and that the fun was all spoken. They suddenly realized that they'd been left behind and hurried to catch up to the group.

"David," she said, "this is my little brother, Ryan."

"She insists on calling me little," Ryan laughed. He was at least six inches taller than his sister. Danni jabbed at his arm with a playful fist.

"Ryan," she went on, "This is David Stern."

"The boyfriend you never brought home," Ryan joked, just to see his sister blush and look away. She muttered an apology under her breath and Ryan stuck out his hand. "It's a pleasure to meet you, David."
 jokemaster
04-04-2005, 10:31 PM
#180
"Nice to finallymeet you. AN dlearn of a reputation I didn't know about, now I'm only missing high-roller, and financial genius."
 Writer
04-04-2005, 10:40 PM
#181
"And how exactly does that translate into English?" Ryan asked with a laugh. Danni rolled her eyes and caught up with the rest of the group, leaving the two men alone for a moment. Ryan looked around as if making sure nobody could hear him.

"She likes you," he said in a hushed voice. "It's rare for her to write home without mentioning something you did or something you worked on together."

"Sharing dark secrets, are you?" Kelli said. She had come back to urge them to catch up with the rest of the group. "Forget about them for now. You're missing the tour!"
 jokemaster
04-06-2005, 12:14 AM
#182
"The feeling's mutual" Said David quietly to Ryan so no one heard. "But we computer nerds aren't known for our romantic achievements."
 Writer
04-07-2005, 1:24 PM
#183
Ryan chuckled and nodded. "I know. But you have to start somewhere."

Danni slowed her pace to walk with them.

"You're not paying attention," she accused. "What are you talking about?"

"Oh, nothing," Ryan said carelessly. He sped up and paid attention to the tour they were getting. Danni stayed at David's side.

"What was that all about?" she asked.
 jokemaster
04-07-2005, 11:31 PM
#184
David shrugged "Guy stuff."
 Writer
04-10-2005, 11:15 AM
#185
Danni rolled her eyes and shook her head. "You boys," she retorted playfully. "Always have to have your secrets."

She laughed and rejoined the tour. It was almost over.
 jokemaster
04-10-2005, 6:26 PM
#186
"Well, at least now I won't have my ever-present fear of rejection stopping me. C'mon, let's keep up" He rejoined the tour also.
 Writer
04-11-2005, 1:12 AM
#187
Danni gave David a funny look as he rejoined the tour, muttering something about rejection. Then, her full attention went back to Lizza and Kelli.

By the time the tour was over, all who went on it were satisfied that this house was the place to be. The gate refused to allow anyone to enter unless their voice and face were recognized by the owners. The fence around the property shocked anyone not authorized to touch it.

Motion sensors surrounded the place thickly. Cameras were everywhere. Booby traps were unavoidable... unless you were welcome. If welcomed, none of the dangers of the Grant home would afflict you.
 jokemaster
04-12-2005, 4:34 PM
#188
"So do I have to ask someone for permission to go to the bathroom at night? I don't want to sit down on the toilet and have it blow up below me."
 Writer
04-13-2005, 12:24 AM
#189
Kelli and Lizza both laughed. Their laughter was contagious enough to send the rest of the group into laughter as well.

"Don't worry," Kelli said, still giggling. "While we've been touring the house, a little program created by Danni has been digging deep into your past. It is satisfied that you are not a threat."

"You've seen the whole house now," Lizza added. "You should be able to find your way to one of the restrooms... should the need strike you in the dark... let's just say you'll not have a hard time getting there then either."
 jokemaster
04-14-2005, 9:42 PM
#190
"Wait, ALL of my past?" He looked around, acting embarassed. "Even high school? Cause there's a couple things I'm kinda embarassed about...."
 Writer
04-17-2005, 6:42 PM
#191
"Don't worry," Danni laughed. "I've never been interested in invading privacy. My program simply searches through your past. If it finds anything it thinks may be suspicious, it brings that to the screen for a person to look at. Like if somebody had a 'how to' for bombs saved on their computer, my program would find it and bring it up."

"Needless to say," Lizza continued, "anything of that sort on your computer was quickly identified as a joke."

"You always were a joker, David," Milo laughed. "Bombs? What's this about, how to builid a bomb in your kitchen?"

"It's clearly a joke," Lizza repeated. "We did a computer simulation of the instructions. It won't work."

"I'm curious, though," Kelli said. "Did you write it or did somebody send it to you?"
 jokemaster
04-18-2005, 8:09 PM
#192
"Someone sent it to me, along with the zombie survival guide and turn your house into a casino in 4 easy steps."
 Writer
04-18-2005, 8:16 PM
#193
"The casino also aroused the suspicions of the program," Kelli said. "The zombie thing was obviously overlooked. We haven't seen it."

"It was probably pretty stupid anyway," Danni laughed. She then excused herself to make a phone call. When she was alone, she called John.

"How's the writing coming?" she asked.
 Curt-Man
04-28-2005, 6:35 PM
#194
"oh h-hey danni, they writing? its uh, its coming along, just started it uh, how are you?" John said nervously
 Writer
04-29-2005, 1:34 AM
#195
"Safe and sound," Danni answered. "Listen, if you finish writing this, your job at NURV may not be safe. You might want to come stay with us... we can make sure nothing happens to you."

She looked over at Lizza for assurance. Lizza nodded. Their goal was to get him feeling scared so he'd come to them. If he was really working for Gary, they'd know quickly. Danni's program was already searching the world for information. If he was working with Gary, they could keep an eye on him. If not, he'd make a wonderful addition to the team.

"We're in a very safe place and we'll come to get you if you feel it's necessary," Danni went on. "What do you think?"
 Curt-Man
04-29-2005, 6:14 PM
#196
"n-not safe? w-what do you mean? i don't want to be put in danger or anything like that" at hearing this John got very scared, he was never one to take life threatening things calmly.
 Writer
04-30-2005, 8:55 PM
#197
"Arrange a place to meet," Danni said. "Somewhere between there and Montana. We'll meet you and bring you here. Then, we'll tell you the whole story."
 Curt-Man
05-02-2005, 7:42 PM
#198
"u-u-umm h-how about (insert random building here)?" John said now very panicked, and a little excited, he was finally doing something that contradicts his character.
 Writer
05-02-2005, 9:07 PM
#199
"That's closer to us than to you," Danni said. "We'll meet you there. Don't look for us. We'll find you."
 Curt-Man
05-03-2005, 4:03 PM
#200
John hung up not knowing what to think, he was so scared and confused. he hated the thought, but he went over to his closet, opened it and took out a hunting knife there, he strapped it to his leg and pulled his pants over it. he felt very weird having a weapon on him, but he took all precautions, then got in his car and went to the meeting place.
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