machievelli

12-10-2006, 4:20 PM
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This was written back in the early 80s. As a veteran of the Vietnam era, I always thought being blamed for what my government had done was stupid. So I combined two different sutiations with this one. One of the standard themes in science fiction is... [Read More]

Posted in: [NSW-Fic] Excerpt from Gryphonrider II

machievelli

12-08-2006, 2:46 PM
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I was going to post a portion of my first published work, but it was too long. This is from the sequel. Wanderer: Gryphonrider II available at Lulu.com. What goes through the mind of a banished warrior? Alone Dhyanna picked her way down the pass,... [Read More]

Posted in: [NSW-Fic] Amanda and the Bandersnatch

machievelli

12-07-2006, 12:16 PM
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This is an excerpt from a Science Fiction Universe I created which is as yet unpublished. If anyone want's to see excerpts from my mystery novel or the fantasy world I have created which is already in publication, please ask. Amanda and the Bandersn... [Read More]

Posted in: Replies to stupid comments by poliricians worldwide...

machievelli

10-29-2006, 10:47 AM
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To the President of Iran. the nation of Iran agreed to host an Islamic conference which will determine whether the holocaust actually occurred or not. Showing the spirit of International amity, the Mississippi school board, which banned the book Unc... [Read More]

Posted in: Missing Styles

machievelli

08-28-2006, 3:27 PM
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The first time I ran through the game, all of the masters taught me a fighting style. The problem is, I'm running through it again with the Handmaiden as part of a female led team, and while every master is teaching me a style, I'm not getting them i... [Read More]

Posted in: pc mods down?

machievelli

08-12-2006, 7:38 PM
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I tried to go to PC mods but I'm getting some wierd replies. So I'm asking this forum in general; is there a mod that makes the Handmaiden automatically chosen instead of having the male/handmaiden option the only way?... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

08-01-2006, 3:06 PM
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Knights of The Old Republic Return from Exile It is a time of chaos and danger to the Republic. Bloodied by the Mandalorian Wars, decimated by the Jedi Civil War, the Jedi order reels back in disarray. Where once thousands stood, now barely a hundr... [Read More]

Posted in: Old men forget...

machievelli

07-30-2006, 9:26 PM
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Back in July I think it was when I first posted part of my KOTOR novel, someone asked me if i was going to do a KOTORII novel. When I told them I did not have a copy of the game they asked if I wanted a copy of the KOTORII strategy guide. Unfortunate... [Read More]

Posted in: Why Haven't you reviewed me!!!!

machievelli

05-12-2006, 4:38 PM
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Do you know how often I see that? As I told Darth back when I first started, I spend an average of 30 hours a week writing, and part of that time when I'm on the computer reading for the column. Right now I am spending an average of eight hours a we... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

05-02-2006, 10:12 AM
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As the critic, I have constantly pointed out the misues of military terms. I am sometimes guilty of misusing terms myself. When I was writing the first part of Republic Dawn, I was asking for advice from someone know knows the subject. By the same t... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn

machievelli

04-20-2006, 4:57 PM
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I finished the Beginning. I knew I could go farther, but face it people would you rather buy three books of about 300 pages each which will last years, or one monster 1000+page opus that you have to be careful reading to spare the spine? But even... [Read More]

Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.

machievelli

02-16-2006, 11:44 PM
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Picture a world where the Republic is still a distant dream, and the Jedi are not yet a force in the Galaxy. Like any fire, there needs to be a starting spark... The Blade Sogor the Tyrant was not pleased. “How many times is this?” He asked pl... [Read More]

Posted in: Acceptance

machievelli

11-26-2005, 4:19 PM
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A brief intro to another SW book I hope to sell. I just came up with the idea the other day and it bugged me until I wrote it. Acceptance In the beginning... “Come out little girl.” A voice said. It wasn’t a harsh voice. In fact it was kind... [Read More]

Posted in: Law and Order Mod

machievelli

10-28-2005, 12:20 PM
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I happen to have seen the killbastila mod, which makes the sith recognize Bastila, and attack. My question is; How hard would it be to rig a mod where the local authorities (Sith on Taris, Constables on Manaan etc) react to the fact that your charact... [Read More]

Posted in: What we die for...

machievelli

10-25-2005, 3:22 PM
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What we die for... The shuttle docked with the cruiser Camirodorn. The pilot, an SP class clone turned toward the rear. He had never seen such a disreputable Jedi in his life. The fact that his entire life from tube to pilot was less than seven year... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

10-23-2005, 3:32 PM
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For those that wanted to see their reviews... Star Wars: Invisible Hope Sabretooth Set during SWIII. An Arc trooper operation goes bad during the clone wars... Sabretooth’s five chapter work is solid military fiction similar to ops in Vietnam whic... [Read More]

Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts

machievelli

09-17-2005, 12:57 AM
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Author's note. Exerpts of a full length novel that will be submitted soon. Knights of the Old Republic: Genesis of a Jedi Archivist’s Notes: Little is known of the past of Padawan Danika Wordweaver. As a Jedi Consular, she spent most of her life... [Read More]

Posted in: Miho from SinCity

machievelli

08-30-2005, 11:32 AM
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Could anyone do a mod of Miho as either NPC or player? I like the long blonde hair and oriental features... [Read More]

Posted in: Sasha

machievelli

08-27-2005, 11:37 PM
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Is there someone skilled enough to make Sasha (The young girl who stows away on Dantooine) as a jedi apprentice NPC?... [Read More]

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