hullo, sorry i havent posted before this but ive just ... hmmm ... how can i put this .. kind of ... in a trance in reading, this is just ... well, excellent, in any other words it would seem an understatement at the least ... just brilliant, definitley cannot wait until the next chapter ...
But i do have one question, where did visas end up, she ran off, but you havent said where she is, im just confused, and was a little disapointed in the few seconds i realised this ... but anyway ... hope to see the next chapter soon.
Ah, Visas...not one of my favorite characters...and I didn't include her, did I? Heheh, oops :xp: Well, next chapter is on the way (sorta) and that should solve things...
I'm glad you liked it, BFA :D
lol its one ofthose things where you cant not like it ... anyway ... still waiting for next chapter ... but TAKE YOUR TIME lol, want a really good one as always, not a rushed one
^It's Forcefight writing this, she couldn't rush it if her life depended on it. :xp:
no kidding :D
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dont let her hear ou saying that. :xp:
^ He's right. She hears that, Hall, and you're in for it. Trust me... I know... *cowers in a corner to cry*
Man that was good love to see what will happen nex. Love youre story very :thmbup1:
2 :thmbup1: way up
Cant stop reading :blast5:
Seriously great stuff, you should really consider making Plight of Darkness a book,it'd sell pretty well. Could you critique my fic THE GALACTIC SCREAM whenever you get a chance, I'd really like to know your opinion on it.
PS. I'm in 8th grade too, REPRESENT!!!!!!! :ears1:
BFA: Lol, Hall is right. I couldn't rush a chapter if I had wanted to :xp:
Hall: :chop1: <That's Hall, by the way. I wonder who accidentally let that gulletine fall on him...:xp:
RC: You're next :lol:
Doc: :worship: :sithm: :P
Darth: Glad you liked it! Next chapter should be comming up...
SaP: Meh, it'd have to be a lot longer than I'm planning on making it for it to fill up a book...I'll check out your fic as soon as I have time...which will be soon, I hope. 8 Grade rules!
Hall: :chop1: <That's Hall, by the way. I wonder who accidentally let that gulletine fall on him...:xp:
I wonder who accidentally misspelled guillotine. ;P
8 Grade rules!
Funny, everyone at my school hates the grade 8's, and we push them around in the halls for no reason.
You guys are also in High School. <_<
What're 8th Graders doing in the same building, anyway?
^ That's what the high school people would like to know, I think.
What're 8th Graders doing in the same building, anyway?
Getting pushed around for no reason, of course! :)
Well here Elementary School goes from kindergarten-grade 7, and High School goes from grade 8-grade 12.
That's crazy. You're supposed to be normal, Hall!
Wait... no you're not. You're Canadian. We're wierd :D
In star wars I when you kill malak what happens nex? I forgot
In star wars I when you kill malak what happens nex? I forgot
This isn't the place to post it. Post this is the Padawan's Lounge.
Anyway ForceFight, can't wait for the next Chapter. SaP is right. You could make this a book, if you edited the mistakes with the help of Hall. I might sound like a pain, but can you check out my Fanfic, Jedi Forces - Shadows Of War?
Pottsie: Like I told SaP, I'll check out your fic as soon as I can scrounge up enough time...though I suppose I should try and keep up with Shadows of War since I didn't really keep up with your other one...heh.
Doc & Hall: Crazy Canadians :lol:
Darth: That's the way it goes with us...strange.
great story...yall people are crazy...sry i havnt commented in a while i was grounded :(
Doc & Hall: Crazy Canadians :lol:
You're just saying that because we spell honour (and other words like it) with a 'u'. And centre is spelled 're' not 'er'.
@Pottsie: Thank you, very few people appreciate/don't yell at me for my abilities. +10 cool points. :)
honour...colour...centre...favourite...The list goes on and on...
And you call yourself a grammar/spelling expert :xp: I do love how you use Spell Check though, Hall :lol: j/k
Alright, i guess I should stop picking on Hall now, shouldn't I?
Alright, i (:eek:, you forgot to capitalize 'I'!) guess I should stop picking on Hall now, shouldn't I?
Keep on picking on me, if you want. I don't get offended by grade eights, although if they insult me to my face I push them into a wall. :)
dont hurt 8th graders im 1
but I wont bow to an 8th grade sith my lord :lol:
you wont hit a girl only if you are one :/ :lsduel:
if I do wana take this outside lol :P
settle down...
and stop hating 8th graders
I like 8th graderd there ok :/
ok...I'm still watching u, ffwm great story by the way
Darth_Nihilus, please stop spamming. Thank you.
Yeah ... well ... im in year 12 and ill kick all youse ... even though i am failing and hate it .. me still smart cause im a senior :D:D
what does all of this s*** have anything to do with the PoD??
anyway, ForceFight: one word:
COMMENTS!
figure it out (it wont take you long ) and give them to me :D
You're right, RC, it didn't take long :xp: I'll get to 'em when I get to 'em :lol: No, not really. I'll check out your story as soon as I find time, just like the others...
Nihilus and DLR, please stop clogging up the thread. Muchas gracias :D
gosh!
everytime i see you posted on this thread i am hoping for a new chapter,
make it good but get the next one up ASAP!
lol.
Alright guys, you're going to kill me for this.
I've been having some trouble with PoD...much more than normal. Most of the time, at this point, I at least have an idea what the next few chapters will contain...however, this time, I don't. Don't get me wrong, I'm not just sitting here for five minutes and saying 'oh, sorry, got nothin'. My ideas for the plot have gone from too many to nada. So, I'm afraid I'm setting Plight of Darkness aside. I honestly don't want to give up on this story, but it's just not working for me right now. I'll probably get started with another soon, but, while I will continue to try and work on it, PoD won't be updated for probably quite a while. The most I can say is...well...sorry. Oh, and don't kill me. Please?...oh snap
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
But not really. That Writer's Block must be bad. I wouldn't reccommend started another Story, because I did that and it was hard to write them all.
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Well, all I really have to say is that I'm kinda disappointed, but since you might start another fic I guess it's O.K. Just keep it more regularly updated than this one. ;)
But I hope you get back to this sometime.
I'm surprised, Hall. I thought I was going to get the H-Bomb dropped on me when you saw this...quite literally :xp:
Well, thanks for understanding, guys. Sometimes if I set something aside for a while new, better ideas begin to form for it. Happened quite a bit with my other fics, actually...
Anyway, my other fic should be more updated, as it will be based on an RP, so...yeah. I'll just be taking the main ideas of the posts and then filling them in more...story-like. If that makes sense :D
You have a good story going here--I'd toss it in the corner for awhile, and then reread your entire story from the start after a week or two (or when school lets out and you have more time to just relax a bit). You may find some new ideas or themes to complete that way.
Im sad but its youre story so ok for me.
H-Bomb you want? Then H-Bomb it is! :D
dont worry, FFWM12, just dont forget it and us ok? (and special emphasis on us) :D
Say it ain't so ForceFight!?!? :(
If you have to set aside this story for the time being, take your time in coming up with ideas. If you need suggestions, don't be afraid to ask any of us. I'm sure no one will mind if you put this story on the shelf till the summer.