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Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-20-2005, 11:14 PM
#49
Of course, but if you noticed the first part was mostly all dialogue, and the rest of the parts is mostly the takeover of Strider's homeplanet, so there's going to be quite a bit of action scenes and there's not much I can do with it. The end of this...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-20-2005, 6:57 PM
#47
Thanks for the encouragement. If you people have any constructive criticism, let me know what it is. I'd also like to know some things you all liked about it, so I know what's currently being enjoyed and what parts I need to make more enjoyable....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-20-2005, 12:08 AM
#45
Okay, there's too much to tell in this chapter that I can simply just seperate it into two parts, so there's going to probably be a part 3 and 4 for Chapter 5, here's part two, I've been working on it all day since 4:15 PM and I just finished it a fe...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-19-2005, 6:32 PM
#43
Well just so you all know, I've started the second part in third person, I've been playing around with it a bit more come up with some ideas that I could pull off better in third person than first, I'm thinking I'm going to stick with it....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-18-2005, 6:54 PM
#41
I'm personally thinking on going back to first person, I just felt a little more comfortable telling the story through Strider's eyes. The only problem I had was a feeling of redundancy, but I'm pretty sure I've got a way to narrow it down. I'm sorry...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-17-2005, 11:32 PM
#39
FINALLY...finished PART ONE of Chapter 5. I intend to expand more into the "shift of power" onto the planet, but I -really- wanted to get an update out the door just so you guys and girls could get an idea of where it's going. I present to...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-17-2005, 8:19 PM
#38
The clichй of the dialogue has an explanation 9 times out of 10 it resulted from I had a planned out dialogue beforehand, as in when I started the chapter, and by the time I got to the point where I would actually use it, I either forgot it or some...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-16-2005, 2:01 PM
#34
Wow, thanks for the pointers. As for saying I wish to add more detail into the environment, I just want to sift to third person because I can simply say more about what's going on around the Strider may or may not notice. Also, on top of that, it may...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-15-2005, 11:15 PM
#29
I read some of it when I had the chance, I actually think it's pretty good. I didn't get the chance to read the whole thing, and when life doesn't have me bogging down and I have some more time on my hands, I'll give it a go and see what all you have...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-14-2005, 10:53 PM
#26
I just feel more limited, that's why. But I'll try in third, and I'll probably have Chapter 5 up by tonight or tomorrow. Let's see how it goes....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-14-2005, 10:31 PM
#24
Dude cmon man, she's a fictional story character, haha. I'd say she's fairly attractive, which is going to of course lead to other problems later. Now enough about her, what be your opinion about third person? haha....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-14-2005, 9:40 PM
#22
Sorry for lack of updates. I'm currently working on Chapter 5 but I'm debating on whether or not to sift the story to the third person view. I want to do this because I realize I can describe the surroundings in scenes better because I'm not limited...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-11-2005, 7:12 PM
#21
Yeah, I've been kinda burdened with some life issues so my motivation to work on this has lessened. I haven't touched it in a few days, but rest assured I shall when I can. I won't let this idea die out before it comes into execution. I just need som...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-08-2005, 11:23 PM
#18
Was shorter than I intended, but it made it's point. Chapter 5's gonna be considerably longer....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-08-2005, 8:06 PM
#16
Chapter 4 Hostile Takeover I met the men in the apartment complex, I was wearing some darker Jedi tunic than normal, the cloth that runs along the front, the tabards, were instead of cloth, metal-plated for blaster protection. I wasn’t taking any...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-06-2005, 7:28 PM
#15
Sure, sounds fine with me....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-05-2005, 11:52 PM
#13
That'd be great. Make up whatever you like for my character, just know he was one of the only Sith Hunters to get away before the Implants took full effect, so therefor never really turned on the Jedi. Otherwise, long as you don't kill him, you can u...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-05-2005, 11:45 PM
#11
Well, as much as I'd love to include the Sith Hunters, I really can't remember much that went on in that RPG. If you want to give me a lowdown or something in a PM or something, I'd be glad to include it when I get to that section. Also, to answer th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-05-2005, 8:29 PM
#9
Thanks, I've got less and less time than I'd like to work on these chapters than I'd like, so 4 might not be up until Friday, at the latest. I'll try and update on a Monday, Wednesday, and Friday schedule for now, if I don't have it done on one of th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-05-2005, 8:00 PM
#7
Chapter 3 Strider’s Initiation Rebellious faction on Kyron Getting into contact with the rebel faction was cake for me. They were eager to hear that a Jedi was willing to help them, although it was information I wasn’t supposed to have told them...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-04-2005, 6:57 PM
#6
Thanks. Chapter 3's in mid-writeup right now, no way I'm gonna be able to keep a two-chapters an update schedule, so you'll all have to settle with 1 :-p I'll have Chapter 3 in all it's glory up before the end of the day. Due to constant phone calls...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Chronicles of Flamehart; Part 1
  Flamehart
10-03-2005, 11:38 PM
#3
They were kinda the intro chapters, so they were a bit shorter than I intended. The third chapter is far more in depth however in Strider's full inclusion into the resistance group on the planet. I'm going to see how many chapters a week I can do, I'...  [Read More]
Posted in: Episode XX: The Jedi, the Sith, and the Hunger
  Flamehart
10-09-2005, 12:57 AM
#242
Strider shrugged and answered, "I'm over the age of an adult since this "gift" has been given, so as long as that's in effect I'm fine, I know I'm not a kid, whether or not I'm called one makes no difference. There's no veteran that ca...  [Read More]
Posted in: Episode XX: The Jedi, the Sith, and the Hunger
  Flamehart
10-09-2005, 12:03 AM
#239
Strider laughed and shook his head, then regained his composure. He bowed towards them, "I am Strider Flamehart, the resident enigma of the group. Unlike my counterparts, I am enjoying my gift. I certainly see the opportunity to do much in the g...  [Read More]
Posted in: Episode XX: The Jedi, the Sith, and the Hunger
  Flamehart
10-08-2005, 8:13 PM
#233
Strider had been listening in through all of this and just simply nodded. He didn't seem talkative at this moment, but his sitting posture showed he was quite a confident person. He drew himself up and straightened out his blood red cloak and nodded,...  [Read More]
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