Dylan Klay

02-01-2006, 5:56 AM
#30

I agree. I think it'd add a dynamic, with the love triangles. Maybe, you get betrayed by the loosing end of the love triangle? Kinda like what Anakin hinted that Obi-wan did with Padme. They might make it like the old Baldur's Gate romance line :) he... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Temptation Rising

Dylan Klay

01-31-2006, 5:04 PM
#7

"He can be so headstrong and cares little for any negotiation that doesn't happen at the snap of an appendage!" "Were you so different?" His Camasii eyes sparkled with amusement. "Your quick with your tounge, he with the bla... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Temptation Rising

Dylan Klay

01-31-2006, 3:50 PM
#6

Seated in the center lounge, Varick Keltron tried to get comfortable on the mat. Meditation was difficult when his brother was there. Always in mind, it was especially distracting when it was his job that was forefront, not the other way around, like... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Temptation Rising

Dylan Klay

01-28-2006, 11:53 AM
#5

This is a fanfic; I could use some comments :) Do ya'll like it? Is my writing style bad? What do I need to improve on? Is it good? Info please.... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Temptation Rising

Dylan Klay

01-27-2006, 1:56 PM
#4

(OOC: Have edited some of the content of this story, so, please forgive the changes) When's this ever going to end? he tapped his feet and drummed the fingers of his right hand against his knee. He could feel his mind begining to wander, as it often... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Temptation Rising

Dylan Klay

01-27-2006, 10:15 AM
#3

(OOC: Okay, sorry been away so long. Busy position and workload)... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Temptation Rising

Dylan Klay

01-19-2006, 1:50 PM
#2

....but the other Jedi could feel his irritation. Voshon Keltron, the younger of the two twins, was not the most tactful indvidual in the galaxy. He normally prefered to be direct in everything except military tactics; he really despised polititians... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Temptation Rising

Dylan Klay

01-18-2006, 7:51 AM
#1

This fan fiction is a work of my own. All characters and events are of mine and my friend, Dan Haas', creation. This is in honour of that same friend of mine. Please, feel free to leave any comments you'd like, as well as any ideas as this is a work... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

Dylan Klay

02-01-2006, 4:36 AM
#123

I'll just be happy when someone finally comments on mine, even just to say keep going LOL... [Read More]

Posted in: how would you fix EU

Dylan Klay

01-28-2006, 1:22 PM
#20

Hi all, I'm new to this forum. I actually started looking at it cause I wanted a place to get my fanfiction posted and critiqued (I really want to become a writer some day). as far as the topic of this thread, I like it just the way it is save for on... [Read More]

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