Our understated existence
Relies on faith.
The collapse of life:
A fault in belief.
No beacon can pierce
The darkness,
Our existence.
The valleys,
The mountains:
Our struggle is
Our existence.
The black does not mask,
but only perceives.
It is the medium of pain,
It is life.
Yay, 30 second poems are fun.
*snap snap*
Thanks for the submission. May I pry as to what it's about? What inspired you to write it?
I was inspired to write it because you were complaining about the lack of content.
As for what it's about: I think it's blatantly obvious. Come on Met. ;)
Actually, harshness of life, importance of faith, you know: hackneyed stuff. What else am I to think of in 30 seconds?
Heh, I have an idea about what it's about. Is there anything else you want to share about it?
Contrary to popular theory, I don't like to hear myself talk all the time.
Not really, except there's an emphasis on blind faith. If you'd like to give your idea a go, I'd be interested to hear if what you think is what I was thinking.