It's that time again when I have to pull my finger out and run a Star Wars RPG campaign for my group. Last time I did an opening crawl, but this time round I decided to expand on the idea and actually include part of the first scene by adding some animation. I've pretty much done it, but I can't help feeling it could do with a few more finishing touches.

Sorry it's a bit small, but I'd love to hear any criticism and tips to make it look a little slicker...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgCf1T8weFc)

Well, first, I'm not entirely sure it was necessary to use that custom logo instead of the regular Star Wars logo, but aside from that, I think that you just need to work on your rendering method.