[TSL]Poll:Vote on wich intro movie you like or wright in with a modified version. It needs to stay on the same theme main points are:
1. 5 years before manalorian wars.
2. about the jedi academy inside the jedi temple.
3. about trouble sturing up from all corners of the galaxy
4. and something to bring it to the jedi thats going through the jedi trials.
Here are the choices for the poll:
(1) About five years before the mandalorian wars,
the jedi temple on coruscant was filled with
promising students. During this time the
jedi knights often visited other worlds to
settle disputes and keep the peace.
At the Jedi temple, the jedi council started
reciving distress calls from all over the
galaxy. The best of the jedi were sent to
investigate.
Meanwhile, Master grayson is prepairing his
aprentice for knight hood. Will the aprentice
suceed or fail....
(2) Around 5 years before the mandalorian wars
the jedi temple was filled with masters and students.
Around the middle of the jedi tower, promising padawans
gathered to learn and train from the great jedi masters.
It was a time of peace. The galaxy often called upon
the members of the jedi order to settle disputes and
brough peace between planets. But like all things
peace only lasts for a time. And that time was almost
up.
Meanwhile, In the jedi academy, Master Grayson prepairs
his padawan for the last trial in the jedi trials. Little did the
padawan know that he will change things to come for centuries.
(3) About five years before the mandalorian wars,
the jedi temple on coruscant was filled with
promising students. During this time the
jedi knights often visited other worlds to
settle disputes and keep the peace.
However, Peace was not to last. It started
with distress calls comming from all over the
galaxy. The Council sent their best jedi to
investigate, but none returned.
Meanwhile, Master grayson is prepairing his
aprentice for knight hood. Will the aprentice
suceed or fail....
4. Reply with your own with the conditions above.
The ones you have are good, Here is another idea for one
based on your original 3.......
Five years before the Mandalorian Wars,
the Jedi Temple on Coruscant was filled with
promising students. During this time the
Jedi Knights were sent to worlds to help
settle disputes and keep the peace.
The Jedi Council has started to receive
disturbing distress calls from all over the galaxy.
The Council have sent many Jedi to investigate but
all of them vanished with out a trace.
Meanwhile on Coruscant, Master Grayson prepares
his padawan for the last test in the Trials
to become a Jedi Knight....
Logan
I like logans... it's written in a better way, more formal and in keeping with Star Wars intro movies
Logan23. I see one problem with it. Didn't they (in others) use the past tense or was it just the "a long time ago" in a galaxy far....