Well, here it is, my long anticipated fic! I'm just posting the prologue for now, to wet your apettites. :xp:

A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...

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STAR WARS
KNIGHTS OF THE OLD REPUBLIC III
EPISODE I
SHADOWS OF THE FORCE

After the defeat of DARTH TRAYA by the hands of the JEDI EXILE, she left everyone, including her love Atton Rand, and took off with the EBON HAWK, in search of REVAN.

THE LOST JEDI, who consisted of Atton Rand, Mira, Bao-Dur and Visas rebuilt the Jedi Temple on Coruscant. The Disciple and the Handmaiden, now known as Mical and Brianna have also rebuilt the Jedi Academies on Dantooine, and on Telos. BASTILA SHAN presented herself to the Lost Jedi, and now they are all part of the High Jedi Council on CORUSCANT.

One more year has passed, and Revan and the Jedi Exile are nowhere to be found. Now, a PADAWAN is on the verge to be knighted, and he is prophetised to have a great destiny. Will he and many other companions he will gather find Revan and the Jedi Exile before it is too late?

The sound of lightsaber clashes and twirls echoed through my head. Dark Blue , Jade, Blue and Yellow sabers clashed equally with a Red one, although I could not see anything, only the lights. Suddenly, the dark blue lightsaber turned off, and someone yelled.

Then, I woke up.

“Uhg…,” I muttered, “Another dream. These are getting more often. Well, I should continue however.”

Coruscant was not a nice city to live, but it was also the home of the Jedi Temple, and that was nice. I got out of my bed, and put my robes on. I looked around, looking for my most valuable possession, not counting The Force, of course. I looked further and found it on my workbench. There it was, my Lightsaber. I was practising my lightsaber skills in the art of Form IV, the Ataru, under my Master, Ky’Dor, so the hilt was perfect. I grabbed it, and hooked it to my belt.

It was going to be a long day.

nice story...
I think i know who was having red lightsaber :saberr: Revan :sithm:

Thanks for reading. Also, try not to guess, sometimes it ruins things for people. :xp: And no, i'm not answering this indirectly.

Welcome to the forums although.

Welcome to the forums although.

Yeah,welcome to the Forums DarthSnake. If you want to guess, PM Jason. Good start, I also didn't expect you to do first person. Is this based on The Sith Menace by any chance?

PS. You've improved since Jedi Heroes.

Good start, I also didn't expect you to do first person. Is this based on The Sith Menace by any chance?

PS. You've improved since Jedi Heroes.

First person? Boy, you are wrong. :D And a little, is going to have some elements that were scheduled to TSM, but, it's pratically dead now. Also, thanks for the compliment.

Hey thanks Jason. You are one of my favourite underrated writers here.

Thank you as well. Chap I coming up!

Chapter I : A Long Day Assignment

I got out of my room, and to another day. The Jedi Temple surely was a great thing to witness. The Council had told me I was going to get an assignment, but it was not until later. I decided to go to the Archives, to hone my skills in the Force. As I reached the entrance, High Council Member and Jedi Historian, Jedi Master Mical engaged me.

“Greetings, Padawan Kenobi. Are you looking for something?” He asked me, a smile on his face. It were good times.

“Well, I was looking for archives which could be useful with my skills, but I changed my mind. I’d like to know more about recent History,” I told him.

“Very well, go to that hall, turn right into a corridor. There’s another Padawan there, learning the same thing. I hope you find what you want, and may the Force be with you,” He smiled again.

I nodded to the Master and wandered off. I followed his directions, and there she was, Padawan Cameron Sunrider. She was sitting in a table, reading. She was very beautiful, and her green eyes combined with her robe. I walked to her and sat beside her.

“Greetings. You are studying history as well?” I asked.

“Oh, hi Jason. Yes, like to join up?” She asked me. I smiled and easily accepted.

Many things I got to know about how the Mandalorian Wars ended, and their battles as well. The Jedi Civil War which followed, in which Revan redeemed himself by defeating Malak. And finally the Exile defeating Nihilus aboard the Ravager over Telos, Sion at the Trayus Academy and then Traya at the Trayus Core.

“Fascinating. Don’t you think?” She asked me. I answered with a clumsy smile, nodding.

Suddenly, I felt something.

“Well, I have to go, the Masters will assign me for a mission. Goodbye,” I told her, waving my hand, on my way to the Council Chambers. I ran my way to it, passing by the stairs, and then finally reaching. I took a deep breath and the door opened. Inside were Masters Mical, Atton Rand, Visas Marr, Brianna Kae, Mira, Bao-Dur and Ky’Dor, all clothed in Jedi Robes, those of the Masters. Master Bao-Dur was also in one, and I had heard he had a “special” replacement arm a year ago, different. Anyways, I bowed, in a sign of respect.

“Greetings Padawan Kenobi,” Master Rand started.

“Greetings Masters,” I continued.

“We have called you here for an assignment. You, and another Padawan will travel to the lower cities of Coruscant. You must do everything in your reach to get to it. We need a holocron, which contains most sensitive information about…Revan,” Master Shan told me. I had heard she and Revan where linked somehow, but I never knew how.

“So, what is this other Padawan?” I asked. The doors behind me opened and from outside came Cameron Sunrider.

“We have downloaded the information to your datapads. Be careful, and May The Force Be With You,” Master Kae told us. We bowed and made our way outside.

“So, you and me, eh? Sounds nice,” I smiled. She giggled, “Well, let’s see this datapad. It says here we are also going to be accompanied by a droid who goes by the name of T3-M4. We are to pick him up at the Droid Maintenance Room.”

They walked for some minutes until they finally reached the room. The doors opened and it looked like more of a factory than a maintenance room. A bright blue and white utility droid with a blue visor, ran at us.

“Hey there little buddy. I’m guessing you’re T3-M4?” I asked. It beeped and whistled loud in a affirmation tone. A Zabrak in Engineering suit appeared behind it.

“Greetings. I’m Bao-Dur’s cousin, Rron-Dur,” He said, bowing. We did the same, “I have modified him carefully with many more techs, and have made him a astromech and utility droid combined. I like to call it a “Expert Droid”. Now good luck, and may the Force be with you.”

We then made our way out of the Temple and into the hangar, with T3 in the middle of us.

“You seem a likeable sort, I’m glad to have you around,” Cameron told him, patting him on the head. T3 then beeped of happiness. We got a speeder and hopped on it. It would be a long ride down the cities.

“Hmm, a lot of Tarisian Style Cantinas. Seems alright, since Taris was destroyed,” Jason told his companions, noticing a particular cantina, “Oh, how about this one? The Manly Mynock.”

T3 beeped in affirmation and Cameron nodded. We both got their hoods up, parked the speeder and got into the cantina. Many races such as Nikto, Weequays and Chisses where there. I walked up to the bartender.

“Uhm, excuse me, I’m looking to…join some business. If you know what I mean.” I whispered to the bartender, who appeared to be a Chiss.

“Uh, what, what are you talking about, I know nothing about what you are talking.” He told me, confused. I sighed, and put my hand on my pocket. I reached to the end and got out 20 credits.

“Will this suffice?”

“Yes,” He said, sneakily putting the credits in his pocket, “About 4 quarters behind this bar and in three hours. Good luck.”

“Oh and, we didn’t meet with each other,” I said, waving my hand and using the infamous Jedi Mind Trick.

“We never met with each other and are complete strangers to me.” The bartender said, forced. I smirked and turned around.

“Let’s go,” I motioned with my hand before we saw guts flying in the air. A fight had just broke, “Oh, Sith spit!”

Almost everyone started to shoot everywhere, and the innocent civilians and workers started to take cover.

“I take care of the people, you of the assailants,” Cameron said, unhooking her Lightsaber and igniting it with a purple blade coming out, “Soresu’s my style.”

She ran off to protect the rest of the civilians while i grinned and ignited my blue Lightsaber and ran towards them. I blocked many shots, which was quite amazing for a Ataru practitioner, but those whose i didn’t deflect where taken care of by Cameron. T3 also provided covering fire, but didn’t to as much impact as when i got sick of deflecting, twirled my saber, and slashed the ground, letting out a shock wave, sending everyone in my front to the floor below, knocking them out. The Coruscant Security Force didn’t take much time to get there, but at that time, we had already fled to the meeting place, and parked the speeder.

“Well, I’m guessing we just stay put and wait for the meeting,” I told my companions.

Minutes and hours had passed, and still nothing when suddenly, lot of species started to gather in front of them. It looked like a gang war, in which the prize was the holocron.

I sighed, “ I have a bad feeling about this.”

All of them took out their blasters and started shooting at each other. Eventually, the ones in red won, and noticed me, Cameron and T3.

“You will regret coming here, Jedi’s!” A Nikto said as they raised their blasters to us. Their guns shot fast, and were very powerful as they quickly destroyed the speeder, but they where no match for us, whose Lightsaber's quickly cut down the guns in half. They started screaming and ran off, unfortunately and unnoticed, with the holocron. Me and Cameron quickly came to the aid of one of the dying from the other gang, but it was too late. A card slipped out and T3 took it and analysed it.

“I’m guessing that’s some sort of key card,” Cameron said, as she then noticed three swoops, intact, “Jason, look!”

I turned my attention around and saw them as well. T3 slid there and sliced the computer panels, making them able for me and Cameron to fly on. Wehopped on them, and T3 turned on his recently installed jets, and flew off as we chased down the gangsters. It was being a long and exhausting chase but they got out of the swoops on the lower cities. We did the same and started looking around. It took some minutes, but we finally found them. We started pursuiting them beside a wall when suddenly, everything blacked out, and we where knocked unconscious.

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Alright, tell me what you think!

EDIT: Wow. I just noticed this is WAYYYY smaller in LF than in Word.

EDIT: Wow. I just noticed this is WAYYYY smaller in LF than in Word.

Better than the Prologue. I have to agree with the Quote. Good Chapter and I'm looking foward to more.

Thanks Pottsie. I do hope i get it soon, have some really big plans for this fic...

EDIT: Also, Jason resembles Obi-Wan in TPM and Cameron resembles Siri Tachi in this (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Image:SiriTachi.JPG) pic. I'll also eventually post their profiles along with T3's.

When is the next Chapter coming?

I dunno. I'm going to work on it as soon as i get some videos seen. Don't worry.

Well, here are the profiles:

Name: Jason Kenobi
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 20
Hair Colour: Light Brown
Eye Colour: Dark Brown
Affiliation: Jedi Order/Republic
Class: Jedi Guardian
Equipment: Kenobi Robe, Blue Lightsaber
Homeworld: Coruscant
Favourite Force Powers: Force Bolt, Force Speed
Lightsaber Form (s): Form IV, Ataru
Master (s): Ky’Dor
Apprentice (s): None
Attire: Reddish brown cloak, tan outer tunic, light brown inner tunic, tan pants, dark brown boots.

Name: Cameron Sunrider
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Age: 20
Hair Colour: Golden blonde with stints of red
Eye Colour: Emerald green
Affiliation: Jedi Order/Republic
Class: Jedi Consular
Equipment: Sunrider Robe, Purple Lightsaber
Homeworld: Naboo
Favourite Force Powers: Force Heal, Force Protect
Lightsaber Form (s): Form III, Soresu
Master (s): Bastila Shan
Apprentice (s): None
Attire: Green cloak, white outer and inner tunics, white pants, green boots.

Name: T3-M4
Gender: Male programming
Race: Droid
Age: 6
Eye Colour: Yelow
Affiliation: Republic/Jedi Order/His Master
Class: Expert Droid
Equipment: Blaster Pistols
Homeworld: Taris
Master (s): Revan/Exile/Jason
Apprentice (s): None

Nice profiles and nice new Avatar.

Thanks, i'm really fond of it. I'm currently writing the next chapter by the way. Just hope people start noticing this.

I like it. It's a good story. I'm very much looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

Thanks DL. Atleat this is getting more posters and readers than good ol' Pottsie. :D No offense Potts.

Thanks DL. Atleat this is getting more posters and readers than good ol' Pottsie. :D No offense Potts.

None taken. I'm sure people would rather read a KOTOR III Fic than a Jedi Knight Fic, plus this Fic was released earlier than Jedi Forces. The closest I've ever got to KOTOR III was my Fic, Darkness Rising, which was set in between TSL and KOTOR III, but that is a different story. I'm looking foward to Chapter II all the same.

Thanks Potts. I might do a character based on you. Although he won't have much of a role. :D

Thanks Potts. I might do a character based on you. Although he won't have much of a role. :D

A Character based on me eh? I wonder what that would be like. I'm still looking foward to Chapter II.

This one's an interesting and well-polished fanfic. Apart from a few grammar mistakes, the fanfic is written excellently. I look forward to seeing what happens next. :veryeager:

Thanks for reading Sabre. Altough Chap II won't have much Sabre Time...I guess it will be ready by either tonight or tomorrow.

Thanks for reading Sabre. Altough Chap II won't have much Sabre

Bah! You had to blow it, didn't ya? :D

Nice chapters...Looking forward to see more!

Yes Saber, i had to blow it, i had to blow the next chapter!

Chapter II : The Tracking Bothans

I woke up in a large room on a bed and standing next to me was Cameron. I got up, and found out someone had taken our Lightsabers, gear…and clothes.

“Hey, Cameron, wake up,” I told her, patting her in the shoulder. She woke up quickly.

“Well, I’m glad no one knows about this. We’d be the laughing stock of the Jedi Order,” She sighed.

“Agreed. Let’s just find a way out of here though, “ I said, before my eyes laid attention on a locker. I walked up there and found some decent clothing. Cameron followed me, and we dressed up. I had a full-body dark green suit while she had an exact suit, except it was brown.

“Great, let’s go,” She suggested, as we ran to the door, only to be blocked by a three persons, two male Lethan Twi’leks donned in Heavy Battle Armour, followed by a male Human in the same.

“Going…somewhere?” The man asked. I was almost getting my Lightsaber out…until I remembered it was gone.

“Who are you people? Why did you take our stuff away?” Cameron asked.

“All at it’s time. But for now, follow me. I assure you, we aren’t a threat, Jedi’s. In fact, we are to give a proposition...” He said, before walking off. There was not much to do, so we decided to follow them. A while later, we where in the Main Hall, and there was a Bothan sitting on a chair.

“Well, I am so glad you are, for there is much to discuss. I am Rayarn Plo’bre, leader of The Tracking Bothans. You see, we are at war with that gang you were following, they have no name, but we like to call them The Dark Hunters. Their leader, is a crazed Wookie who enjoys hurting and send suffering. He is called…Hanharr. I once heard he was a survivor from when Malachor V blew up,” Rayarn said.

“Well, we appreciate you want us to help you, but you didn’t need to take our things,” Cameron observed.

“Actually, it was. You need to stay undercover here in the Lower Cities, not going around in your robes sticking your Lightsaber in everybody’s business. We left those suits in there on purpose. Now, my proposition is the following. A bird told me that they are going to sell that holocron of theirs to someone in the Black Market, and also a very sensitive datapad for us. We want you to sneak in their base here on Coruscant, get the Holocron, and the datapad. You will then trade them for these fake ones, and when they know it, they’ll already be buried seven feet under. Do you accept?”

“Well, we have to get by all means, so alright, we’ll do it.” I answered.

“Capital! Also, I’m afraid you won’t be able to take your Jedi Gear and the droid to the cities. It would get too much attention. Also, because you are doing this for us, you can take any weapon or armour from our armoury. Don’t try and expect to find your initial gear, though,” He said, crossing his fingers, “It’s locked tight. Anyways, the man you found back on your temporary quarters will be your escort,” He said as the man got up from the seat he had taken and gave us the fake datapad and holocron, “For now, I’m going. Good luck, I know you’ll need it.”

We bowed and then turned to the man who had taken us there. His hair was shaved and brown, but not completely, and he had a goatee. His eyes where dark green, and he was of tall height and muscular constitution.

“Well, hello, peeps around here call me “Pottsie.” Nice to meet you,” He told us, extending his hand. I put on a smile on my face and shaked it in a sign of respect, “So, I guess we should get going to the armoury, eh?”

“Indeed. It is also nice to meet you, “Pottsie,” Cameron chuckled. He appeared to be not fond of jokes but he smiled the faintest smile he could. He then waved his hand in a sign for us to follow him, and he led us to another hall, this time bigger. It looked like a common room, and then we turned to the right.

“Well, here it is, the armoury,” Pottsie told us. He took out a keycard and sliced it on a console, then put his hand over a window, finalizing by the eye routine check.

“Welcome, Pottsie. Have a nice stay,” The console said as the doors slid open.

”Well, go inside and take what you think will need. When you’re finished, meet me at the common room,” He told us, as he walked back to the common room. We entered and searched the room with the Force.

“Only slowing armours for protection, and vibroblades and blasters for weapons. Oh well,” I said, before crouching to get one blaster pistol , and twirled it around with my finger, in an act of mockery. Cameron laughed and picked up a nearby Vibrosword. I looked around more, and found a belt with some thermal detonators. I took the belt and attached it.

“Well, I’m guessing we’re done. Let’s see Pottsie,” I told Cameron. We walked out from the armoury, and into the common room. Most of the members where there, for it was a busy day in the Big City. We walked up to Pottsie, who was talking to another member, before he spotted us.

“Well, you’ve already gotten yourselves some equipment, eh? Alright then, let’s get going. We’re only wasting time here,” He said, before he started walking towards the exit.

The search, had began.

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Well, here it is, hope ya' like it.

Yay a cameo of me. Although I don't like having my name being online, for I feel uncomfortable about it being there. Could you just sort of like, just keep it as Pottsie please, if that's alright with you Jason? Thanks. Good Chapter though and I like Hanharr being alive.

I like it. I like the Frist Person views in stories, because it makes ya feel, you are actually apart of the whole thing :D lol .. Anyway ... Great story, and im looking forward to the next chapter.

Sorry Pottsie, didn't knew, i'll change. Also, i'm currently writing the next one.

Please do not use any person's real name on the forums. This is for everyone's security. Real names will be deleted. --Jae

Good chaps Jason I like this:)

Konichiwa Jae, Konichiwa. Also, Hanharr will play some what of a major role in this Episode.

Now it is really chapter III!

Chapter III : The Search Begins

In the dark and dirty halls of the Dark Hunter guild, Hanharr sat on a throne. He appeared to be on a bad mood, and was not to be disturbed.

“Uh, master?” A lowly Dark Hunter servant told Hanharr. He got up and grabbed him by his throat.

“What is it?” He roared in his native language of Shyriiwook.

The servant gurgled, “The Dark Jedi is here to see you.”

Hanharr growled and threw the servant against the wall beside, killing him. The doors opened and the heads and limbs of the guards rolled into the Throne Room before a dark cloaked and robed figure walked in, the noise of the steps heard everywhere.

“Such anger and violence,” He said, noticing the dead servant, “You did not need to do that, for it was unnecessary. He might had also been useful”

“Save me those stupid manipulative Sith morals. Besides you've killed my guards as well." He said.

"They denied me entrance. It was needed."

"Whatever, I’ve had enough of the old woman and her betrayals a year ago. What is It that you need, for you’re wasting my time,” He growled.

The man’s grin could be seen across the dark room, “Sources tell me that your rivals have that great soldier named Jake escorting two…Jedi Padawans. Sources also tell me that they’re going to sneak up here, get the datapad, and the holocron I gave you, and put in fake ones.”

“Leave now!” He roared, “I’ll have my top man taking care of them.”

“You, are a fool. Perhaps I should tell that new Jedi Master, oh, what’s her name…oh yes, Mira.”

Hanharr roared out loud, and it could be heard in almost all over the base.

“Find them, kill them, mutilate them, put them in a bag and give it to Mira. Then kill her,” He growled, sitting in his throne again.

“With pleasure,” The Dark Jedi said, as the red blade of his Lightsaber ignited and lit up the room. He then de-activated it, and left the room.

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“So, where exactly are you taking us? We’ve been wandering for hours now,” I told Pottsie.

“A hour and a half precisely,” He corrected me, “Besides, it wouldn’t be much of a secret if it was just besides our base, now wouldn’t it?”

“He’s got a point Jason, it’s probably hidden seven feet under,” Cameron told me.

“Correction. It’s going to BE seven feet under,” Pottsie corrected her, “We secretly put a permacrete detonator in there that no-one noticed. When we have the datapad, and you guys have your holocron, we’re going to blow it up.”

“Wait a minute, there’s a catch here. If you put in there the permacrete detonator, how come you don’t know where the base is?” I asked him.

“Pretty simple actually. We lost connection with our spy midway. He’s probably dead right now, but we knew the detonator was in and secret, since the lectures of it’s materials here in Coruscant where of the chart. And since it was made of products that don’t get on Coruscant, not even on the black market, it was easy to know.” Pottsie told us.

“Pretty smart,” Cameron congratulated them.

“Well, I wouldn’t be Rayarn’s right hand if I wasn’t a great tactical leader. Now, let’s continue our trip.”

We continued flying on the air speeder, but suddenly, many blaster bolts flew at our side.

“What the heck?” He shouted, looking at the flying shooters, “Kriffin’ hell, tighten your seatbelts!”

I carefully opened my window, got out my blaster pistol and shot repeatedly at their speeder, I missed some shots since I wasn’t very skilled, but luck, or the Force was with me, and with one shot on a sensitive spot, I shot them down. Their speeder was crashing full speed at the ground. I got up and put his feet at the window.

“Hey, where the heck are you going?” Pottsie, asked, but I jumped at the full speed onto the ground.

“I hate it when he does that,” Cameron said, obviously noticing my leap of faith, “Follow him!”

Pottsie took a sharp turn diagonally and down, following me. I was falling, and eventually fell onto their speeder. They were knocked unconscious, but I grabbed them, and jumped with the Force as their speeder crashed on the ground and blew up. We landed roughly, followed by Pottsie and Cameron.

“Alright scum, tell me, where is the Dark Hunter’s Headquarters?” I yelled to a Nikto. But before he could say something, he was shot repeatedly on the chest as it blew up. We looked up, seeing a possible Bounty Hunter, donned in a black full-body suit covered by dark grey armour, and a cloak concealing his face. He quickly turned around and jumped. Looked like we had a new target.

I then turned my attention again to the dead Nikto. I noticed a card, just like a few hours ago. I took it and inspected it.

“Well, Cameron, Pottsie, looks like we’ve got ourselves a direction to the base,” I said, showing them the card.

“I don’t see anything,” Pottsie observed.

“We see it through the Force Pottsie, to see it without it, one would need to carefully rip the card apart, and then see the map inside it,” Cameron said.

“Well, we’re just wasting valuable time. Let’s get going,” I said.

We all entered the speeder, lifted to the air and blasted off in the base’s direction.

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Well, whadda ya' think?

Good Chapter, which is slightly short, but no matter. Also I doubt Hanharr would know Kreia's Sith title. If I remember TSL correctly, he always called her old woman. I'm looking foward to more.

Hmm, you're right. Edity edity!

Nice Chapters. Same as Pott's opinion.

Thanks for the comments. Here's a pic of Jason's robe without the cloak: Here (http://swg.allakhazam.com/images/schematics/screenShot22108.jpg). I'd have a Cameron one if PCGM wasn't down again...

Also, just for all ya' "The Adventures of Jaden Lennon" RP and Fic, both Amber Skye and Ewan Kenobi will star on it, except Ewan will have a different surname. They will also have a new companion to them.

Nice to know Jason. I wonder who this new companion will be. Nice robe too. I like the Prequel style robes.

Wow, who would know i would get such a fast reply?

"Who else than Pottsie? It's Pottsie, it's Pottsie!"

Family Guy quote changed :xp: Anyways, i'm writing the fourth chapter.

But it's awfully similiar to AOTC the movie...Like the changelin was killed by Jango Fett on Coruscant.

Ha, you mean the Nikto guy being shot repeatdly?

It's the Dark Jedi from back the throne, he was just concealing himself.

Ha, you mean the Nikto guy being shot repeatdly?

It's the Dark Jedi from back the throne, he was just concealing himself.

Yeah, Nikto guy was shot, but only difference is that changelin was shot by a dart, not a bullet.

Chapter IV : The Soul of a Hero

The airspeeder landed right in the front of an abandoned warehouse on the Coruscant Market District. We got outside of it, and Pottsie opened the door of the warehouse. Luckily, nobody noticed, since they were off busy minding their own businesses. There were many crates, but no people. It was empty of humans. Pottsie walked up to a wall, and put his hand over it, waving around, until he finally pushed his hand deeper into it and a door-sized part of the wall opened, an they made their way in. The halls of the base were dark and wet, and two guards stood in ouy way.

“Hey, what the, you can’t be in…” One of them said before both being Force Pushed to the ground below by me.

Out of nowhere came two guards from each corridors to the right and left. They were 4 in total, and were armed with Heavy Repeater Rifles, which were fast and deadly. Me and Pottsie took cover behind opposite walls and gave Cameron cover shots, who had rushed to them with her Vibrosword, also deflecting shots for her Soresu style training. She crouched, spun around, tripped the guard with her leg, and slashed at his chest-plate. He screamed in pain, and fell to the ground. I shot one right in the head, making him jump behind, and Pottsie threw a Vibrodagger at the other one, killing him instantly. I then used the Force to enhance my speed, ran at the remaining one, jumped and spun around, kicked him in the face, and then Force Bolted the dizzy guard to the wall. We continued our way through the base, the Dark Hunters offering little to none resistance. Either we were too strong, they were too weak, or the most probably, it was a trap. We then noticed the mutilated bodies of dead guards. We reached a door, and there it was, the Wookie known as Hanharr, donned in a cortosis armour, sitting in his throne.

“I knew you’d come,” He growled, “You Jedi are too predictable. Although, I had my doubts about the one who accompanies you.”

“Hanharr, right?” I asked, “Jason Kenobi, Jedi Padawan, Master Mira sends her regards.”

The Wookie roared, got out of his seat immediately and took out his twin Ryyk Blades, ready for action. The walls burst and dozens of members jumped of them. Behind them then appeared the mysterious dark grey - armoured man. He pulled down his hood, revealing his face. It was very much “handsome” for a Dark Jedi like him.

“Fools,” He said, the ruby blade of his Lightsaber igniting, “You will be the first idiot Jedi’s to feel the true power of the True Sith!”

“Jason, Cameron,” Pottsie told us, taking out two silvery rods from a hidden pocket and threw them at us. Our Lightsabers. We ignited them, and the amethyst and sapphire blades came out, ready for battle. Suddenly, another blast was heard, and many of the Tracking Bothan members came out behind us, heavily armed with blaster rifles and armoured, also in cortosis armour. Blaster bolts where suddenly heard and seen through all over the room, and Hanharr’s throne went down, revealing a secret passage. The crazed Wookie rushed at Pottsie with his Ryyk Blades, but the battle veteran quickly took out his Echani Vibrosword and parried the blow, as the two exchanged more blows.

Me and Cameron were simply staring at the Dark Jedi, our Lightsabers ignited.

“Strange. I thought Sith and Dark Jedi were about extinct.” Cameron said.

“You were right missy. They’re about extinct, but the True Sith are not.”

“Who’re you anyway? Some idiot who thinks he’s a Sith?”

“I, am Darth Feros, minion of the Masters, and you are Jedi, soon to be deceased!” He roared, running at us. We immediately entered into a Ataru and Soresu stance.

He charged with his Lightsaber, but we blocked and pushed it up. He spun around, in an attempt to get us off-guard, but was of no use, for we parried the blows, and his blade flew upwards as a it clashed strong with mine. I tried to stab him, but he dodged to his left, and Cameron behind him, tried to slash him from above, but he simply and quickly jumped his Lightsaber backwards to block the blow. He then brought his lightsaber up, and the end of his Lightsaber, hidden by the darkness, revealed another ruby blade. We duelled for some more time, mostly his staffsaber blocking our blows. I then jumped and slashed to him, who was under me, while Cameron tried to stab him. He quickly blocked both blows, and I landed behind him. We then crossed sabers as I turned around, and me and Cameron swung downwards, and where clashing in a saber lock. After a few seconds of strength, Feros kicked me in the gut, and Force Pushed me back, and Force Choked Cameron for a while, before Pottsie, who had got ridden of Hanharr while other members dealt with him, shot at him repeatedly, but he Force Pushed her as well onto the ground, and deflected the blaster bolts. Pottsie then ran at him, and clashed his Echani Vibrosword with Feros’ Staffsaber. They duelled, with Pottsie gaining the advantage and upper hand with the most offense while Feros simply laughed out loud and blocked the blows. Pottsie kicked him in the gut, and was swinging upwards when Feros pulled his Staffsaber apart into two Lightsabers, thrust the hilt of one to Pottsie’s face, spun around, and stabbed him with his other Lightsaber, in backhand.

“NOOO!!!!” I shouted out, seeing Pottsie’s apparent death.

But he wasn’t dead, not yet. Blood spit out of his mouth, and he smiled as Feros looked confused.

“If I’m going down, you’re going with me,” He gasped, slashing Feros from waist down with his Vibrosword. Feros fell to the ground, dead, and Pottsie fell slowly, also dead. Hanharr, who had killed the ones who where dealing with him, seeing this, laughed out loud. I was angry, but couldn’t let it flow through me, but it did. I immediately got up, ignited my Lightsaber and charged at Hanharr. I swung powerful blows, and all Hanharr could do was block them with his Ryyk Blades, who apparently, had a cortosis weave. Hanharr struggled a lot in an attempt to push me backwards, but I gave a side-ways swing that sliced his hand off his arm. The Wookiee roared in pain, and to add insult to injury, I sliced his chest plate in half, out of it coming out the datapad. The Wookiee quickly ran at the halved Sith Warrior, picked him up and ran. At that time, the Tracking Bothans had won, but the cost was dear, since Pottsie was fatally injured. I turned my attention to Pottsie, who was being aided by Cameron. I ran at him, and crouched to one knee only.

“No, don’t go Pottsie!” I shouted.

“It’s…it’s okay…I was expecting this…for a long time now…Good Luck…and May The Force Be With You.” Those where is dying breaths.

“May the Force be with you forever, Pottsie,” I said in unison with Cameron as a tear burst out of our eyes. I cleaned mine, and picked him up. A member came up to us and gave us the holocron. We got out of the base quickly with every single surviving member, and then detonated the bomb, as the base was buried seven feet under as tears flew by the wind of Coruscant.

He was taken onto the Jedi Tower, where the Jedi Council, me, Cameron, T3, who was now reunited with us, Rayarn and some members of the Tracking Bothans. He was cremated, like any Jedi is when he dies. Hopefully, he would be one with the Force.

For he died with the soul of a hero.

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"So Cold" by Breaking Benjamin would be an interesting theme for this chapter.

Damn, I'm dead. Pottsie seems to remind me of Canderous in many ways, but he died in a glorious battle. Well done. I hope he returns as a Force Ghost, but I doubt that will happen. Good Chapter by the way. I'm looking foward to the next Chapter.

Damn, you reply fast. :lol: Thanks. Now, finally, they will leave Coruscant. But won't reach any planet until about Chapters VI/VII. :xp:

Well, i've got a sorta-kinda robe like Cameron's.

Here (http://www.x-treme-gaming.com/%7Escolirk/Robes/screenShot0942.jpg)

Only difference is that she has green boots, the robe is slightly lighter and the cloak, well, that's not difficult, now is it? ;)

Well, school's starting to interfere more, i'll see if i can get a chapter this weekend.

Well, school's starting to interfere more, i'll see if i can get a chapter this weekend.

I know how you feel Jason...

Well, toda yi'm going to the movies, and the chapter is going to be quite long i believe, but i guess i can have it done today at night or tomorrow.

Well, toda yi'm going to the movies, and the chapter is going to be quite long i believe, but i guess i can have it done today at night or tomorrow.

:lol: Today at night = Tonight

I'm looking foward to it. Also, a bit off-topic, but what movie did you see? Perhaps it gave you some inspiration for your Fic?

Yeah, you're right. :lol:

Hmm, perhaps. It was Alex Rider : Operation Stormbreaker.

Stay on topic and avoid the spammy posts, please, folks. ;) --Jae

K, so, sorry Jae, but, also, we have a new banner, made by Sabretooth, all credits go to him. Now, while on school, i fell, and made a wound, i already got some stiches though. I think that now maybe i'll have more time to write though.