NOTE: I may not continue this. This is just an experiment.
Knights of the Old Republic: Revan's Second, Redeemed
The life of the galaxy once again hangs in the balance. The
Republic, devastated by years of battle against the Mandalorians
and the Sith Lords Revan and Malak, teeters upon the brink of
collapse. The Jedi Order, once thousands strong, now boasts
fewer than one hundred Knights. Under cryptic orders from a Lord
hidden in shadow, the Sith are exterminating the Jedi who remain.
An exile from the Order, lost to the galaxy for five years since
the end of the Mandalorian Wars, clings to life near the mining
colony of Peragus...
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A warm wetness embraced me. Cradled me like the fluid in my
mother's womb. I felt safe there, asleep and enfolded in gentle
darkness. It was no surprise that when the voice spoke to me,
I jumped like a frightened gizka. I always was scared of loud
noises, or soft ones that disturbed my sleep. All it said was:
"Awaken." A whisper on the ede of hearing, yet it startled me!
With my eyes still closed, I struggled against the warm fluid.
Had I been asleep for a thousand years? It was so hard...
Soon I lay on the cold metal floor of whatever place I was in,
so weak, flat on my stomach. I saw surveillance monitors flicker
into life in a wide circle around my body, from the corner of my eye.
Where was I? After struggling for a while, I found the strength to stand.
Kolto tanks around me burbled, and computer monitors beeped.
Medical facility of some sort, I thought. But where are
all the doctors, and the medical droids? I started to explore
the building, cold and wet as I was. And wearing only my khaki
civilian-issue mesh bodysuit. Darn kolto tanks. No privacy there!
I liked it, i do hope you continue this ... Well done. :D
Short but sweet. I suppose Revan's second is the Exile. I'm looking foward to it. Keep it up.
Short but sweet. I suppose Revan's second is the Exile. I'm looking foward to it. Keep it up.
Quoted for emphasis. Hope we see more!
Look like it's exactly line Exile. But however good chapter. Keep it up.
NOTE: I may not continue this. This is just an experiment.
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That's why I stopped to publish incomplete stories. *gg* But it is quite good, I hope you go on with that!
Not much of a chapter, but please continue. Someday, it might by chance end up better than the actual game. I just hope it doesn't end up being crappy like A Farewell to Arms.
Not much of a chapter, but please continue. Someday, it might by chance end up better than the actual game. I just hope it doesn't end up being crappy like A Farewell to Arms.
Is that a Fic?
A Farewell to Arms is a crappy World War I novel by Ernest Hemingway. You not missing anything.