sweet,looking forward to chapter 8
Gud Chapter
p.s how do you put a little message at the bottom of ur replys or posts anyone?
Good chapter,was expecting Leia as a Jedi Sentinel.
how do you put a little message at the bottom of ur replys or posts anyone?
I think you're talking about a Signature. When you're signed in, click on Quick Links in the top right hand corner. It will bring a list down. One will be Edit Signature. Do what you want from there and then press Finish Signature.
"Miss Padme?"
"Yes Captain Antilles?"
"We have recieved a transmission from an imperial transport craft, on the scanners it has no escort."
"The prisoners on the Death Star have escaped" said Padme with glee, "Let them land, let them land."
Padme ran to the imperial transport to welcome her men home. "Welcome home, I was beginning to worry."
"Well, we made it just fine." said a Jedi who was also being kept prisoner, "When we escaped, we found the plans of the use of that battle station."
"Where are they?" asked Padme.
"I have them right here." told the Jedi giving a data disc to her.
Padme made her way to the computer and inserted the disc, it read: "With this battle station we will crush the alliance in one blow, once we find the planet they are cowering on, we will fire our super-lazer upon them so no one can appose Lord Vader." Padme turned off the computer and took out the data disc. "We cannot forward the plans to Coruscant from here..." explained Padme.
"Then I suggest that we bring them to Coruscant." suggested Bastila who was there with them.
"The idea is good but I don't know who to send to escort them." told Padme.
"Padme, can I speak to you in private?" asked Bastila.
"Okay."
Padme and Bastila left the room.
"I suggest that you send Luke and Leia to escort them." suggested Bastila.
"What?!"
"Darth Vader doesn't even know he has children, it could work to our advantage." told Bastila.
"Then we'll have to make a transmission to Coruscant when we get in range, I don't want to risk their lives, they're all I have left of Anakin." told Padme.
"I understand, and that is a reasonable change. answered Bastila.
Padme went outside and found Leia. "Hi Leia, what are you doing?" asked Padme.
"Watching Luke and Wedge fly around in their X-Wings." answered Leia.
Padme went to the hangar to call her son down and they met with Leia in the courtyard. "Kids..."
"Yes?" asked Luke.
"I think it would be a good idea if you transmit a message to Coruscant for the Rebellion."
"Yes." both the kids whispered.
"I need you to fly into space so you can make a transmission to Coruscant about the Death Star plans, you do that, and the Rebellion will make a large step in liberating the galaxy from evil." explained Padme.
"We'll do it mother." answered Luke.
"Good... for your own safety, I'll be sending a large force with you on a Corellian Corvette."
"Don't worry mother, we'll have Vader out of office faster than his head will spin." told Leia.
"Okay kids."
Padme brought them to the Tantive IV. "Good luck." told Padme.
"Don't worry mother." replied Luke.
"I'm not going to like this at all, I hate flying." said a golden droid.
"Beep beep *whistle* (You Mynock)"
"Switch off"
"*Whistle* *farting sound* beep (Aww **** off)"
"Watch your speech"
After a long journey, The Tantive IV was almost in transmission range but, the were being chased by the Executor, which blew off the transmission dish. The Executor caught up to the Tantive IV and started pulling it into the hangar via tracktor beam. Troops immediatly ran over to the airlock to prepare for imperial boarding. The Skywalkers ran over to help but Captain Antilles told them to get down to the nearby planet. Sparks started to fly at the airlock then suddenly the door blew open and blasters started blazing. Luke and Leia ran immediatly to the escape pods, droids C-3PO and R2-D2 followed.
"Okay, you and the droids first." told Leia rather paranoid. She looked down the other end of the hall and began to sense trooper prescense very close.
"LEIA COME ON!" yelled Luke.
Leia just shut the door and locked it.
"NO- NOO!"
"Master Luke hurry." told 3PO.
Luke and the droids followed the hallway to the nearest escape pod and launched.
"There's one!" said a Storm Trooper noticing Leia, "Set for stun!"
Leia picked up a gun and shot a trooper and made a run for it, but another trooper stunned her.
On the escape pod, Luke hung his head and looked as if he was about to cry. He felt horrible knowing that he's safe heading for the planet below, and his sister about to face the wrath of Anakin.
Back onboard the Tantive IV, one Storm Trooper met Lord Vader who was interrogating Captain Antilles. "The Death Star plans are not in the main computer." told the troooper.
"Where have you been sending transmissions? What have you done with those plans?!" asked Anakin.
"We never made any transmissions... we're on a diplomatic mission."
Captain Antilles died and was thrown down.
"Tear this ship apart, and bring me the passengers, I WANT THEM ALIVE!" roared Anakin.
Stay tuned for my next chapter
Good Chapter. Nice to see 3P0 and R2 again.
good work, revanscool, i always wanted luke to be a guardian:D
Good chapter again.Also,a Corvette?Lol.And how much lenght do your chapters have?2 pages?3?
Good chapter again.Also,a Corvette?Lol.And how much lenght do your chapters have?2 pages?3?
The Tantive IV is a Corellian Corvette, I know that my chapters are definately not as long as Pottsie's when he was writing his Jaden/Malus fic
I'm sorry for the delay on my fic everyone, but I was grounded, I'm now working on it.
(It's finally here W00T!!!)
Leia was taken prisoner by Imperial Stormtroopers and taken to Anakin knowing nothing of who he used to be.
"Emperor Vader, why am I not surprised...? The Imperial Senate will not sit still for this!" she told.
"Where are those transmissions you made?" Anakin asked.
"I don't know what you're talking about... I am a member of the Imperial Senate returning home from a diplomatic mission." Leia bluffed.
"YOU ARE A JEDI, PART OF THE REBEL ALLIANCE AND A TRAITOR!" Anakin yelled not calling it, "TAKE HER AWAY!"
Anakin's apprentice Darth Moordenaar walked up and began to tell him about the some escape pods that escaped the heat of the battle.
"Send a detachment down to the planet below and send a distress signal and tell them all the crew were killed."
"Yes master" replied Lord Moordenaar, she bowed and took her leave.
Down on the planet below, Luke and the droids were travelling the desert and were tired as hell.
"I sense we're getting close to a house." Luke told the droids, "Don't worry we'll be safe."
"This desert is hell." told 3PO, "It seems like we're made to suffer."
"Beep whistle beep beep (aww shut your voice box you walking junkpile)" told R2.
3PO didn't answer.
Luke scanned the area and noticed a moisture farm, "There's some shelter." yelled Luke excited. Luke and the droids bolted to the moisture farm and Luke knocked on the door. The door opened. The man who opened the door noticed the rough state they were in and invited them in.
"Get lost in that desert and it's hell to pay." told the man.
"Thank you for offering us shelter." told Luke.
"Owen Lars." said the man introducing himself offering a handshake.
"Luke Skywalker." replied Luke accepting the handshake.
"Sorry, I didn't catch that, what's your name again son?" asked Owen.
"Luke Skywalker." Luke replied.
"... Skywalker? Shmi Skywalker, my stepmom."
"You must know my father then! Who is he?" asked Luke very quickly.
"He was my stepbrother, Anakin..." answered Owen.
"Then you're my uncle." told Luke.
"Whistle whistle (awwww what a great family reunion)" told R2.
"Watch your mouth, you rude little twirp."
"My father was a Jedi wasn't he?" asked Luke.
"A great one." Owen answered, "He was the most powerful of them all, he had many friends, his closest were: Obi-Wan Kenobi, and Darth Vader, when Anakin and Vader entered the order, they were trained by Obi-Wan. They were both arrogant and both wanted to learn more. After the Clone War, Vader was seduced by former Emperor Palpatine with promises of ultimate power, Vader then killed all the Jedi, even your father, then when he killed their mentor he killed his new master and took his place as Dark Lord of the Sith and Emperor of the Galaxy." explained Owen, "Word of these events travel fast."
Luke got angrier by the minute, he clenched his fist and it began to crack.
"I'm sorry." apologized Owen.
"It's better that I know the full truth." forgave Luke, "My mother only told me he was killed after the war, now I know who to look for, why didn't Bastila tell me?"
"Beep whoop whistle (aww, poor baby.)" R2 insulted.
Luke ignored him.
"Owen, I need to leave this planet to rescue my sister from that murderer, can you help me?" asked Luke.
"I can only get you to Mos Eisley Spaceport and lend you some credits to pay for a ride." Owen answered.
"I appreciate that, thank you."
"First get some rest, and I'll give your droids an oil bath." told Owen.
"Thanks."
Sweet no better then sweet too good to post how good it is
Good one.Funny as how R2 is such a bastard.
Good Chapter, never knew how insulting R2 could be.
R2 deserves to be pwned by luke :D. mecahnical SOB :xp:
anyway, good chapter.
Luke should dismantle R2 for that,lol.
wonder when next chap is
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"You can borrow my landspeeder to get to Mos Eisley" offered Owen, "But then you'll have to hire someone to help find your sister."
"Thank you, I appreciate that." told Luke.
"Beep whistle whistle (YESSS! We can leave this hell hole)" whistled R2 in glee.
"What's that little bucket saying?" asked Owen.
"*Farting sound* beep whistle (Don't make me bust some lightning on your ass, old man!)" warned R2 thinking Owen was insulting him.
"You don't want to know." told Luke, "I should dismantle him soon for all the insults." told Luke.
"*Farting sound* (F**K)" wailed R2.
Do it, do it! 3PO thought to himself.
"But he might be useful." told Luke.
"Whistle (awww Padme thank you)"
"We've got to go." told Luke, "Thank you for your hospitality."
"Find your sister!" ordered Owen.
"I'll do that!" replied Luke.
Luke drove Owen's landspeeder to Mos Eisley Spaceport in search for a pilot who would be daring enough to help him. He searched the cantinas until he found a Wookie who told him that he knew someone. The Wookie led Luke to an empty table and asked him to sit. Seconds later he was met by a scruffy looking man. "Han Solo, I'm captian of the Millennium Falcon." boasted the man.
"I'm Luke Skywalker, I am a new Jedi in search for my sister." replied Luke.
"A Jedi, eh? Where were you planning on searching?" asked Han.
"Every Imperial Vessel until I find her!" answered Luke.
"Whoa whoa whoa, that commited huh? The cost will be big, are you sure you have enough money to pay that kind of flying kid?" Han asked.
"My mother was the former senator of Naboo, and she is now the leader of the Galactic Rebellion, once you help me rescue my sister, my mother will pay you handsomely." explained Luke.
"Wow kid, you've got yourself a deal." replied Han cheerfully, "We leave this rock as soon as we can. You look beaten, help yourself to a drink before we go."
Luke walked to the bar and asked for a Tarisian Ale, he was drinking when he was inturrupted by an Anqilish then a man witha flat face. "He doesn't like you." told the man.
"Sorry." replied Luke.
"I don't like you either, we're wanted people, we don't want you telling anything about us." ordered the man.
"I'll be careful." told Luke.
"YOU'LL BE DEAD" roared the man.
"This little one is not worth your trouble, let me buy you a drink." told a familiar woman. The man pushed the woman out of the way and attacked Luke, Luke raised his blue saber and killed the man. "Bastila, what are you doing here?" asked Luke.
"Guiding you... I see you have us some transportation, good good." congratulated Bastila.
Han Solo tried to make his way back to Luke to tell him that he's ready, but he was intercepted by a Rodian, "Going somewhere, Solo?" the Rodian asked.
"Greedo, tell Jabba that I have the money now, I just need a bit more time" told Han reaching for his blaster.
"It's too late, you're too late." replied Greedo.
"Don't do it." ordered Han.
Greedo took a shot but missed, Han took a shot and gave him another eye socket, he tipped his server and got Luke ready. "Who's your new friend?" Han asked.
"Bastila Shan." Luke replied.
"One extra eh?" asked Han.
"Yes." replied Bastila.
Han led Luke, Bastila and the droids to the Millennium Falcon and invited them aboard, "Enjoy your trip" said Han.
"I don't sense any deception from him, which is good." told Bastila.
The Falcon took off.
Stay tuned for my next "explosive" chapter.
Good Chapter Revanscool. It still feels the same as ANH, but with some things different.
Good Chapter Revanscool. It still feels the same as ANH, but with some things different.
Ditto.
"If you want your brother to survive, then name the system!" demanded Moorenaar.
Leia started crying "Yavin IV" she sobbed. "All on Yavin IV."
"Do it." ordered Anakin.
"WHAT?!" screamed Leia.
"From here, my lady, Yavin IV is very remote." replied Anakin, "But do not fret, your Rebel friends will perish soon enough."
"No please! Don't kill my brother." Leia begged.
"Why? So he can board the ship and rescue you? I cannot allow that." answered Anakin.
"No." sobbed Leia.
"Don't test my patience!" demanded Anakin, "You will join him one with the Force soon enough."
Leia sniffed, thinking her brother was going to die and knowing she couldn't do anything about it. A green laser shot at the barren planet, it then exploded, just as Anakin did to Geonosis. Leia only stared into space letting her tears run down her face. Leia turned around and tried to use Force Pull to grab one of Anakin's sabers, while she was pulling the saber, Anakin grabbed it saying "I am the Dark Lord of the Sith. I am not a moron, you imbecile!" Anakin then turned to his apprentice and ordered her to take Leia to the detention centre on level 5.
Lord Moordenaar took Leia into her cell but then she heard her master talk to her through the Force "Punish her, for trying to put up a fight at the observation level." he ordered. Moordenaar started beating Leia and using the Force to torture her until she passed out.
Aboard the Millennium Falcon, Luke got increasingly angry, feeling his sister's pain.
"Luke, there is no chaos." said Bastila reciting the Jedi Code to calm Luke down.
Luke took a deep breath and followed "There is harmony." he completed.
Han Solo noticed the Death Star "What in the hell is that?" he asked himself. Luke and Bastila walked into the room and also noticed the Death Star. "Do you want to start there, kid?" asked Han.
"Yeah." answered Luke.
The Millennium Falcon began to rumble and steadily started flying toward the Death Star.
"Faster!" demanded Luke.
"Shut the hell up kid, there isn't a damn thing I can do, they've caught us in a tractor beam." snapped Han.
"Then we must wait." told Bastila.
Chewie roared. The Millenium Falcon moved slowly and steadily towards the Death Star, and her crew awaited the landing.
Good Chapter, again with several changes.
well RC wanted to see another planet blown, fortunately for him, Tatooine was my plan.
announcement to my readers: I am currently working on my fanfic, It's hard to with my summer job in all,
I am currently nearing the ending chapters of the fanfic, I will be creating a sequal.
but I won't be doing it right away
because I want to do one on KotOR
To mods: If you think this is bumping, I'm sorry.
"Get into these compartments, people." Ordered Han, "We can hide here." Everyone hid into the compartments of the Millenuim Falcon. They heard the footsteps of the Imperial Troops, until it stopped. "The ship's all yours gentlement." Some Imperial workers brought some equipment on the ship but fell flat on the ground, to Luke and Bastila's sabers. "Hey down there." yelled Han, "Could you give us a hand?" he asked. The Storm Troopers that were previously on the ship walked back up the loading ramp answering his call, but they fell dead to Han's blaster. "TK-421, what's your status?" asked an officer, "TK-421, do you copy?" A Storm Trooper walked out of the loading ramp and tapped his helmet. "Can I get assistance down here? We've got a blown speaker." The man opened the door and there stood Chewie, who quickly killed him.
"I must go and disable the tractor beam, so we can leave. I will go alone." told Bastila.
"I want to go with you." said Luke.
"An- err... Vader is too much for you, you will fight very bravely but die very quickly, to avenge for the crimes he has commited." explained Bastila.
"Okay" Luke obeyed. Bastila closed the door behind her.
"I don't want to wait here to be captured, I want back to my ship." complained Han.
"BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP (HEY ASSWIPES, I'VE FOUND HER)" beeped R2.
"He's saying that he has found Leia." explained 3PO.
"Where is she?" asked Luke.
"Beep whistle *farting sound* beep whistle (Level 5, in the detention centre numbnuts, where else?)"
"We got to go find her" ordered Luke.
"Count me out." complained Han.
"At first you didn't want to wait to be captured, but now all you want to do is stay?" asked Luke.
"Walking into the detention area is not what I had in mind." told Han.
"They're gonna do something to my sister." complained Luke.
"Better her, than me"
"Remember our agreement? You walk out now, you get no money." threatened Luke.
"Damnit, fine." obeyed Han.
"I need you to put some cuffs on Chewie here."
Han walked over to Chewie with some handcuffs, "Don't worry Chewie, I think I know what he has in mind."
Luke, Han and Chewie made their way to the detention centre to rescue Leia. But they weren't welcomed gladly with Chewie. "I was not aware of this transfer, I'm going to confirm it." told the officer. Luke ignited his saber and started killing the men. When he killed the last one, he took his sister's saber from his belt. The Alarm had already gone off and Han was the first one there. "What's your situation up there?" asked an officer.
"Uhh... everything's fine situation normal, we're fine, we're all fine... How are you?" asked Han.
"We're sending a squad up." told the officer.
"Uhh... negative, negative, we have a large reactor leak, very dangerous, give us some time to surpress it." told Han.
"Who is this? What's your operating number?" asked the officer. Han grabbed a gun but didn't shoot when he heard Luke say: "Make something up."
"Uhh... 925-026-7153." told Han.
"We'll leave you to the reactor leak." told the officer.
Luke made his way to Leia's cell where Luke was happy to sense her alive. Luke opened the door. "Aren't you a little short for a Stormtrooper?" asked Leia.
"Damn straight." told Luke as he removed his helmet.
"LUKE! I thought you were dead." said Leia in glee as she ran to hug him.
"The new Jedi won't die so easy, here's your weapon." replied Luke as he gave his sister her yellow blade. Luke and Leia met Han in the hallway, "Wha'd you say?" asked Luke.
"They think we're a clean up crew." replied Han.
"Good, now we have to find a way to get out of here." told Leia.
"Hello, gorgeous... I'm Han Solo." said Han, introducing himself to Leia.
"And I am Leia." replied Leia with a smile on her face.
"Leia, I am going to put these cuffs on you so it makes it look like we are doing a prisoner transfer." explained Luke.
"Okay, where to now?" asked Leia as Luke cuffed her.
"To his ship." replied Luke "We have to meet with Bastila."
"That's good news." replied Leia.
Luke and the others walked the Death Star trying to get back to the hangar, Bastila trying to dis-engage the tractorbeam, with Anakin looking for them all. Bastila found a power room and shimmied over to the controls. She lowered the power and disabled the tractorbeam. Then started making her way to the Millenium Falcon. Everyone eventually were reunited in the hangaer. "Bastila, well aren't you a sight for sore eyes." told Leia.
"It is good to see you too Leia." replied Bastila.
"We have to get back on the ship" complained Han.
"Quit complaining, leave that to the Jedi." told Luke. Luke, Leia and Bastila ignited their sabers and started killing the Stormtroopers one by one until there were none left. Everyone made their way on the ship and Chewie got the engines fired up while Han and Luke took the turbo lazers to make sure no one would get on board. Anakin Skywalker himself tried to get on board, but the loading ramp closed before he could try. The Falcon took off with no worry of a tractor beam.
Unfortunately they were followed by a number of Tie-Fighters. Han and Luke got back on the turbo lazers, guns blazing. They killed off all the fighters until there were none left, and minimal damage was taken.
Stay tuned for my final chaper!
darnt i though bastila was going to be killied by vader istead of obi wan since obi1 is dead anyway sweet chap
I want her to be in the sequal
I can't wait for the last Chapter. Let it be a long duel between Bastila and Vader, with Vader trying to bribe Bastila to the Dark Side.
Good chapter Revanscool. You should really make Luke dismantle R2. :p
You should really make Luke dismantle R2. :p
Oh, he'll get screwd one way or another!
"Will you fight for us?" asked Leia.
"For you? Of course!" replied Han.
"Good, thank you so much." thanked Leia in glee. She stood up to leave the cockpit to meet Bastila and Luke, but before she left she kissed Han on the cheek. "Your welcome!" Han said to himself. Leia walked to the guest's quarters to Bastila being interrogated by Luke. "Did Vader kill my father?" Leia heard Luke ask. Leia gasped. "Yes Luke, I'm sorry to sat that he did." answered Bastila.
"Don't be sorry for telling me now, why didn't you tell me earlier?" Luke asked.
"Then your mind would be so concentrated on revenge, you would fall to the Dark Side." Bastila answered.
"I understand, master." said Luke with a sigh.
"I'm sorry." said Bastila. Leia began to weep, she ran to her room and started bawling. "We're coming up on Yavin IV" told Han. Luke and Leia ran to the loading ramp to meet their mother. The loading ramp lowered and Padme was waiting there. "MOM" both Luke and Leia roared, running to give her a hug.
"Luke, Leia." replied Padme.
"We missed you so much." told Luke.
"Same here, kids."
Han walked from the loading ramp to take a stretch. "Mom, this is Han Solo, he help us get here." explained Leia.
"How'dyo do?" asked Han.
"Very fine, thank you for getting them here safe." replied Padme.
"Mom, they know that we're here." explained Leia.
"Excuse me?"
"The Sith have their ways."
"Then we must prepare. And Bastila, Luke, Leia? Can I see you for a moment in the hangar?" asked Padme. Bastila and the twins followed Padme into the hagnar. "Our smugglers have stolen these." announced Padme as she revealed three Jedi Starfighters.
"These are Starfighters from the Old Republic, aren't they?" asked Luke.
"Yes, you'll need them." replied Padme.
Hours later everyone was prepared for a space battle, so were the Sith. "I want there master! I want her battle meditation, I-want-her here." ordered Vader "Is the tractorbeam back online?"
"Sir, yes sir."
"Good."
Back on Yavin IV, Padme was trying to inspire her army with hope. "There were many one sided wars in the period of the Republic... But this is your time and you will win, believe in yourselves." yelled Padme. The army cheered, her speech was a success. Everyone launced to space to meet the Sith at the Death Star. "Is everyone there?" asked Padme.
"Gold squadron, standing by."
"Red squadron, standing by."
"Blue squadron, standing by."
"Viridian squadron, standing by."
"Violet squadron, standing by."
"Rogue squadron, standing by." said Wedge.
"Good to have you with us, Wedge." said Luke.
"Orange squadron, standing by."
"White squadron, standing by."
"Green squadron, standing by."
"Jedi squadron, standing by." said Bastila.
"Millenium Falcon, standing by." said Han.
"Lock S-foils in attack position." ordered Bastila as they approached the Death Star.
"Look at the size of that thing." Wedge pointed out.
"Viridian squadron, bomb the turbo lazers." ordered Bastila. A group of Y-Wings made an attack run on the turbo lazers, taking them out one by one. "I can use my concussion missles to help out" suggested Han.
"That would be appreciated." answered Bastila. Han fired some concussion missles that took out the turbo lazers very quickly, until he was out. Luke fired at random places on the battle station causing him blocking off major hallways. "Sir, the attack force is taking out our turbo lazers one by one sir."
"Then we will destroy them ship to ship, Moordenaar, you take the generals to test out the new fighters."
"Yes Master" obeyed Moordenaar.
Bastila flew past the hangar to take out the turbo lazers there, but she ended up getting sucked in. "Leia we have to save Bastila." told Luke.
"My pain is meaningless, focus on the task at hand, I am not defenseless." ordered Bastila. Anakin observed Bastila's starfighter as it was getting pulled in by a now working tractorbeam, "good, good, come to me my prey." Anakin made his way to the hangar where he would be waiting for Bastila, he closed off that hangar so no one could intrude on the fight.
"I've been waiting for you milady, we meet at last." told Anakin as Bastila landed, "You and your battle meditation would be a great asset for me... Come to the Dark Side."
"I've been there, Skywalker." replied Bastila "I will never go back."
"So be it." told Anakin as he ignited his blue and red sabers. Bastila ignited here yellow doublesaber and entered a fierce battle with the most powerful Sith Lord of all time.
"Attention spacers... enemy fighters coming your way." warned an officer.
"This is where the fun begins." told Han "Chewie, pilot this thing while I take the gun turrets." ordered Han. Chewie roared back. A large space battle had started while both sides had lazers blazing all over the place. "LEIA THERE'S A FIGHTER ON YOUR BACK!!" screamed Luke.
"I can't shake `im." replied Leia. Han fired a persice shot at the wing of the Tie Fighter and it landed on the station. "Thank's stud." thanked Leia.
"Anytime, toots" replied Han.
"I've found the trench" annonced Gold Leader "We're making our run"
"Cover me, I'm on the leader." ordered Moordenaar in her new Tie Advanced X-1.
"Yes Ma'am."
Moordenaar and her generals picked Gold Squadron off one by one.
In the hangar, the battle between Bastila and Anakin continued. There was a pause in the battle, Anakin's head peered of in the direction of the trench. "They've found it, Sith Lord." told Bastila "The trench, it's only a matter of time"
"You can surrender and die with some dignity." suggested Anakin.
"If I die, I will become more powerful than you can possibly imagine." replied Bastila. Then the duel continued. Anakin cut Bastila's saber in half but both sides still worked. Bastila kicked Anakin down and knocked him out. She stroke up to him and was ready to end it all. "You can still join me in the darkness." said a voice very familiar to Bastila.
"Revan?"
"Yes, my love, I've been pulling his strings, join me."
"You can be redeemed... Please."
"You were the one who got me into taking my mantle back."
"You chose to accept, I'll bet if you made the correct decision on Rakata Prime, you would be asking me to come to the light."
"Do you know how hard I've worked to have the Sith rule the galaxy again?"
"You are not the one ruling, Revan."
"You're right."
"PLEASE!!! I beg of you come back to the light, for me... My love."
Revan paused for a moment and closed his eyes, "You would still believe I can be redeemed? You still love me?"
"No one is out of that range."
"I cannot... Saviour... Conqueror... Hero... Villan... I was all those things, I chose darkness..."
"You can choose light."
"I can't... I will forever stand alone... Good-bye, my love, and may the Force be with you." After that emotional conversation, Revan disappeared, he wiped himself from existance. Bastila grabbed a Tie Fighter and flew back to Yavin IV. Anakin woke up, to see Bastila was gone, "DAMNIT!!!" he roared as he ran to the firing room to do the honors himself.
"Almost there" Red Leader said to himself, "IT'S AWAY... Negative, it didn't go in." He was then shot down by Moordenaar. Luke and Leia made their run along the trench to find stopped guns. Leia and Wedge got shot but not blown, Luke ordered them to leave for their safety. Luke evaded Moordenaar's aiming systems very well. She managed to get a shot off, but it grazed the wing. Luke looked at that wing to find no astromech droid on the wing, "Good-riddance." Luke said to himself.
"WHAT!?" yelled 3PO.
"I have you now." said Moordenaar in glee, but one of her generals were shot down.
"YEE-HA!!!"
"Look out!" One Tie Fighter grazed Moordenaar's wing causing her to be set off course.
"You're all clear kid" told Han "Now let's blow this thing and go home." Luke took a deep breath and fired a cluster of missles. They all went down the service pipe and to the reactor. Luke exhaled and retreated. "Great shot, kid, that was one in a million!" congratulated Han. Seconds later, the Death Star blew up.
Back on Yavin IV everyone cheered for Luke's success, while Han and Leia shared a kiss. "Oh no, R2... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" screamed 3PO in deep sadness. Then followed an award ceremony where everone who survived were awarded medals for their Bravery and Valour.
An SW fanfic, written by Revanscool: Hardcore Hockey/Led Zeppelin/Scarface/Full Metal Jacket/Mortal Kombat/Star Wars/KotOR fan!
I hope that you all enjoyed, and stay tuned for the first chapter of my brand new fanfic: Knights of the Old Republic 3: The Second Sith War.
What's with all the R2 bashing?
Anyway nice ending Chapter. I was hoping for a duel between Bastila and Vader, but oh well. I was sad to see R2 die, but I suppose that is his punishment for being insulting.
I'm looking foward to your next Fic and I hope it is written well (I have no ideas for a Fic at the moment).
PS. I also like The Beatles.
No offense, but like it's still not finished...And some contents need to be enriched, esp. the end. A little loose outta there.
Well this was the fanfic I wrote when I had two posts and a Scarface avatar.